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It's not bad just not my cup of tea. Mc is very young child for far more time than I could stomach. Takes forever just to get to hogwarts. Every good bit of this is overshadowed by 2 or 3 times the amount of over descriptive text about child timeframe nonsense. Just not for me but hey give it a chance you might like it.
Thanks for the Awesome Harry Potter Fic.👍 The Writing Style,Quality&English of this Fic is Awesome. Author-san PLEASE Add all Harry Potter-[Books,Movies&Games] Contents(Plot,Characters&Unique Items) in this Fic. I would've liked It More If MC also focused on the Muggle Side of World alongside the Wizarding/Magical Side of the World like "[Money,Status,Martial Arts,Weapon Mastery,Science&Technology etc.]";I mean Its the 1990s but MC isn't taking Advantage of It at all with his Future Knowledge,Tsk. MC should also Try to Advance Wizarding World Forward along Side Muggle's Modern Era Advancements,MC should also Acquire 'Status,Power&Position' in Wizarding Britain. MC should Expose about "Rita Skeeter's Fake News Publication & Gilderoy Lockhart's Fake Exaggerative Fake Tales." MC should Maybe try Researching&Creating "Magitech(Enchantments&Runes+Magic Artifacts+Scientific Technology)" in the Future. This Fic has a lot of Potential. I ❤️ It so Far.👍
Give it a try, it's overall a good fan fiction, with a lot of potential, there are very few grammatical mistakes, and the story seems to lean toward avoiding to strictly stick with the original plot but is not that obvious yet as of chapter 45. In short MC got reincarnated in a neutral pureblood wizard family, he starts as a baby apparently but we dont see the first 6 years of his childhood, he has the ability to see "the winds of magic" and gets new "Lores" (themed spells) progressively (he learns HP magic at the same time), he isn't OP when he starts Hogward, not weak either since he can beat up most 1rst and probably even 3rd years, he studied a lot early so he has the theory but not the mana for the advanced spells yet. He actively tries to change the plot even if the changes are not too visible yet, there is a bit of humor here and there with his pet (a normal one, not a dragon...) and Hogwarts friends, the first lores he gets give spells that seem pretty dark and he ends up in slytherin but he is not a dark lord in the making, no romance yet and thankfully no sign of harem, which is normal since as of chapter 45 it's still the first year. So yeah, pretty good so far, as i say earlier, give it a try !
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I like the book and MC's personality there are instances where the story doesn't follow the cannon but considering that it's a fanfic it's understandable
The only thing i don't like aboute your novel is that you don't upload a lot so when a chapter is out i feel happy but most of the time in your chapteers you keep repiting the same thing whit refrasing it and it could have been a good quality for your novels if the chapters where a bit longer
definitely one of the better HP ff out there, the world building doesnt feel forced or rushed, the development feels natural and the concept of his unique magic system is good since it provides a boost but isnt totaly overpowered - at least not for now
Ate agora a história esta sem problemas, a escrita está boa , o personagem é legal mais não vejo o porque em todas as histórias que li o protagonista tem que se aproxima de Harry Potter e os amigos na minha opinião ele teria novos amigos sem como luna ou alguns da sonserina
It’s a nice fan-fic, the world background and the characters are both well written. The MC is an OC and that’s a big thumbs up, for now, the mc has been well developed and the story is procedine fine
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so far so good, before he go to Hogwarts it's enjoyable but when he's at Hogwarts i feel like the story begin to slow down and i don't really know about Warhammer but the magic he used is nice. it's just need more chapter and i hope the harem is not that big max 3/4
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Too little chapters to properly write a review but just going to put a 4 star out there since im a massive fan of warhammer and the potterverse myself. The only thing i hope is that the author wont write the MC to be Harry Potter's little fanboy or follow many of the other fanfic writers out there and try and "equalize" the combat power of the 2 worlds. Both worlds have their own strenghts and weaknesses. Like everyone who knows only the tiniest bit of the 2 worlds knows that Warhammer has a extremely huge power ceiling while the Harry Potter world might have more jack of all trades magic but has a extremely low power ceiling. And seeing a Nagash level Voldemort or a Sigmar level Dumbledore would just make everyone uncomfortable.
Story so far is great, no notable problem with spelling or grammar which is always a big plus, character is an OC with a good solid backstory, there's something like 40 chapters on the P A T R E O N, so hopefully updates will be consistent as well which is a win in my book, also the same Author has done great stuff in the past so I'm personally looking forward to the future of this Fic.
It will be a slow-burning, weak-to-strong story; I tried to make a faster pace than my other books. English is not my first language, but I will fix my mistakes if you point them out in the comments.
