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Honestly Ive never been this engrossed in a fanfic. I have been on my toes and kept in suspense throughout the story, I left 4 stars for one catagory due to it having been a month since the last update (forgive me I’m just a little sad I ran out of chapters to read), all in all its a good story and I do hope you continue it. Would make my year honestly.
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Absolutely amazing my only gripe is that you should change the cover art because the current one makes it seem like it is smut.
This fanfic is excellent, we can see that the author develops the characters very well, and how the MC's deeds trigger butterfly effects, changing the entire history of the shinobi world.
I think it's one of the best naruto fanfics I've read. I love these kinds of topics and it's going very well right now. Can you update more frequently?
One of the best Naruto fanfic. It gave justice to Naruto's character, although him being a loner seems a bit off(especially in his own clan). However this fanfic is so good and adorable, Naruto and Tsunade's relationship is very cuteeee. But don't misunderstand it as just a slice of life and sweet fanfic, it have good action scenes and heavy scenes too. Overall it's very good and the best, give it a try you'll not regret it.
great book, I was confused since I saw no comments, and I thought I stumbled upon a hidden jem(I didn't look at the amount of reads it has). 10/10.
A story with a soul and a Naruto-vibe All too often, fan fiction lacks that little something, that X ingredient, that gives a story its charm and character. This story absolutely has it. The childlike yet serious energy, the cute moments and the tragic ones, a story that feels real and is influenced by the actions of the MC and his relationship with others (not to spoil too much, but in this story the dynamic between the Uchiha clan and the village is healthier, and in a very explainable and natural way). I hope this is just the beginning, and that we'll have a long and exciting story, so far it's all good, the only thing to note is that it's quite sentimental, but it's done in a good way and makes the story healthier, so I'd recommend reading it even for people who think it's not their cup of tea. Oh, and did I mention it's well written?
This is a great Fan Fic.... , The Mc and the other important shinobis have a background and I think that Sybife, is making a good use of it, they have motivations, and they can get angry, obfuscated, sad or leave everything else to focus on their most important thing, and it is writed in a way that make me feel connected with their joys and sorrows. About the writing, Sybife doesn't make mistakes and the quality is therefore Excellent. Finally if we talk about the development of the History and if there are tangible changes?, the answer is that there is a butterfly effect, and that is just in the C63, and it is a young timeline, so when the shippuden ark arrives we would be seeing an history of Naruto that is not a copy following in a blind way the original. I am excited to know more about this timeline from Sybife mindscape.
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well so far its interesting and i am giving 5 star because i want to see this fanfic to have 5 clean stars its quite unique...................
first review, so I'll give 5 star. I haven't finished all the available chapters yet, but I went ahead since I have noticed a couple of words missing a letter. I figured I'd let you know so that if you want me to, I can go through and try to flag any typos I notice with a comment. Trying not to be annoying by doing so without notice.
very good and nice plot not available this type of good plot in webnovel and i like this pairing very much and your writing is also good annd pleaseeee fully complete this according to your time pleaseeeeeee
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Great story cannot wait to see how it will turn out.................................................................. .. ......,................................................
What is not to like here? Your grammar and pacing both are good. The characters interaction is beautiful, be it Naruto and Tsunade or Naruto and Mito or Naruto and Tobirama. Well done author, keep em coming 🙂
what can I say, this is just a masterpiece. The plot is very exciting and unlike any other. I sincerely hope that the author will not abandon this wonderful work.
I really like the idea of naruto being born as uchiha and even becoming Madars grandchild. I just hope he will fall in love with Tsunade. ❤❤❤
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never puts any letter from Chinese or Japanese in a fanfic, they just cause trouble since 80% of Webnovel owned by a chinese company. ♠️
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Honestly Ive never been this engrossed in a fanfic. I have been on my toes and kept in suspense throughout the story, I left 4 stars for one catagory due to it having been a month since the last update (forgive me I’m just a little sad I ran out of chapters to read), all in all its a good story and I do hope you continue it. Would make my year honestly.
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Absolutely amazing my only gripe is that you should change the cover art because the current one makes it seem like it is smut.
This fanfic is excellent, we can see that the author develops the characters very well, and how the MC's deeds trigger butterfly effects, changing the entire history of the shinobi world.
I think it's one of the best naruto fanfics I've read. I love these kinds of topics and it's going very well right now. Can you update more frequently?
One of the best Naruto fanfic. It gave justice to Naruto's character, although him being a loner seems a bit off(especially in his own clan). However this fanfic is so good and adorable, Naruto and Tsunade's relationship is very cuteeee. But don't misunderstand it as just a slice of life and sweet fanfic, it have good action scenes and heavy scenes too. Overall it's very good and the best, give it a try you'll not regret it.
great book, I was confused since I saw no comments, and I thought I stumbled upon a hidden jem(I didn't look at the amount of reads it has). 10/10.
A story with a soul and a Naruto-vibe All too often, fan fiction lacks that little something, that X ingredient, that gives a story its charm and character. This story absolutely has it. The childlike yet serious energy, the cute moments and the tragic ones, a story that feels real and is influenced by the actions of the MC and his relationship with others (not to spoil too much, but in this story the dynamic between the Uchiha clan and the village is healthier, and in a very explainable and natural way). I hope this is just the beginning, and that we'll have a long and exciting story, so far it's all good, the only thing to note is that it's quite sentimental, but it's done in a good way and makes the story healthier, so I'd recommend reading it even for people who think it's not their cup of tea. Oh, and did I mention it's well written?
This is a great Fan Fic.... , The Mc and the other important shinobis have a background and I think that Sybife, is making a good use of it, they have motivations, and they can get angry, obfuscated, sad or leave everything else to focus on their most important thing, and it is writed in a way that make me feel connected with their joys and sorrows. About the writing, Sybife doesn't make mistakes and the quality is therefore Excellent. Finally if we talk about the development of the History and if there are tangible changes?, the answer is that there is a butterfly effect, and that is just in the C63, and it is a young timeline, so when the shippuden ark arrives we would be seeing an history of Naruto that is not a copy following in a blind way the original. I am excited to know more about this timeline from Sybife mindscape.
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Spoiler enthüllen well so far its interesting and i am giving 5 star because i want to see this fanfic to have 5 clean stars its quite unique...................
first review, so I'll give 5 star. I haven't finished all the available chapters yet, but I went ahead since I have noticed a couple of words missing a letter. I figured I'd let you know so that if you want me to, I can go through and try to flag any typos I notice with a comment. Trying not to be annoying by doing so without notice.
very good and nice plot not available this type of good plot in webnovel and i like this pairing very much and your writing is also good annd pleaseeee fully complete this according to your time pleaseeeeeee
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Great story cannot wait to see how it will turn out.................................................................. .. ......,................................................
What is not to like here? Your grammar and pacing both are good. The characters interaction is beautiful, be it Naruto and Tsunade or Naruto and Mito or Naruto and Tobirama. Well done author, keep em coming 🙂
what can I say, this is just a masterpiece. The plot is very exciting and unlike any other. I sincerely hope that the author will not abandon this wonderful work.
I really like the idea of naruto being born as uchiha and even becoming Madars grandchild. I just hope he will fall in love with Tsunade. ❤❤❤
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never puts any letter from Chinese or Japanese in a fanfic, they just cause trouble since 80% of Webnovel owned by a chinese company. ♠️
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Definitely a great read.Can wait for more chapters