Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse

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SoulSnatcher

Of course, I gave myself a high review!! First of all, I would like to say thank you to all the folks who have supported this story so far. I appreciate all your support!! This is my first story and I hope I am doing a great job of bringing the characters to life. My grammar may not be the best because English is not my first language but I assure you that I'm doing my best. I would like to get ahead of myself and think that the book will get better with time and my characters will grow as we go. That is the whole definition of character development, isn't it? I hope you stick around long enough to see the story get better and more interesting. Thank you again for the support and the constructive criticism. Enjoy!! I can't wait to you all for this interesting ride. Note: This story is a harem as indicated in the tag. But the harem with come starting from the 60s chapters going forward.

LV 14

SleepySmile

Trash mc

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Kw0z

I can already tell this novel is trash because of the synopsis 😂 “Become the devil, or die. You have 24 hours to choose, or you die” Like what? Obviously he’d choose to become the devil.

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Raphis

I apologize, do you want to exchange reviews with me?

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AzkielAlex

Trash. What kind of week beta mc is this

LV 3

not_today_3002

this novel is too fast without any good charcacters all of them are silly

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Ray_Maison

the novel is trash and way to rushed and most of it makes no sense you're way to confused bro

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THE_ARCHITECT

The story has no true background it only focuses on a single character making it absolute trash

LV 15

Lucien121

honest review here. so the story moves way to fast that you can't keep up with it at times and have to reread certain parts to understand a little bit of it. we barely have any background. writing quality is ok, the story line could be something if it was fleashed out more. but over all what brings this book to its very knees is its story progressen, how fast paced and how much plot armour it has. it's like James throw a rock in anger and broke a window and killed someone, but the guy was a serial killer and another guy showed up and said it was suicide and everyone believed him, then his mother came to kill him bc she didn't like him ect he killed her puppy. it's like that. the way the story is, it is just to fast paced to much going on with not a spectacular beginning. it could be good. if the setting was more detailed and thought out. if it wasn't so rushed, if they actually made a power scale. there is not one in here. I read this for free btw on my daily reads. I suffered over 50 chapters. it was ok for awhile a bit of a rush in the beginning isn't so bad it kills everything for the future sometimes so I stuck with it. but the way this has progressed was what killed it. all in all its not a bad idea, just poor execution of it. maybe need to flesh out the story more on a story board or note boom come back to it and reboot the book from scratch.

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Nezuko_1113

Love this!! I need more of this. I recommend everyone read this!!

Very good book with amazing development of characters. I can’t to see where this story goes!! I hope the author doesn’t abandon the book😤

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Hamsteren_2

good stuff............... thank you

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TeLLer_taLes

The story is good and I hope the author doesn't drop it. On that note, you can try reading (just like a dream).