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Everything is forced in this story, the dialogue, the unfolding of the story, he annoys me with the fact that he can't tell his father that he's a Stark and not an Arryn, he acts like a male version of Mary Sue, everything goes his way and no one notices him when he wants to .
I hope you didn't abandon this it's my favorite I suggest this to anyone whose a stark/got fan
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It’s alright, but a lot of parts blur the line of plagiarism (which is the act of directly copying from another author) and unique ideas. It’s better to read for yourself. The writing really needs proofreading, while world building doesn’t work well because of not taking into realistic aspects of time, human nature and the world. I mean this is a fanfic, so can’t expect everything though. Characters are good enough, but glosses over some nuances in their personality with incomplete thoughts of the writer.
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Great writing, could not put the story down when I started it. Can’t wait for more and looking forward to were the storie takes me.
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Good work bro, keep it up and please don't drop this work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Nt: Sorry if the grammar is bad I use google translate
Wonderful storyline. Good character development and interesting plot twist. Can’t wait for updates. Highly recommend
Loved the story so far. One of my favorite GOT ff and by far my favorite Robb ff. Really liked the unique slight AU Roberts rebellion and how u r changing everything up to not be some canon copy in storyline. Please keep up the good work.
I mean, story is forced af. Everything literally just happens conveniently for mc :D I'm 100% sure if mc started to walk towards sea, he would first step on rocks, then dolphins, icebergs and whatnot, crossing sea on foot to essos. Writing quality is pretty mediocre. I'm still reading it because I just want to read some op kingdom building right now, and I happen to be in mood that all this doesn't bother me. Usually it would.
This is so good I can't wait to read the rest. I've caught up to chapter 25 and that was the latest chapter out, so when it said no more chapters to read I nearly cried.
it is good though does anyone noticed the maester wolf vibes here or is it just me
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This is very interesting and refreshing idea since the main focus of the story is Rob. Please keep up the quality and make Rob stay true to the Winter Throne.
This is one if not the best ff out there. The quality is very good and immersive. I can't wait for it to finish. Don't drop it author!.
Excelente historia las divergencias del canon permiten una historia diferente a la del siempre principe JON prometido el desarrollo del reino no es tedioso o en exceso plasmado tiene saltos de tiempo cortos lo que permite que la historia se desenvuelva rápidamente magnifico trabajo
Haven't read the book yet but i'm just curious about the title of this fic "Starks of Winterfell" which is I find kinda pretty funny because it felt like saying Fish of Water, Bird of the Sky, etc.. .(Maybe my humor is just broken)
Fantastic au of got , I am really liking the robb stark character 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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5 for writing quality and character design, because this story gets those two things right, 1 star for story development and world background. The story plays out like a wall street financers wet dream, Robb randomly invents the printing press with no previous required technology in a medieval world, creates like 3 new business models out of nowhere, some guy from Braavos gives comes to him and gives him the method for double-book accounting, a random Maester under him discovers crop rotation and it TRIPLES production. The most plot armoured wishful thinking I've ever seen. Don't even get me started on the Maesters. He takes away dozens of Maesters from the citadel and no one does anything about it, is this even Game of Thrones anymore?
es buena historia la verdad me gusta como toma rumbo espero con ansias que sigas escribiendo y no la dejes seria un lastima en verdad gracias nueva mente
The scope is impressive. Author is not shy of making use of different character POV’s. I like the general vibe of how the plot. Unique plot-wise, always fun to see a new creative take. You get some broken English at times but who cares lol. I wonder how this story will develop ?
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Spoiler enthüllen Everything is forced in this story, the dialogue, the unfolding of the story, he annoys me with the fact that he can't tell his father that he's a Stark and not an Arryn, he acts like a male version of Mary Sue, everything goes his way and no one notices him when he wants to .
I hope you didn't abandon this it's my favorite I suggest this to anyone whose a stark/got fan
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It’s alright, but a lot of parts blur the line of plagiarism (which is the act of directly copying from another author) and unique ideas. It’s better to read for yourself. The writing really needs proofreading, while world building doesn’t work well because of not taking into realistic aspects of time, human nature and the world. I mean this is a fanfic, so can’t expect everything though. Characters are good enough, but glosses over some nuances in their personality with incomplete thoughts of the writer.
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Great writing, could not put the story down when I started it. Can’t wait for more and looking forward to were the storie takes me.
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Good work bro, keep it up and please don't drop this work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Nt: Sorry if the grammar is bad I use google translate
Wonderful storyline. Good character development and interesting plot twist. Can’t wait for updates. Highly recommend
Loved the story so far. One of my favorite GOT ff and by far my favorite Robb ff. Really liked the unique slight AU Roberts rebellion and how u r changing everything up to not be some canon copy in storyline. Please keep up the good work.
I mean, story is forced af. Everything literally just happens conveniently for mc :D I'm 100% sure if mc started to walk towards sea, he would first step on rocks, then dolphins, icebergs and whatnot, crossing sea on foot to essos. Writing quality is pretty mediocre. I'm still reading it because I just want to read some op kingdom building right now, and I happen to be in mood that all this doesn't bother me. Usually it would.
This is so good I can't wait to read the rest. I've caught up to chapter 25 and that was the latest chapter out, so when it said no more chapters to read I nearly cried.
it is good though does anyone noticed the maester wolf vibes here or is it just me
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This is very interesting and refreshing idea since the main focus of the story is Rob. Please keep up the quality and make Rob stay true to the Winter Throne.
This is one if not the best ff out there. The quality is very good and immersive. I can't wait for it to finish. Don't drop it author!.
Excelente historia las divergencias del canon permiten una historia diferente a la del siempre principe JON prometido el desarrollo del reino no es tedioso o en exceso plasmado tiene saltos de tiempo cortos lo que permite que la historia se desenvuelva rápidamente magnifico trabajo
Haven't read the book yet but i'm just curious about the title of this fic "Starks of Winterfell" which is I find kinda pretty funny because it felt like saying Fish of Water, Bird of the Sky, etc.. .(Maybe my humor is just broken)
Fantastic au of got , I am really liking the robb stark character 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Spoiler enthüllen 5 for writing quality and character design, because this story gets those two things right, 1 star for story development and world background. The story plays out like a wall street financers wet dream, Robb randomly invents the printing press with no previous required technology in a medieval world, creates like 3 new business models out of nowhere, some guy from Braavos gives comes to him and gives him the method for double-book accounting, a random Maester under him discovers crop rotation and it TRIPLES production. The most plot armoured wishful thinking I've ever seen. Don't even get me started on the Maesters. He takes away dozens of Maesters from the citadel and no one does anything about it, is this even Game of Thrones anymore?
es buena historia la verdad me gusta como toma rumbo espero con ansias que sigas escribiendo y no la dejes seria un lastima en verdad gracias nueva mente
The scope is impressive. Author is not shy of making use of different character POV’s. I like the general vibe of how the plot. Unique plot-wise, always fun to see a new creative take. You get some broken English at times but who cares lol. I wonder how this story will develop ?
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