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the premise is interesting, but man I thought this was a translation because of the protagonist's name, it needs to improve a little on the POVs and grammar, other than that it's interesting, I just clicked on the cover because I was playing Elsword.
It's all fun and games until your MC becomes a slave. MC reincarnates as a child, both regaining his past life memories, current life memories (OP/OC from Naruto world) and memories of a guy from Earth. Sounds fun so far. A couple chapters in, the MC gains access to a Multiverse Chat Group with some beloved characters. Still sounds fun. 12 chapters in, the Multiverse Chat Group upgrades with individual quests, directly turning the MC into a system slave. Fun = Fun/10. It might be a one-off, but it feels like a serious smack to the face, especially since the story (at this time) doesn't even have a system tag.
Spoiler enthüllen the premise is interesting, but man I thought this was a translation because of the protagonist's name, it needs to improve a little on the POVs and grammar, other than that it's interesting, I just clicked on the cover because I was playing Elsword.
It's all fun and games until your MC becomes a slave. MC reincarnates as a child, both regaining his past life memories, current life memories (OP/OC from Naruto world) and memories of a guy from Earth. Sounds fun so far. A couple chapters in, the MC gains access to a Multiverse Chat Group with some beloved characters. Still sounds fun. 12 chapters in, the Multiverse Chat Group upgrades with individual quests, directly turning the MC into a system slave. Fun = Fun/10. It might be a one-off, but it feels like a serious smack to the face, especially since the story (at this time) doesn't even have a system tag.
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