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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionIn all the time I've been looking for a Jon Snow fanfic this is one of the best I've been reading, The way Jon progresses in the story is quite interesting beyond the fantastic, the reading is pleasant and the long chapters are a pleasure to read.
Spoiler enthüllenEsta muy bueno el fic un poco alargado pero esta llendo por algo bueno lo que no me gustó para nada es que eliminará el fic de madara fue las segunda razón por la que continúe bien este porque en algunas parte este me aburrió y el de harry potte es muy aburrido y ni digo el de one pice que me llama la atención de aratos
Sinceramente no me gustó, no le veo mucho sentido en leer una historia con cambios mínimos en comparación con el original, la mayoría de los cambios son debido a la inconsistencia de algunos personajes y algunos problemas con la lógica de ciertas escenas, puede ser que mí opinión sea muy parcial ya que nunca me gustó la utilización de personajes originales de la historias como protagonistas de fanfiction, la mayoría de las veces el autor no logra captar los razgos o esencia de estos y terminas con un personaje OC que finge ser alguien más .
You are creating a huge and incredible world, just please don't get lost in the middle of it all,But what you're doing is really good, I really want to see Jon achieving everything you described in the synopsis.
I really like it so far, I really like the kingdom building even if it's a bit unlikely that it happened so quickly, I like that new elements are being brought in and it's messing with the original story and changing it up.
hi author I like your work. Will you ever update you other work Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.
Excellent story, I love Jhon and Eragon, when the eggs he has are going to hatch, and take Rhaenys to Arctica, I also want to see the reaction of everyone in the south when they try to make war on him
The story is good but it seems like I'm not reading a GOY fanfic but a Disney one.................................................................................................................
It's a good story with a good pace, neither fast nor slow, there's very little that I didn't like about the story, I found the delay until now for him to discover his lineage irritating and unnecessary, there's one thing or another that I find a little silly but that's it, it's a story worth reading.
Prepare yourself to the unending adventure, full of surprises and creativity of certain Artisan Tradesman towards the land of Western Kingdom called Westeto.
at first, the story was interesting and promising, until the author could not restrain himself and got up from cheap Chinese novels and arranged a showdown with a nobleman, this caused fatal damage to the perception of the world and the character, what a shame.
Uma história verdadeiramente boa assim como todos os trabalhos que ele faz realmente recomendo...............................................................
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
Brilliant story so far, decent chapter lengths, definitely my favourite GOT fan fiction and one of my favourite ongoing novels, can't wait to see how it develops.
This novel is slow but detailed. If you are interested in GoT fan fiction, you should definitely read this novel. The fact that the novel is published every Sunday, Tuesday and Friday and that the author attaches importance to updating it, makes me enjoy the novel more as someone who follows the novel up to date.
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I’m so happy to come back and see your writing this story again I’m so happy I was really angry and when you stoped
The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.
Reseña de un español: hola, para empezar sinceramente no pensaba escribir ninguna reseña, solo darle 5 estrellas y ya, sobre todo porque cada vez qu escribo una reseña como soy español hay un poco bastante racismo por aquí y es molesto, pero lo último que ha pasado y el comentario del autor me han impulsado a escribirla. Para empezar esta historia es genial, tiene un gran desarrollo, no voy a negar que a veces algunos episodios se sienten de relleno, pero cuando es para explicar cosas o realizar una transición de tiempo es obligatorio hacer estos episodios por la trama, igualmente cuando acaba este periodo de episodios de "relleno" hay episodios épicos y muy buenos por lo que merece totalmente la pena. Conclusión una historia que es 10/10 y espero que el autor no la abandone por culpa de los típicos subnormales envidiosos que solo saben escribir una frase coherente sin que su cerebro se les desparrame.
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In all the time I've been looking for a Jon Snow fanfic this is one of the best I've been reading, The way Jon progresses in the story is quite interesting beyond the fantastic, the reading is pleasant and the long chapters are a pleasure to read.
Spoiler enthüllenEsta muy bueno el fic un poco alargado pero esta llendo por algo bueno lo que no me gustó para nada es que eliminará el fic de madara fue las segunda razón por la que continúe bien este porque en algunas parte este me aburrió y el de harry potte es muy aburrido y ni digo el de one pice que me llama la atención de aratos
Sinceramente no me gustó, no le veo mucho sentido en leer una historia con cambios mínimos en comparación con el original, la mayoría de los cambios son debido a la inconsistencia de algunos personajes y algunos problemas con la lógica de ciertas escenas, puede ser que mí opinión sea muy parcial ya que nunca me gustó la utilización de personajes originales de la historias como protagonistas de fanfiction, la mayoría de las veces el autor no logra captar los razgos o esencia de estos y terminas con un personaje OC que finge ser alguien más .
You are creating a huge and incredible world, just please don't get lost in the middle of it all,But what you're doing is really good, I really want to see Jon achieving everything you described in the synopsis.
I really like it so far, I really like the kingdom building even if it's a bit unlikely that it happened so quickly, I like that new elements are being brought in and it's messing with the original story and changing it up.
hi author I like your work. Will you ever update you other work Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.
Excellent story, I love Jhon and Eragon, when the eggs he has are going to hatch, and take Rhaenys to Arctica, I also want to see the reaction of everyone in the south when they try to make war on him
The story is good but it seems like I'm not reading a GOY fanfic but a Disney one.................................................................................................................
It's a good story with a good pace, neither fast nor slow, there's very little that I didn't like about the story, I found the delay until now for him to discover his lineage irritating and unnecessary, there's one thing or another that I find a little silly but that's it, it's a story worth reading.
Prepare yourself to the unending adventure, full of surprises and creativity of certain Artisan Tradesman towards the land of Western Kingdom called Westeto.
at first, the story was interesting and promising, until the author could not restrain himself and got up from cheap Chinese novels and arranged a showdown with a nobleman, this caused fatal damage to the perception of the world and the character, what a shame.
Uma história verdadeiramente boa assim como todos os trabalhos que ele faz realmente recomendo...............................................................
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
Brilliant story so far, decent chapter lengths, definitely my favourite GOT fan fiction and one of my favourite ongoing novels, can't wait to see how it develops.
This novel is slow but detailed. If you are interested in GoT fan fiction, you should definitely read this novel. The fact that the novel is published every Sunday, Tuesday and Friday and that the author attaches importance to updating it, makes me enjoy the novel more as someone who follows the novel up to date.
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I’m so happy to come back and see your writing this story again I’m so happy I was really angry and when you stoped
The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.
Reseña de un español: hola, para empezar sinceramente no pensaba escribir ninguna reseña, solo darle 5 estrellas y ya, sobre todo porque cada vez qu escribo una reseña como soy español hay un poco bastante racismo por aquí y es molesto, pero lo último que ha pasado y el comentario del autor me han impulsado a escribirla. Para empezar esta historia es genial, tiene un gran desarrollo, no voy a negar que a veces algunos episodios se sienten de relleno, pero cuando es para explicar cosas o realizar una transición de tiempo es obligatorio hacer estos episodios por la trama, igualmente cuando acaba este periodo de episodios de "relleno" hay episodios épicos y muy buenos por lo que merece totalmente la pena. Conclusión una historia que es 10/10 y espero que el autor no la abandone por culpa de los típicos subnormales envidiosos que solo saben escribir una frase coherente sin que su cerebro se les desparrame.
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