36Rezensionen
3.67
- Qualität des Schreibens
- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
i stop reading when the author introduce another reincarnator. now we have a new reincarnated individual that seemingly an enemy to mc. sigh... well its good while it lasted.
I wanna know where the first hundred or so chapters are. The FF starts up with the battle of New York and it is very clear that the MC has had 100 or 200 chapters of development
Des titre putains [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Love the way it’s written and the concept is super good I just think that having like 90% of the novel be from another character’s pov is weird other than that I’m enjoying the novel!
even tho it is a well writen story but there is a problem, the lack of MC. 70 chapters in and we know little to nothing about him. sure, you gave us little CRUMBS of info on him but after a few days i forgotten what was mc's existance is for. the longer i read the longer i got frustrated and dissapointed. pov after pov and still nothing. the point of a story is follow an MC that we can sympathize and follow them into their journey. and we get none of that. but side characters are now the mc's not the MC themselves. the "mystery of the MC" over stayed it's welcome. if this how the story is going to go then this story isnt worth your time............... technomancer in the mcu? more like, nothing in the mcu. you are good writer, author, but you messed up flow of the story, the story just got boring and cumbersome to read.
It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,
Great story, the more i read the better it gets. I love how the author slowly but surely reveals more about the MC as the story goes on. Its not just a massive info dump at the start then a time skip like every other story I have read so far. He has a lot of mystery about him that is slowly being revealed as the story progresses. Great work!
Not much to comment besides that I personally like how the story is developing
please stop writing about wakanda,it's 10 😑 and the story is good overall it's a hidden gem recommended
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! 😍😍 It have a good storyline/plot and great englosh/translation.. I think you should tell how MC reincarnate first, how he got his power, how he train it (or is he already good to use his power since beginning?)).. Or his first time come to MCU.. It's weird to see he already prepare everything for Battle of New York.. Why MC not tell Fury about SHIELD is compromise by Hydra?? And why Alfred give 'agent Simmon??' the medic bot?? (Although it link to that agent by biometric, Hydra can still steal it I think.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍
I can tell this is already gonna be a great marvel fanfic. Ps- I hope you continue your other fanfic(the MHA one) i really liked it reading the whole 3 chapters.
Good story I personally enjoyed reading If only we can get to know more about the mc and the organization Hope you continue with the hard work
There is literally nothing to read here, the character is supposed to be "thrown" into Marvel, but we start when he already has his resources, control over his "powers" (because I have no idea what his power is), and this so far is a reaction fic, there's no MC Pov, just the other characters/organizations reacting. Boring
Like a few other reviews has said the story suddenly starts at the invasion of New york with no information on how the *main character got there it feels like the story is missing alot of chapters and every chapter is from different Pov's the main character is in perhaps 10% of the story so far
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I thought this is going to be a good story, but instead we have a finally from the start. I don't understand, what's the point of all of this? Why should I read it?
I've caught up (chp 21) and until now there was no (or very few) MC POV's, all of the FF consist on the reactions of other characters to certain events caused by the main MC, like Giga_Weeb said in a prior review, we know very little about our MC, writing quality is actually good for a FF, other than that I already gave my opinion, read if you don't mind an absent MC (literally his AI has more dialogues than him)
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in the synopsis it says the mc gets "thrown" into the mcu before Canon starts but it starts with him in the middle of the avengers movie and is still there half way through the chapters. like who is he, how long has he been in the mcu, what's his name, what does he look like, how did he get all these advanced tech.
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It just feels to rushed, it could have been good but you just rushed through the plot too fast, better luck next time [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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the writing grammatically and stylishly good but the plot is literally half missing. the story starts in a climax and we know nothing about the mc or his powers except that he is comically overpowered and flexing on everyone. the vast majority of what is currently written is POV's from side characters too. It seems like an exciting climax too, but it's hard to enjoy because the MC is too strong and we don't even know him. Even if the after the invasion the mc's plot kicks in it's still gonna be super boring after the invasion, which so far has just been reactions. 3 stars because it could be a pretty good story if it wasn't missing the first 100 chapters.
I am someone quick to review...but the story is interesting(good) and off puting(bad). brilliant(good) and wish fulfilling (good/bad) so i hope it remais that way, because i havent seen someone actually using politics in mcu. i am big fan of politics and the author has used good politics in there, hope to see more
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The only thing I will say is writing quality in the start is a little off but it's great I like this approach The only thing that can ruin this fanfic is Romance Other than that it's amazing
It's so good, I am impressed at how good this is and how not cringe it is.
writing is too mess and I don't even know how to read and where to start. that's all
i stop reading when the author introduce another reincarnator. now we have a new reincarnated individual that seemingly an enemy to mc. sigh... well its good while it lasted.
