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Read up to Chapter 20 and about to give up. As another review has mentioned, the ML is well... chauvinistic. He (and his dad and kinda also his mom) has been gas lighting the FL as if she's the only one who has made a mistake. He and his dad pretty much think that infidelity is acceptable because ML is a man, but ML loses his mind thinking FL betrayed him with his friend. He has also not shown any changes from the main point of conflict with FL to two years after. FL so far has been interchangeably strong then weak/naive. Grammar is ok; you can still follow what's going on. I wonder if there will be improvement in the story and characters but I don't know if I can read until the end to find out.
The story was great but quite infuriating at the beginning, but alas it was worth the read. I think the author is on a strong path and can develop stories quite well but just needs a bit more practice
VERY DISAPPONTED... IN A WORLD WHERE WE NEED TO INSTILL SUPPORT FOR WOMEN AND CONDEMN CHEATING... THIS STORY ONCE AGAIN SAID MEN CHEATAND GETAWAY WITH IT. WHAT? JUST FUN? UTTER BULLSHIT. REALLY MEED TO PUT FUL STOP TO MEN’S USELESS CHAUVINISTIC THOUGHTS. KUDOS TO AUTHOR. GOOD WORK...
Great novel! I really enjoyed reading a heart-wrenching book of love, envy, evil, and forgiveness. The story was written well; I can hardly put it down.
I enjoy the content . Story line keeps me intrigued It has passion ,Intensity .
valery is a resl stupid and vulnerable to scheming people. maybe she is too naive. but i like damian's resolute pursuit good work author.
amazing storyline top-notch writing I love this book and it's definitely worth it
I hope that Valerie makes the right choice. Cheating is hard to forgive but forgiving is always the best way to free one's self🫂The story is good and it is progressing well. I will be waiting for more chapters author. And All the best in the contest💝
three chapters in and i'm already hooked! hoping to see more of valerie's strong FL character, and please please make damian even more regretful for what he did
A pretty solid book , I can see it shaping into something very beautiful 🔥🔥 I'm excited for more🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 definitely recommend it to everyone
its quite interesting and captivating nice job author can't wait for more updates
Female leads are my favorite genre. And this book fished in all the qualities of a very good FL book. I recommend!💯
Great work of art keep it up.I feel it's a masterpiece in the making and with time and hard work I see it becoming a Webnovel hit.Keep the chapters coming
Well Done Author. I love how you set the first chapter. That made me intrigued to read more. I love Damien. He is incorrigible and makes me burst out with laughter. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Cheers!!!
Damian is an *ss, that's all I gotta say. But overall, this is a good book! There were no grammatical errors or anything that could’ve ruin the reader’s enjoyment. Truly a marvelous book! Please keep up the good work!
I love the story of this book, it makes me remember my past BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA so I wish that the characters here will have a happy ending. I love Danielle so cute! Keep up the good work author!
Read up to Chapter 20 and about to give up. As another review has mentioned, the ML is well... chauvinistic. He (and his dad and kinda also his mom) has been gas lighting the FL as if she's the only one who has made a mistake. He and his dad pretty much think that infidelity is acceptable because ML is a man, but ML loses his mind thinking FL betrayed him with his friend. He has also not shown any changes from the main point of conflict with FL to two years after. FL so far has been interchangeably strong then weak/naive. Grammar is ok; you can still follow what's going on. I wonder if there will be improvement in the story and characters but I don't know if I can read until the end to find out.
The story was great but quite infuriating at the beginning, but alas it was worth the read. I think the author is on a strong path and can develop stories quite well but just needs a bit more practice
VERY DISAPPONTED... IN A WORLD WHERE WE NEED TO INSTILL SUPPORT FOR WOMEN AND CONDEMN CHEATING... THIS STORY ONCE AGAIN SAID MEN CHEATAND GETAWAY WITH IT. WHAT? JUST FUN? UTTER BULLSHIT. REALLY MEED TO PUT FUL STOP TO MEN’S USELESS CHAUVINISTIC THOUGHTS. KUDOS TO AUTHOR. GOOD WORK...
Great novel! I really enjoyed reading a heart-wrenching book of love, envy, evil, and forgiveness. The story was written well; I can hardly put it down.
I enjoy the content . Story line keeps me intrigued It has passion ,Intensity .
valery is a resl stupid and vulnerable to scheming people. maybe she is too naive. but i like damian's resolute pursuit good work author.
amazing storyline top-notch writing I love this book and it's definitely worth it
I hope that Valerie makes the right choice. Cheating is hard to forgive but forgiving is always the best way to free one's self🫂The story is good and it is progressing well. I will be waiting for more chapters author. And All the best in the contest💝
three chapters in and i'm already hooked! hoping to see more of valerie's strong FL character, and please please make damian even more regretful for what he did
A pretty solid book , I can see it shaping into something very beautiful 🔥🔥 I'm excited for more🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 definitely recommend it to everyone
its quite interesting and captivating nice job author can't wait for more updates
Female leads are my favorite genre. And this book fished in all the qualities of a very good FL book. I recommend!💯
Great work of art keep it up.I feel it's a masterpiece in the making and with time and hard work I see it becoming a Webnovel hit.Keep the chapters coming
Well Done Author. I love how you set the first chapter. That made me intrigued to read more. I love Damien. He is incorrigible and makes me burst out with laughter. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Cheers!!!
Damian is an *ss, that's all I gotta say. But overall, this is a good book! There were no grammatical errors or anything that could’ve ruin the reader’s enjoyment. Truly a marvelous book! Please keep up the good work!
I love the story of this book, it makes me remember my past BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA so I wish that the characters here will have a happy ending. I love Danielle so cute! Keep up the good work author!
I am in love with this storyline... You did a good job.