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I really like this story a lot, its a masterpiece in my opinion tho i am little sad that the story finished, looking forward to other storys u make
Дикая хуйня, автор не знает Марвел, умирают только статисты, гг туп как пробка, это ещё не говоря про временный экстремис когда у него уже была сыворотка нормальногл
It's a ff with alchemy, I already liked it for that reason, and it's well done, that's enough for me..........................................
well first of all the MC is too greedy and then the plot is a disappointment and somehow the MC is also forgot the plot where before MC said he know the plot
it started bad but got better , now though it's just a edgy character murdering everyone becuause they were mind controlled by 'HE' who ever the F that may be ( probably another reincarnatred person or some time Bs Fery anyway the idea is good but the execution is terriable. the character has no morals but he isn't smart enough to be a villain. over power just because he has a cheat and plot armour
Unreadable. I broke down after several chapter from the consistent "thinking" (write 'thoughts' and "talking", or at least separate between them somehow). It's much more troubling with the gigantic paragraphs, the usage of weird wording (like 'perishable plants' instead of vegetables), and rly? just read ch.01 and see for yourself what I mean. More than that? 10%+ of this ff is word-dump (like repeating 'previous chapter' last paragraphs every chapter ; copy-paste items/skills info ; repeating descriptions of same things ; etc). Plain weird ff. From the mellow transition of a transmigrated 'young' (like it's the most obvious thing) to the mellow reveal it's marvel, and going into scenarios like MC beating a ninja, incoherent system, lack of info (like describing time in percentage, the f### is that? it's not translation problem, it's just something else). The upside of this ff? I read (mostly by writer' comments) that it was thought-trough work, so, I guess there's a 'bigger plan' and 'planned system workout' [But I can only guess it's also the downfall of this ff, as it fail as a flowing story where the reader can immerse himself in]. If you do wish to be a writer, and this is not just a way for you, a foreign-language-chemistry-student to find a fun way to train in English, then please at least edit your chapters (how do you think we readers feel when you ignore legitimate comments who already told you the problems you got since the first paragraph?), or even more, try to create a story, not just a 'systematic plan' (I mean, 'ff logic' is fine, as long the story is fun. We readers can skip the nonsense, but it got to have immersion and flow).
It’s okay, the Author tries to use a new and “unique” mana system when it really just sucks. The MC has stated he knows the MCU and in the next chapter conveniently forgets all of his meta knowledge, the story doesn’t really have a direction. Read this if you just want to turn your brain off and kill time.
Don't waste you time. The author wants to write a marvel fanfic but knows nothing about marvel. His escuse is the MC doesn't know anything about marvel. He is ignorant and dumb.
Main character with no background goes into a world he doesn't understand BUT he is not alone! The author also doesn't understand Marvel either. Time line is broken in the first couple chapters. Never explains the system or anything of the sort. it's just a waste to read. My suggestion? Find a different story.
good.......................................................................................................................................!
VERY GOOD..................................................................................................................................!
it's surprisingly good if not fast paced the author avoids MC having any kind of meaningful conversation and connection with anyone . could've been better
does he have no meta knowledge????? please verify sometimes he knows about things like shield but sometimes he doesn't know like who won between hulk and aboimination
like the book so far its a fun little read but the previously thing at the beginning of the chapters are annoying and i fill like it takes most of the chapters
The story is interesting, but it seems like a story of a single character with few interactions with others.
It's bad, just plot convenience after plot convenience, don't waste your time on this..................................................................
Great....................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story was a real surprise for me, as I don't usually read stories with systems, but this one is really good. The Mc is believably portrayed and he is not a god after 5 chapters. Grammatic is good, not perfect, but good. The story structure is well structured and you don't have the feeling that the author has no idea what to do with the story. A clear reading recommendation from my side
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Reading about a good high school student could probably be more realistic and immersive. Alchemy seems very interesting, but I think the adaptation is bad. There will surely be those who love it.
One word "Very good" ==== ==============================================÷========================================================================================
Idk why there aren't any reviews for this based on how high its quality is, it's sophisticated character and world building, as well as synergy between metaphysical abilities and the world he's in, is awe-inspiring 👏
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Awesome 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎...................................😎😎😎.................................................,.,......., .....
