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no spacing or paragraphs. might be due to the app updating or whatever the writer wrote on. an edit is needed.
I cant even give a rating above 0 stars because its un-readable. Dont just put spaces randomly , put one at the end of some info , also put the character dialog in its own paragraph. so bad unfortunately.
fix the spacing and paragraphs and you will get people to read this book but if you don't you will never make it past 100 thousand views and know one will pay coins to read a junky uploaded book
Thank you for fixing the spacing.This is a really good book. The story is really interesting and keeps you looking for more. The system is really good as it doesn't assist mc in everything and on top of it mc has to complete a task for every talent.
no spacing or paragraphs. might be due to the app updating or whatever the writer wrote on. an edit is needed.
I cant even give a rating above 0 stars because its un-readable. Dont just put spaces randomly , put one at the end of some info , also put the character dialog in its own paragraph. so bad unfortunately.
fix the spacing and paragraphs and you will get people to read this book but if you don't you will never make it past 100 thousand views and know one will pay coins to read a junky uploaded book
Thank you for fixing the spacing.This is a really good book. The story is really interesting and keeps you looking for more. The system is really good as it doesn't assist mc in everything and on top of it mc has to complete a task for every talent.