Soul land : Rise of Family

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Death_Knot

I must say, the effort put into this work reflects a genuine commitment to quality and creativity. The writing is clear, and the ideas are well-organized. The attention to detail is evident, and the depth of research adds credibility to the content. Of course, like any piece of work, there's always room for improvement. While the overall structure is solid, there might be opportunities to enhance certain sections for a more engaging and compelling narrative. Additionally, considering alternative perspectives and incorporating constructive criticism can lead to a more well-rounded outcome in future endeavors. In conclusion, this work is a commendable effort, showcasing dedication and a passion for the subject matter. It's a stepping stone for growth, and by embracing feedback and continuously honing skills, future projects are bound to reach even greater heights.

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Divinenature

Please keep going. This is one of the most amazing fan fic i have read for soul land. Family building also good. One of the most thing i like about this book is the way you introduce the cheat for mc. Spoiler Aleart ITS NOT A SYSTEM.

This good novel and have lot of character development and I am hooked to it ..... i only request is pls continue releasing chapters .... finding a good clan building book is difficult now a days

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Kwetzal_Lag

That fanfic you read, get hooked, binge, and suddenly you are waiting and checking every day for new chapters.

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Nitrox2

I don't like the quality of the translation. There is too many error in the first 2 chapter that i couldn't appreciate the novel. Perfect exemple of a machine translated novel edited by someone who doesn't have english as his primary langage. Ps : English isn't my primary langage...

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Battledroid

Hi! I have seen every Soul Land fanfic (even untranslated). And, finaly, something new! Building a new clan is a simple idea, but every fic author was too focused on canon treasures and characters to notice its potential. I would like to say thank you for this fresh air for Douluo univers fans![img=update][img=recommend]

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Basit_Nisar

Finally a clan building fanfic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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baby_dragon123

this is one of the best stories i have read on this platform and one of the best ff of soul land. it has great world building, great clan building which alot of authors dont do. great job author-san and please keep up the good work.

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Daoist0QYpCx

Bro keep going ..... what a good novel and it has good plot + good clan building..... pls , don't stop releasing chapter .... i will donate power stones daily

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CountDraculaTepes

Please continue. Don't stop writing. Please continue. Don't stop writing. Please continue. Don't stop writing. Please continue. Don't stop writing. Please continue. Don't stop writing. Please continue. Don't stop writing.

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Darkiling

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Gency_Nda

Amazing. Hope you are not going to drop it and update frequently.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]