I really like this story a lot, its a masterpiece in my opinion tho i am little sad that the story finished, looking forward to other storys u make
Дикая хуйня, автор не знает Марвел, умирают только статисты, гг туп как пробка, это ещё не говоря про временный экстремис когда у него уже была сыворотка нормальногл
It's a ff with alchemy, I already liked it for that reason, and it's well done, that's enough for me..........................................
well first of all the MC is too greedy and then the plot is a disappointment and somehow the MC is also forgot the plot where before MC said he know the plot
it started bad but got better , now though it's just a edgy character murdering everyone becuause they were mind controlled by 'HE' who ever the F that may be ( probably another reincarnatred person or some time Bs Fery anyway the idea is good but the execution is terriable. the character has no morals but he isn't smart enough to be a villain. over power just because he has a cheat and plot armour
Unreadable. I broke down after several chapter from the consistent "thinking" (write 'thoughts' and "talking", or at least separate between them somehow). It's much more troubling with the gigantic paragraphs, the usage of weird wording (like 'perishable plants' instead of vegetables), and rly? just read ch.01 and see for yourself what I mean. More than that? 10%+ of this ff is word-dump (like repeating 'previous chapter' last paragraphs every chapter ; copy-paste items/skills info ; repeating descriptions of same things ; etc). Plain weird ff. From the mellow transition of a transmigrated 'young' (like it's the most obvious thing) to the mellow reveal it's marvel, and going into scenarios like MC beating a ninja, incoherent system, lack of info (like describing time in percentage, the f### is that? it's not translation problem, it's just something else). The upside of this ff? I read (mostly by writer' comments) that it was thought-trough work, so, I guess there's a 'bigger plan' and 'planned system workout' [But I can only guess it's also the downfall of this ff, as it fail as a flowing story where the reader can immerse himself in]. If you do wish to be a writer, and this is not just a way for you, a foreign-language-chemistry-student to find a fun way to train in English, then please at least edit your chapters (how do you think we readers feel when you ignore legitimate comments who already told you the problems you got since the first paragraph?), or even more, try to create a story, not just a 'systematic plan' (I mean, 'ff logic' is fine, as long the story is fun. We readers can skip the nonsense, but it got to have immersion and flow).
It’s okay, the Author tries to use a new and “unique” mana system when it really just sucks. The MC has stated he knows the MCU and in the next chapter conveniently forgets all of his meta knowledge, the story doesn’t really have a direction. Read this if you just want to turn your brain off and kill time.
Don't waste you time. The author wants to write a marvel fanfic but knows nothing about marvel. His escuse is the MC doesn't know anything about marvel. He is ignorant and dumb.
Main character with no background goes into a world he doesn't understand BUT he is not alone! The author also doesn't understand Marvel either. Time line is broken in the first couple chapters. Never explains the system or anything of the sort. it's just a waste to read. My suggestion? Find a different story.
good.......................................................................................................................................!
VERY GOOD..................................................................................................................................!
it's surprisingly good if not fast paced the author avoids MC having any kind of meaningful conversation and connection with anyone . could've been better
does he have no meta knowledge????? please verify sometimes he knows about things like shield but sometimes he doesn't know like who won between hulk and aboimination
like the book so far its a fun little read but the previously thing at the beginning of the chapters are annoying and i fill like it takes most of the chapters
The story is interesting, but it seems like a story of a single character with few interactions with others.
It's bad, just plot convenience after plot convenience, don't waste your time on this..................................................................
Great....................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story was a real surprise for me, as I don't usually read stories with systems, but this one is really good. The Mc is believably portrayed and he is not a god after 5 chapters. Grammatic is good, not perfect, but good. The story structure is well structured and you don't have the feeling that the author has no idea what to do with the story. A clear reading recommendation from my side
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Reading about a good high school student could probably be more realistic and immersive. Alchemy seems very interesting, but I think the adaptation is bad. There will surely be those who love it.
One word "Very good" ==== ==============================================÷========================================================================================
Idk why there aren't any reviews for this based on how high its quality is, it's sophisticated character and world building, as well as synergy between metaphysical abilities and the world he's in, is awe-inspiring 👏
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Awesome 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎...................................😎😎😎.................................................,.,......., .....