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Ignore the haters because, honestly, this is good. Sure, it may seem wordy, but remember, just like a picture can paint a thousand words, so too can a thousand words paint a picture. Besides, cultivation is supposed to be boring, yet the author somehow makes it interesting, so sit down, shut up, and read otherwise, don't, and walk away no one's stopping you. I personally like this story, and that is all that matters.
Personally this is a 0/5 star. There is way too much shakeshakespear in this. It's like something you would write for an english class with loads of added words just to increase word count. It's so padded i cba reading it, like it's a chore, you read big paragraphs of like 50 words only to get like 10 word value, if u get what i mean. There was only 1 other novel I have dropped because of too much shake shake shakespear in it, so thankfully this is not common. Not everything needs to have 20 descriptive words for it. I'm annoyed that another yuri is ruined by something so stupid. You think I wrote a lot? If it was this author writing what I said, it would have been 5x(atleast) the length.
It's a great book, I liked it. I recommend it to anyone who likes the Xiangxia genre. A thoughtful plot, an interesting narrative. Author, thank you for the work, I wish you the best and never give up!
so dry, so bland, it's like reading a report, it feels so ai generated ( no offence ). the pacing is all over the place, like cmon cultivating for 50 plus years with nothing happening? sooo dull and monotonous, if I really wanted that i would have just lived my life. 2/5 would not recommend
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L'écriture est très intéressante. L'intrigue avance vite. Les éléments des pouvoirs sont bien discerné. Les complexité sont intéressants. Ce qui manque : Profondeur du mc. Dialogue moins mature. Scène de combat approfondie. L'amour. Réécrire ia qui répète. Manque de compréhension du mc.
Ignore the haters because, honestly, this is good. Sure, it may seem wordy, but remember, just like a picture can paint a thousand words, so too can a thousand words paint a picture. Besides, cultivation is supposed to be boring, yet the author somehow makes it interesting, so sit down, shut up, and read otherwise, don't, and walk away no one's stopping you. I personally like this story, and that is all that matters.
Personally this is a 0/5 star. There is way too much shakeshakespear in this. It's like something you would write for an english class with loads of added words just to increase word count. It's so padded i cba reading it, like it's a chore, you read big paragraphs of like 50 words only to get like 10 word value, if u get what i mean. There was only 1 other novel I have dropped because of too much shake shake shakespear in it, so thankfully this is not common. Not everything needs to have 20 descriptive words for it. I'm annoyed that another yuri is ruined by something so stupid. You think I wrote a lot? If it was this author writing what I said, it would have been 5x(atleast) the length.
It's a great book, I liked it. I recommend it to anyone who likes the Xiangxia genre. A thoughtful plot, an interesting narrative. Author, thank you for the work, I wish you the best and never give up!
so dry, so bland, it's like reading a report, it feels so ai generated ( no offence ). the pacing is all over the place, like cmon cultivating for 50 plus years with nothing happening? sooo dull and monotonous, if I really wanted that i would have just lived my life. 2/5 would not recommend
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L'écriture est très intéressante. L'intrigue avance vite. Les éléments des pouvoirs sont bien discerné. Les complexité sont intéressants. Ce qui manque : Profondeur du mc. Dialogue moins mature. Scène de combat approfondie. L'amour. Réécrire ia qui répète. Manque de compréhension du mc.