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Kapitel 30: Chapter 27 : DEMONSTRATION END PAVLOV'S DOG ARC (STARTS)

Recap : system daniel both had a lot of fun with the friends with even gun and goo dropping in with goo wanting daniel to start a restaurant, but hearing his offer both had to pass on that idea, But gun and goo had to leave with an call. Now system and friends who had dinner. Are all taking a walk in the park, with system showing some of the abilities, That came with Character card, now we continue the story.

Story starts here:

"Don't take your eyes off even for a single moment. This is something none of you want to dmiss". The words which were said by such confidence. system using the perfect body.

Taking a stance of a famous baki character, who is famous for combining and learning many styles of combat. With the copy ability behind him a figure of katsumi stands. System says "Get ready, and look carefully what your about to witness, you will never see ever again".

Quick note : Shinshinkai Karate, Is the art used by doppo and katsumi. In this style we can see many martials arts are also mixed . instance with the use of elbows like muy thai and kicks showing the use of takewondo. This is my view not official statement. So IF am wrong I apologize. Ending the note.

Tying the imaginary belt around the waist. The Talent of copy, with the perfect body combined. Performing the many combos, With the people witnessing like he is fighting someone, with each strike, kick, block, counter, The style fascinating them, The spar between retsu and katsumi.

With slowly increasing the speed. Getting faster with the point of reaching the speed where he left after image. System really let himself go He was going to use mach punch, The adrenaline in the body surging with each passing moment,

The reaction of vasco, jace, eli, vin, mary, yui, crystal, mira, jay. Was something no one would have thought,

Zack thinking 'Who did he fought to pick this up'. Vin on the surface looks unimpressed but completely shocked in the inside. Vasco looking at the every movement not wanting to take his eyes off.

Jace brain running faster. Thinking about the man who system fought. With girls now can barely see the movements.

Just when he was about to use mach punch, He feels an hand on his shoulder which brings him back.

Looking back he sees no one with that incident he stops it, bowing to show respect to his imaginary opponent. Ending the show.

Turning around. He sees the shocked looks of everyone. Looking at such a reaction system speaks in an amusing tone " don't tell me your shocked with only this, I am just starting. I still got a lot more to show you all".

Hearing this words everyone is shocked again. Getting their bearings. Zack asked an question" Who did you meet In the center was all the people in the detention center this strong". Hearing Zacks question others awaited for a response.

System hearing his question laughs a little then replies " I learned this form my friend, believe me no one in the center was a challenge. Now wanna see one more". Wanting to know more about the friend which system learned form.

But just As jace was about to question for the friend. He stopped after hearing the words of System using the perfect body.

Speaking in an amusing he spoke " I want vin to become the sparring the opponent, cause the next guy is a great judo master".

Vin hearing this feels a little insulted and thinks that Daniel is looking down at him, Speaking with some anger and annoyed voice" Hey did that demonstration got to your head, do I need to put you in your place".

vin steps up cursing and feeling his dignity begin mocked. But system does not respond to any of the provocation.

Taking another stance like pushing his glasses up, Gouki shibisawa standing behind him. Vin taking his stance spreading his hands apart and rushed toward system using the second body. Grabbing his arm to do the shoulder throw.

But it back fires, As then system adjust his hand grip, and throwing vin over his head with out using any fancy movement.

Like when baki throwed that random thung who was asking for money when baki was on a date.

Shocking everyone again, Cause they all know by no means vin is a light weight, but to thrown him over his head is shocking.

Now with leaving vin hands and saying to him "You get one shot make it count, I will counter it".

Vin hearing this no one but him can feel it, the casualness of the words said in front of. Was he begin called weak.

It was like a emotion of rollar coaster for vin. The feeling of begin underestimated form his words and unparalleled anger.

Making vin almost lose his cool. But taking control of his emotions at the last minute, and also not wanting for his opponent to make him lose temper.

Vin stands properly and speaks in a low tone "Get ready, you said you will counter right let me see how can you counter it. Get ready you might die with this move". He didn't meant the last part. But he wanted to make it painful as possible for Daniel.

In kudo there are many dangerous moves and throws. Any throw can be dangerous, if performed wrongly can make an opponent land on head or neck breaking it.