I wanna know where the first hundred or so chapters are. The FF starts up with the battle of New York and it is very clear that the MC has had 100 or 200 chapters of development
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Spoiler enthüllen Love the way it’s written and the concept is super good I just think that having like 90% of the novel be from another character’s pov is weird other than that I’m enjoying the novel!
even tho it is a well writen story but there is a problem, the lack of MC. 70 chapters in and we know little to nothing about him. sure, you gave us little CRUMBS of info on him but after a few days i forgotten what was mc's existance is for. the longer i read the longer i got frustrated and dissapointed. pov after pov and still nothing. the point of a story is follow an MC that we can sympathize and follow them into their journey. and we get none of that. but side characters are now the mc's not the MC themselves. the "mystery of the MC" over stayed it's welcome. if this how the story is going to go then this story isnt worth your time............... technomancer in the mcu? more like, nothing in the mcu. you are good writer, author, but you messed up flow of the story, the story just got boring and cumbersome to read.
It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,
Great story, the more i read the better it gets. I love how the author slowly but surely reveals more about the MC as the story goes on. Its not just a massive info dump at the start then a time skip like every other story I have read so far. He has a lot of mystery about him that is slowly being revealed as the story progresses. Great work!
Not much to comment besides that I personally like how the story is developing
please stop writing about wakanda,it's 10 😑 and the story is good overall it's a hidden gem recommended
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! 😍😍 It have a good storyline/plot and great englosh/translation.. I think you should tell how MC reincarnate first, how he got his power, how he train it (or is he already good to use his power since beginning?)).. Or his first time come to MCU.. It's weird to see he already prepare everything for Battle of New York.. Why MC not tell Fury about SHIELD is compromise by Hydra?? And why Alfred give 'agent Simmon??' the medic bot?? (Although it link to that agent by biometric, Hydra can still steal it I think.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍😍
I can tell this is already gonna be a great marvel fanfic. Ps- I hope you continue your other fanfic(the MHA one) i really liked it reading the whole 3 chapters.
Good story I personally enjoyed reading If only we can get to know more about the mc and the organization Hope you continue with the hard work
There is literally nothing to read here, the character is supposed to be "thrown" into Marvel, but we start when he already has his resources, control over his "powers" (because I have no idea what his power is), and this so far is a reaction fic, there's no MC Pov, just the other characters/organizations reacting. Boring
Like a few other reviews has said the story suddenly starts at the invasion of New york with no information on how the *main character got there it feels like the story is missing alot of chapters and every chapter is from different Pov's the main character is in perhaps 10% of the story so far
Spoiler enthüllen I thought this is going to be a good story, but instead we have a finally from the start. I don't understand, what's the point of all of this? Why should I read it?
I've caught up (chp 21) and until now there was no (or very few) MC POV's, all of the FF consist on the reactions of other characters to certain events caused by the main MC, like Giga_Weeb said in a prior review, we know very little about our MC, writing quality is actually good for a FF, other than that I already gave my opinion, read if you don't mind an absent MC (literally his AI has more dialogues than him)
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in the synopsis it says the mc gets "thrown" into the mcu before Canon starts but it starts with him in the middle of the avengers movie and is still there half way through the chapters. like who is he, how long has he been in the mcu, what's his name, what does he look like, how did he get all these advanced tech.
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It just feels to rushed, it could have been good but you just rushed through the plot too fast, better luck next time [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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the writing grammatically and stylishly good but the plot is literally half missing. the story starts in a climax and we know nothing about the mc or his powers except that he is comically overpowered and flexing on everyone. the vast majority of what is currently written is POV's from side characters too. It seems like an exciting climax too, but it's hard to enjoy because the MC is too strong and we don't even know him. Even if the after the invasion the mc's plot kicks in it's still gonna be super boring after the invasion, which so far has just been reactions. 3 stars because it could be a pretty good story if it wasn't missing the first 100 chapters.
I am someone quick to review...but the story is interesting(good) and off puting(bad). brilliant(good) and wish fulfilling (good/bad) so i hope it remais that way, because i havent seen someone actually using politics in mcu. i am big fan of politics and the author has used good politics in there, hope to see more
Very powerful protagonist. The story was a little boring meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
The only thing I will say is writing quality in the start is a little off but it's great I like this approach The only thing that can ruin this fanfic is Romance Other than that it's amazing
It's so good, I am impressed at how good this is and how not cringe it is.
writing is too mess and I don't even know how to read and where to start. that's all