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it's okay for those who like mc with a villain personality (treats woman as his plaything, loves toying with them, has brainwashing, we'll what to expect from a degenerate system owned by someone who has sadistic nature as it became worst as chaps. goes by). writing quality- just average 3 ⭐ characters design- mc is 2⭐ for my own taste story development- its okay 4 ⭐ update stability- 4 ⭐ world background-what to expect its naruto so 5 ⭐
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.
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Great Fanfic. The writing and pacing seems smooth flowing, the updates are consistent, the characters are portrayed very well, especially the MC, even though he's does degenerate actions, they seem to fall right into his character instead of seeming out of place. Overall, a very Solid Fanfic. Should read it
HIGHLY RECOMMEND This story is just epic. Doesn't overly focuses on one things, the plot keeps rotating, the strength increase for MC aren't out of the blue, the lemons are generously spaced and don't seem awkward (are a bit extreme tho) overall, a very high quality FanFiction.
Hey, I just finished reading this awesome Naruto fanfic! It's got everything I love - character growth, a solid plot, and even some spicy lemon scenes. But here's the best part: the author knows how to balance it all out. The lemon chapters aren't crammed in or awkwardly placed. They're spaced out perfectly, so it never feels forced or excessive. And let me tell you, the main character's growth is on point. No random power boosts here. It's all clearly explained, making them strong but still with room to grow. Compared to other overpowered characters in the Naruto world, they're considered weak, but with loads of potential.
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The idea is good, the plot is good, simple backstory of main character. It is recommended novel to read and spend your time. Keep going author, you did great job
it may not be an Chinese fic, but the author seems to be inspired by Chinese fic so much that this fic is at the same level of a Chinese Fic
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I believe in fairness as such this review given to balance out the full five star review that author gave to his own work. Go check out other people reviews.
It's not for me. The author says it's not a Chinese ff but it basically is as the diction and ideas used are in the Chinese fiction niche. There doesn't seem to be a proper build up of a story and is more of a wish fulfillment if anything, with the addition of a Chinese flare
Writing is good, Development is at a decent pace (need more chapters to see), character design is preety good, updating is the problem as author said only 2-3 chaps a week, still OK if author doesn't drop this, world background is good too, author explained the AU in detail.Overall, a good read.
Pretty sure this could be a translation cause they’re is so many Chinese fanfic things in this that it’s unbearable.
Good, but Chakra is an alien energy from the kaguya clan Formed by a combination of physical (Yang) and spiritual (Yin) energy , the planet does not generate Chakra but natural energy, in fact there is even a rejection of the planet to Chakra (The difficulty of the wise way), the natural energy rejects the Chakra
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it's okay for those who like mc with a villain personality (treats woman as his plaything, loves toying with them, has brainwashing, we'll what to expect from a degenerate system owned by someone who has sadistic nature as it became worst as chaps. goes by). writing quality- just average 3 ⭐ characters design- mc is 2⭐ for my own taste story development- its okay 4 ⭐ update stability- 4 ⭐ world background-what to expect its naruto so 5 ⭐
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.
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Great Fanfic. The writing and pacing seems smooth flowing, the updates are consistent, the characters are portrayed very well, especially the MC, even though he's does degenerate actions, they seem to fall right into his character instead of seeming out of place. Overall, a very Solid Fanfic. Should read it
HIGHLY RECOMMEND This story is just epic. Doesn't overly focuses on one things, the plot keeps rotating, the strength increase for MC aren't out of the blue, the lemons are generously spaced and don't seem awkward (are a bit extreme tho) overall, a very high quality FanFiction.
Hey, I just finished reading this awesome Naruto fanfic! It's got everything I love - character growth, a solid plot, and even some spicy lemon scenes. But here's the best part: the author knows how to balance it all out. The lemon chapters aren't crammed in or awkwardly placed. They're spaced out perfectly, so it never feels forced or excessive. And let me tell you, the main character's growth is on point. No random power boosts here. It's all clearly explained, making them strong but still with room to grow. Compared to other overpowered characters in the Naruto world, they're considered weak, but with loads of potential.
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The idea is good, the plot is good, simple backstory of main character. It is recommended novel to read and spend your time. Keep going author, you did great job
it may not be an Chinese fic, but the author seems to be inspired by Chinese fic so much that this fic is at the same level of a Chinese Fic
it is good ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I believe in fairness as such this review given to balance out the full five star review that author gave to his own work. Go check out other people reviews.
It's not for me. The author says it's not a Chinese ff but it basically is as the diction and ideas used are in the Chinese fiction niche. There doesn't seem to be a proper build up of a story and is more of a wish fulfillment if anything, with the addition of a Chinese flare
Writing is good, Development is at a decent pace (need more chapters to see), character design is preety good, updating is the problem as author said only 2-3 chaps a week, still OK if author doesn't drop this, world background is good too, author explained the AU in detail.Overall, a good read.
Pretty sure this could be a translation cause they’re is so many Chinese fanfic things in this that it’s unbearable.
Good, but Chakra is an alien energy from the kaguya clan Formed by a combination of physical (Yang) and spiritual (Yin) energy , the planet does not generate Chakra but natural energy, in fact there is even a rejection of the planet to Chakra (The difficulty of the wise way), the natural energy rejects the Chakra