Vin is gonna use kudo throw Seoi Nage (Shoulder Throw): Seoi Nage involves lifting the opponent over your shoulder and throwing them. If not controlled and executed correctly, it can lead to the opponent landing on their head or neck.

Going for it grabbing his arm and not pulling. But twisting it over the shoulder. Wanting to inflict as much pain he can. But who is gouki shibukawa.

The man with 70 years of judo kudo akido and many other self defense art experience, Even if he is not here in person but as a copy. Who dares say they can use judo on him

Vin move is easily countered by system grabbing his hair with his second arm. Putting his knee on the spine with the push of knee and pull of the arm combined disabling vin, all that happened in a second.

making vin leave the arm to grab the arm on his head. Trying many ways for the sole purpose of making sure it leaves. But failing ultimately.

With still holding the position and increasing the force slowly,making vin let out a pain full voice. Letting go of the grip. Pushing vin toward the crowd. With vasco coming ahead and saying " You did not have had to go that far daniel, Even if he is a bad friend. He is our friend".

Vin hearing Vasco words. Responds quickly to refuse the words of Vasco. "Hey shut it. Who says i am your friend, single cell brain piece missing bear". Seeing vins such out burst and the barrages of words.

All of them are shocked. While vasco is left confused. Beacuse he doesn't know the meanings of vins words. Vasco head turns toward jace with a look in his eyes wanting an explanation.

System speaks after seeing such response " I know vasco, But I was demostrating to vin there is always someone out their stronger then him, the world is big enough to hide almost any thing in plain sight. I hope vin can forgive me for going to far".

As that matter was settled. System now turns his attention toward zack and speaks in a playful tone " Zack wanna see how well your boxing will work against me".

Zack not wanting to look like a coward in front of mira and not wanting her to get angry at him for fighting he looks at mira to give any sign of approval. With mira not giving any single and zack stays put.

System seeing this pokes the nerve of zack by mentioning incident. And speaks with a tone full of anger. Trying to get zack to figh.

" Zack I know how you promised to never fight again, but now I am threatening mira safety, I don't want to mention the incident but your not leaving me any choice here, Was my time spent in detention center is a waste, just to see you waiting for her signal like a dog. Did you even train during this month if yes then show me. Step up".

The speech which might seem proactive to Many was the motivation that zack needed. Zack mind is sent back to the incident thinking about the possibilities. What could have happened.

And hearing, how daniel called him a dog. He now does not see or look at mira for any signal stepping up and speaks in a low tone filled with a bit of anger " Get ready. I will not hold back so don't blame me if you get any broken tooth". hearing these words.

System response filled with playful tone "You would be lucky to even touch me". As the figure of the king of smips Ali jr stands behind him.

Hearing his response and fhe tone. Zack didn't show any emotion. But responded "Raise your guard or not, it's your choice. But don't balme me. When i knock your teeth out. Here I go". with those words spoken zack rushed System who was using ali jr copy.

Zacks uses jabs. Followed by a left hook. But those are easily dodge. Zack increases his speed to the max wanting to go beyond his limit.

Switching his attack pattern using liver shots and a uper cut following that with an over head punch.

Swaying to the side taking a step back. Ducking. These are the some ways which were used to dodge rhe onslaught.

Moving gracefully through them. With each dodge zack becoming more angry. With zack saying "Stop dodging and fight me like a man". famous words before. He was humbled.

Hearing zack words system does not dodge Seeing such thing Zack once again goes for a over head shot. But he underestimated the speed of his opponent.

The speed was faster then any thing zack saw he was hit in the face by it, Continuing the combo. With a light left hook.

These 2 moves made zack feel like he was hit by sand filled bag on the face. As he falls down with only one single thought in mind he was defeated easily.

Imparting the words of wisdom system says " Move like a butterfly and sting like a bee. Words that was said by a great boxer. Would love to impart more knowledge to ya but your not ready for the Arts of Ali".

Zack gets up form the ground feeling angry and the feeling powerlessness building up inside him.

Zack hearing what system said about him Begin not meant for the style says in an angry way " what do you mean I am not meant for it. Do you mean to say I was not meant for boxing. I trained hard after you were sent away I trained so hard to catch up". With him punching the tree next to him. To show his emotions.

Zack continues to say "What do you know about me. I trained so hard to get find him, But now your saying I am not meant for boxing".

With emotional out burst zack is in a delima trying his hardest to not show the tears in front of mira.

