Kapitel 1: A Crimson Dawn (Rewritten)
As the view zooms in, we follow a young boy named Zero, the would-be heir of a multimillionaire oil tycoon, the only issue is that he was a bastard child. Though his father was the wealthy Johnny Falcon, and unfortunately his deceased mother a lowly maid who died in childbirth. The only good thing in his life was the tiniest bit of love his father had for him, considering he would give him and if the kind maid was on duty he would get a full meal, which was the only good thing he was able to eat other than the mush of leftovers he would be given by his step mother.
But things took a turn for the better when his father's brother Jack came from abroad and for once in Zero's life, someone treated him as a human. Jack came and saw the treatment of Zero and immediately took him in with his fiance Jill. Zero finally got to experience the luxury of having parents.
But every good thing has to come to an end.
Zero is now 18 years old, with his adoptive father Jack and his fiance Jill. Now, as an adopted son of Jack, he became an elder sibling of twins Ariell and Giselle, and with his now family, Zero finally felt at the top of the world. Although he lost his right to his biological father's tycoon, he was now in line as the young master of Jack's Automotive Company.
Yet with all the good thing in his life, darkness awaited him. As his biological father Jhonny drove on his way home from a business trip, he got into a car incident, and he unfortunatly died.
Day after Jhonny's funeral
At the family mansion, everyone was having a meal: Zero along with his family and Patricia Jhonny's wife and their jkids all sat before a lawyer.
Jack and Patricia sat around a large dining table. The atmosphere was tense, and Patricia couldn't hide her greediness over the inheritance.
Lawyer:"Patricia, I understand this is a difficult time for you, and I want to be as clear as possible. After thoroughly reviewing your late husband's will, I must inform you that he did not make any amendments or changes to it before his passing. According to the will, all of his possessions, assets, and estate have been left to his oldest child. I know this may come as a surprise, but legally, we must respect the document as it stands. If you have any questions or need further clarification, I'm here to help you through this process."
Patricia: (angrily) I can't believe Johnny left everything to Jack! I should be the one running Falcon Enterprises, not him.
Jack: (calmly) Patricia, this was Johnny's decision. We should respect it.
Patricia: (snidely) Respect? You stole my husband's love, and now you've stolen his empire too.
Zero, who had been silent, finally spoke up.
Zero: (softly) Aunt Patricia, I understand you're upset, but we're family now. We should support each other.
Patricia scoffed but said nothing. The tension lingered, and Jack tried to change the subject.
Jack: (smiling at Zero) Speaking of family, we have a celebration to attend tomorrow. It's Falcon Enterprises' anniversary, and Zero will officially be introduced as the heir.
Jill: (enthusiastically) It's a big day for all of us! We should be proud.
Ariell: (rolling her eyes) As if Zero did anything to deserve it.
Zero lowered his gaze, used to Ariell's constant disdain. However, he was determined to prove himself.
The next day, at the extravagant anniversary celebration, the Falcon family mingled with high-profile guests. Zero, dressed in a sleek suit, felt the weight of the expectations on his shoulders. Patricia continued to cast disapproving glances, making it clear she thought Zero was unworthy.
As the night progressed, a mysterious figure approached Zero.
Mysterious Figure: (whispering) You might be the heir on paper, but you need to earn their respect.
Zero: {Isnt that the maid who helped me back before Jack entered my life} NOO WAYY I must be losing it she was fired when that bastard realised she treated him like a human being.
AS Zero continued to dooze off, he awoke to screaming, listening to the harmony of screams reigning from every corner of the mansion. AHHHHHHHHHH he heard a even loader scream
Zero: Wait isnt that Father, I have to goooo help him. AS he ran out the room he ran toward the living room.
AS Zero ran out into th common area his eyes immediatly fell onto the tragic sight of his sibling on the floor blood flashed all over the room as he witnesses a shadowy figure to slash his uncles throat blood spreading everywhere as a drop splurted onto his face he began screamingggg
Zero: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH all while a figure behind him stabbed him in his back.
As he fell on the floor, he wondered if he listened to his father, Jhonny, that he should kill himself now and live his life destined for failure perhaps not, but probabky, if i did, Jack and his family would not have to die this way. As his head turned, he fell on the image of the man who killed him He witnessed him about to stab his face.
Zero: With the last amount of energy he ha sreamed oout his last breath AHHHHHHHHHH
Wöchentlicher Energiestatus
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Rangliste 
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Stein