Seven Nation Army

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Captain_Sadistic

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

LV 11

Yuno_Jiro

Good book that has a ton of references from the author's past along with the city or country they're probably from. You can tell that they wanted to create a strong bond amongst the characters, despite them being separated for a long time and I think I like that the most about this book. 9.4/10. Great read, be sure to thank the author in the comments!✨

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Captain_Sadistic

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The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

The backstory is really interesting. The character's too feel relatable. Volume-01 had so many good moments I don't know where to even start. Looking forward to volume-02.

This story is pretty good. Even though it has a few grammatical errors but they aren't so bad that it stops you from enjoying the story. The character, the world, the plot, everything's really great.

LV 4

LAZYHEAD

Personally, it has a good plot and strangely it has a similar problem to my novel which is grammatical errors, nevertheless, it's good looking forward for more chapters

My friend is writing the story. I can't believe that it's his 1st time writing a story. for real man, you're great. I mean it's not even your 1st language. Good job man.

The story has a pretty good plot. The 1st few chapters were a little rough around the edges and short but after chapter 16 or so the quality of the story suddenly jumps up. Looking forward to volume 02

Pretty cool. Ilike the characters and the plot. Both are really cool. This novel has a lot of potential so i'm looking forward to reading it more

The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

LV 3

Albinus_istamar

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

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Ranch64

Actually, there are a few grammatical errors and you keep switching from present tense and past tense. But nevertheless, this story has great potential. I waiting for more chapters.

LV 5

PinkieLicious

I'm gonna fight 'em offA seven nation army couldn't hold me backThey're gonna rip it offTakin' their time right behind my backAnd I'm talkin' to myself at nightBecause I can't forgetBack and forth through my mindBehind a cigaretteAnd the message comin' from my eyesSays, "Leave it alone"Don't wanna hear about itEvery single one's got a story to tellEveryone knows about itFrom the Queen of England to the Hounds of HellAnd if I catch it comin' back my wayI'm gonna serve it to youAnd that ain't what you want to hearBut that's what I'll doAnd the feelin' comin' from my bonesSays, "Find a home"I'm goin' to WichitaFar from this opera forevermoreI'm gonna work the strawMake the sweat drip out of every poreAnd I'm bleedin', and I'm bleedin', and I'm bleedin'Right before the LordAll the words are gonna bleed from meAnd I will think no moreAnd the stains comin' from my bloodTell me, "Go back home"

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M0M0KA

It's a well thought up story! The interactions, the world background, the characters, all of them are interesting! The first chapter might be a bit short, but it improves the more you go! I had fun reading through it!

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sdefsdfa

The detailing done to the course of events is amazing. It is one of the most difficult aspect in writing and the author has done it great, especially in military settings. The language is good and fluent. Just reading it felt like watching a movie. It's good. I hope the author uploads more chapters.

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MasterOfGuardians

the story seems interesting, and it has a lot of potential. except some minor 6, it will turn out great in the long time.

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MS_Studio_3460

the story has a great start and a lot of potential