Hearing this all system says in a clam tone " I think you miss heard my words, By what I meant was that your not ready yet, Not that your not meant for boxing, Remember these words zack, Greatness never comes in a single night, Many shed sweat blood tears to reach that point in life. If greatness was so easy to earn. The whole world would have many great people. So now ask your self zack if your meant for greatness or not".

With that speech zack is left to him self as then system turns his attention to Jay and says " great to see your also here jay, Now what kind of style you use jay, would you like to have a little spar". Jay also steps up taking the form of systema.

Looking at jay stance system says " Systema the russain art of self defence, The art which focues on the fulid movements and relaxation am I right". As jay nods like responding to his words.

System after a while of thinking says "I have many techniques for soft movement and fast strikes but I have the perfect character for it, I hope you can learn some of them as this will prove a massive help to increase your strength".

In baki verse there are many characters who are great at soft movement and fast strikes. But the character who fought baki using the soft movement and fluid strike is Yanagi ruukuo.

The death row escaped convict. Has a variety of combat skills. Is shown proficient in weapons and many other skills. With him. Begin famous for begin getting him self clapped by baki who did Pp training.

Taking his stance standing losely. As the wind blows making them feel like I will flow with the wind.

Jay also takes the stance taking the offensive jay each move Is easily dodge or countered, With jay final attack begin grabbed and with him ending in a joint lock. With yanagi joint manipulation. Holding him in the ground. Easily realising him and saying

"Systema is a great art but it main weakness begin the long range attacks, But you must know about it, So let me ask you do you know how to use weapons".

Jay nods. Then system says "Great allow me to show you a bit about them, Now I might be not great at using them but still has a certain mastery over them".

Looking around and spotting to small sticks on the ground picking them up. Then taking the stance of motobe, one of the great weapons users in baki.

Then telling jay "The weapons are made by humans to defend kill and destroy by humans, You can say it might be selfish to create them, But a weapon has no eyes so it cannot tell who is it begin used against. But the master of the weapon can chose for what purpose. Will the weapon be used".

Performing many strikes stabs and slices with the sticks. Then a leave falls down form the tree, In front of their eyes it's cut into many pieces by the use of those sticks.

Dropping the sticks, He turns to vasco and says "You have the strength but no technique, You can easily over power many of us, but with the proper technique you cannot use the full strength of your body. I have something in store for ya but it is not ready yer vasco, I hope you keep training until I get it ready".

Then turning to girls and saying "I have 2 techniques which will help you gey out of many fights easily. 1 is easy and 1 is hard. First I will show the hard one which is whip strike, Now you may all be wondering about the name and how you will not carry a whip with a you. But allow me to demonstrate it. On this tree". going near the tree,

He says "Let your arms free not a single muscle pull in them, Let them fall down like your sleeping, Think of them water, once you the feeling they are not their any longer, You strike, sending a single form your shoulder to bicep to forearm, and lastly at the plam of the hand. All this needs to be done in a second for the maximum power and effect".

Taking the bark of the tree off exposing the wood inside, All look at such display of strike, With many also trying to imitate it, But next words stopped all the guys which were "Now you may all be wondering why I did not show it to the jay as his style of fighting is similar, Now let me tell you all a reason. Only girls slap real men punch".

The demonstration is over now we move to little daniel and zoe also back form their walk, All people leave for their homes.

Now little daniel and system are back in the room, Both laying on the floor and were about to sleep.

system says to little Daniel " You have a reward pending form the james quest". Hearing this little daniel remembers it and replies "We will see it in the morning".

system hearing this adds one more thing "Mother's day is coming soon are you gonna visit her".

Little daniel is shocked out of his sleepy state as he begins to panic and say " Mom I almost forgot about here, I need to contact her that I am back safely, also what should We gift her".

System seeing the sudden change In little daniel tries to clam him down by saying "Hey clam down you can do a surprise visit, also there are 3 days in, We can figure something out of it, also do you think the store will pay me, I left my monthly salary their".

They both sleep only to be awoken the next day to face new struggles.

Story ends here:

Hope you liked this chapter. And pls tell me about vasco. In the furture we will do something with him.

Thank you all for the power stones. I appreciate it. Hope you all will also comment sharing your thoughts about the story.

Have a good day or night peace.


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