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I'm a degenerate and I'm proud. say it with me now."I'm a degenerate and I'm proud"louder"IM A DEGENERATE AND IM PROUD"
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The idea is certainly unique and the story itself is pretty good. The grammar however definitely needs work.Especially Sasukes fall into the rabbit hole is pretty well made.sone suggestions: Longterm I can imagine Naruto (Naruko), Gaara, Kiba, Itachi, Kakashi and even Orochimaru and Kabuto to be the other "benefactors".Naruto already has experience posing as a woman and would definitely want to keep up with his rival. (maybe in the future they could even fight for MCs affection.Gaara would just need an item to get enough beauty sleep.Kiba ever the competitive "Alpha male" would notice Sasukes changes (especially his smell) and demand to be in on it.Itachi would an item to cure his sickness and when both him and his brother find out about Danzo/Tobi/Madara etc they would happily work together.Kakashi is already a pervert he just needs a guiding hand.Orochimaru basically changed his gender already at the end and Kabuto can getva new purpose from the MC.Oh and Nagato has a female pain-puppet right?Deidara, Hidan & Sasori could work too.As for normal girls I personally don't mind the mixup. Girls like Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Tayuya, Guren, Samui, Konan and Tsunade could be interesting. I just hope you concentrate on the Naruto-world.
Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel
You know what they say, every hole is a goal. What has the world come to? I don’t know who invented the first trap in anime but look what you’ve done.
shameless author review! please read my story and enjoy my fellow femboy loversit's not gay if they look like womans!
É isso mesmo, eu tô aqui. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm a degenerate and I'm proud. say it with me now."I'm a degenerate and I'm proud"louder"IM A DEGENERATE AND IM PROUD"
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The idea is certainly unique and the story itself is pretty good. The grammar however definitely needs work.Especially Sasukes fall into the rabbit hole is pretty well made.sone suggestions: Longterm I can imagine Naruto (Naruko), Gaara, Kiba, Itachi, Kakashi and even Orochimaru and Kabuto to be the other "benefactors".Naruto already has experience posing as a woman and would definitely want to keep up with his rival. (maybe in the future they could even fight for MCs affection.Gaara would just need an item to get enough beauty sleep.Kiba ever the competitive "Alpha male" would notice Sasukes changes (especially his smell) and demand to be in on it.Itachi would an item to cure his sickness and when both him and his brother find out about Danzo/Tobi/Madara etc they would happily work together.Kakashi is already a pervert he just needs a guiding hand.Orochimaru basically changed his gender already at the end and Kabuto can getva new purpose from the MC.Oh and Nagato has a female pain-puppet right?Deidara, Hidan & Sasori could work too.As for normal girls I personally don't mind the mixup. Girls like Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Tayuya, Guren, Samui, Konan and Tsunade could be interesting. I just hope you concentrate on the Naruto-world.
Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel
You know what they say, every hole is a goal. What has the world come to? I don’t know who invented the first trap in anime but look what you’ve done.
shameless author review! please read my story and enjoy my fellow femboy loversit's not gay if they look like womans!
I think the author is dead, I really want it to finish.