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I loathe Canon follow stories like buddy I'll just stick to the original than. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Love the novel; keep working on it and don't listen to people like Hasan_shopnil. However, I wish you wouldn't focus the story so much on other characters and instead delve more into the female main character (FMC). Also, please stop hiding her powers, as it's becoming frustrating. Writing Quality: The writing quality is good. Stability of Updates: I'm not sure about the update schedule. Story Development: The story development is somewhat dull, merely following the original 'Dragon Ball Z' storyline with minimal involvement from the FMC. Why is she just babysitting Gohan and Goku when she already knows what will happen? There seems to be a lack of imagination. World Background: The story is currently just using the original world of 'Dragon Ball Z'. Maybe try exploring other planets and invent new and interesting races.
I had to give at least 1 Star but in my Opinion this fic deserves Negative Stars. I actually never knew a Systemless Fic could be this horrible and It's all because of Strong Acting Weak tag and FMC developing everything with just her Anime knowledge,Respect Man RESPECT,Everything FMC did after reaching the Hyperbolic Time Chamber,from Growing Senzu Beams without knowledge to creating her own dimension and retaining her Appearance of a Kid even after 100 Yrs,Everything is NONSENSE.🤢🤮
Just to be clear, as long as I can release content, I’ll try to release a chapter a day. Honestly, I don’t expect to have much trouble with that, as I write pretty fast. In the future when I finish it, I’ll update the release schedule as necessary. Remember to give feedback and support!
I loathe Canon follow stories like buddy I'll just stick to the original than. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Love the novel; keep working on it and don't listen to people like Hasan_shopnil. However, I wish you wouldn't focus the story so much on other characters and instead delve more into the female main character (FMC). Also, please stop hiding her powers, as it's becoming frustrating. Writing Quality: The writing quality is good. Stability of Updates: I'm not sure about the update schedule. Story Development: The story development is somewhat dull, merely following the original 'Dragon Ball Z' storyline with minimal involvement from the FMC. Why is she just babysitting Gohan and Goku when she already knows what will happen? There seems to be a lack of imagination. World Background: The story is currently just using the original world of 'Dragon Ball Z'. Maybe try exploring other planets and invent new and interesting races.
I had to give at least 1 Star but in my Opinion this fic deserves Negative Stars. I actually never knew a Systemless Fic could be this horrible and It's all because of Strong Acting Weak tag and FMC developing everything with just her Anime knowledge,Respect Man RESPECT,Everything FMC did after reaching the Hyperbolic Time Chamber,from Growing Senzu Beams without knowledge to creating her own dimension and retaining her Appearance of a Kid even after 100 Yrs,Everything is NONSENSE.🤢🤮
Just to be clear, as long as I can release content, I’ll try to release a chapter a day. Honestly, I don’t expect to have much trouble with that, as I write pretty fast. In the future when I finish it, I’ll update the release schedule as necessary. Remember to give feedback and support!
Is it a yuri