It's not bad just not my cup of tea. Mc is very young child for far more time than I could stomach. Takes forever just to get to hogwarts. Every good bit of this is overshadowed by 2 or 3 times the amount of over descriptive text about child timeframe nonsense. Just not for me but hey give it a chance you might like it.
Thanks for the Awesome Harry Potter Fic.👍 The Writing Style,Quality&English of this Fic is Awesome. Author-san PLEASE Add all Harry Potter-[Books,Movies&Games] Contents(Plot,Characters&Unique Items) in this Fic. I would've liked It More If MC also focused on the Muggle Side of World alongside the Wizarding/Magical Side of the World like "[Money,Status,Martial Arts,Weapon Mastery,Science&Technology etc.]";I mean Its the 1990s but MC isn't taking Advantage of It at all with his Future Knowledge,Tsk. MC should also Try to Advance Wizarding World Forward along Side Muggle's Modern Era Advancements,MC should also Acquire 'Status,Power&Position' in Wizarding Britain. MC should Expose about "Rita Skeeter's Fake News Publication & Gilderoy Lockhart's Fake Exaggerative Fake Tales." MC should Maybe try Researching&Creating "Magitech(Enchantments&Runes+Magic Artifacts+Scientific Technology)" in the Future. This Fic has a lot of Potential. I ❤️ It so Far.👍
Give it a try, it's overall a good fan fiction, with a lot of potential, there are very few grammatical mistakes, and the story seems to lean toward avoiding to strictly stick with the original plot but is not that obvious yet as of chapter 45. In short MC got reincarnated in a neutral pureblood wizard family, he starts as a baby apparently but we dont see the first 6 years of his childhood, he has the ability to see "the winds of magic" and gets new "Lores" (themed spells) progressively (he learns HP magic at the same time), he isn't OP when he starts Hogward, not weak either since he can beat up most 1rst and probably even 3rd years, he studied a lot early so he has the theory but not the mana for the advanced spells yet. He actively tries to change the plot even if the changes are not too visible yet, there is a bit of humor here and there with his pet (a normal one, not a dragon...) and Hogwarts friends, the first lores he gets give spells that seem pretty dark and he ends up in slytherin but he is not a dark lord in the making, no romance yet and thankfully no sign of harem, which is normal since as of chapter 45 it's still the first year. So yeah, pretty good so far, as i say earlier, give it a try !
Spoiler enthüllen I like the book and MC's personality there are instances where the story doesn't follow the cannon but considering that it's a fanfic it's understandable
The only thing i don't like aboute your novel is that you don't upload a lot so when a chapter is out i feel happy but most of the time in your chapteers you keep repiting the same thing whit refrasing it and it could have been a good quality for your novels if the chapters where a bit longer
definitely one of the better HP ff out there, the world building doesnt feel forced or rushed, the development feels natural and the concept of his unique magic system is good since it provides a boost but isnt totaly overpowered - at least not for now
Ate agora a história esta sem problemas, a escrita está boa , o personagem é legal mais não vejo o porque em todas as histórias que li o protagonista tem que se aproxima de Harry Potter e os amigos na minha opinião ele teria novos amigos sem como luna ou alguns da sonserina
It’s a nice fan-fic, the world background and the characters are both well written. The MC is an OC and that’s a big thumbs up, for now, the mc has been well developed and the story is procedine fine
Story so far is great[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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so far so good, before he go to Hogwarts it's enjoyable but when he's at Hogwarts i feel like the story begin to slow down and i don't really know about Warhammer but the magic he used is nice. it's just need more chapter and i hope the harem is not that big max 3/4
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Too little chapters to properly write a review but just going to put a 4 star out there since im a massive fan of warhammer and the potterverse myself. The only thing i hope is that the author wont write the MC to be Harry Potter's little fanboy or follow many of the other fanfic writers out there and try and "equalize" the combat power of the 2 worlds. Both worlds have their own strenghts and weaknesses. Like everyone who knows only the tiniest bit of the 2 worlds knows that Warhammer has a extremely huge power ceiling while the Harry Potter world might have more jack of all trades magic but has a extremely low power ceiling. And seeing a Nagash level Voldemort or a Sigmar level Dumbledore would just make everyone uncomfortable.
Story so far is great, no notable problem with spelling or grammar which is always a big plus, character is an OC with a good solid backstory, there's something like 40 chapters on the P A T R E O N, so hopefully updates will be consistent as well which is a win in my book, also the same Author has done great stuff in the past so I'm personally looking forward to the future of this Fic.
It will be a slow-burning, weak-to-strong story; I tried to make a faster pace than my other books. English is not my first language, but I will fix my mistakes if you point them out in the comments.
good read if nothing else 👌. I greatly enjoyed the book so far