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Saga of Atlantis

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Autor: Noob6_writer9

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"Hah..Hah.."
In the midst of what seemed like a battlefield, a young boy with white hair knelt on the ground, struggling to catch shallow breaths. A short sword pierced his heart, his arms and legs were broken, making him unable to stop the crimson blood from coloring the ground.

"That's what you get for betrayal," a red-headed teenage boy sneered as he stood before him.

"A pathetic person like you could never be my brother," added a purple-haired girl, her voice seething with anger, as she stood alongside the redhead.

With great effort, the young boy shifted his gaze forward. He could see many familiar faces in front of him—his so-called family, his so-called friends but his gaze remained fixed on her.

"Wh..y, A.nna," he uttered with immense difficulty and sorrow in his voice, his vision blurring as he locked eyes with the blonde-haired girl, who regarded him with emotionless eyes.

"I did that so I could save you," he said, his voice gradually growing louder.

"I DID THAT SO YOU COULD LIVE!" he shouted, making everyone present flinch in fear.

"I never asked you to do this" the blonde-haired girl replied, her words crushing the very soul of the boy.

"A...nn.a,"

the young boy whispered one last time, a small tear slipping down from his eye as he breathed his final breath.

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Neil survived eight grueling years in a post-apocalyptic world only to die and be reincarnated in the body of Eden Morton, a character from a game he
used to play as a teenager, by an unknown entity for unknown reasons.

Eden's life was a pitiable one, plagued by the constant manipulation and betrayal of those around him – whether it was the princess, the famed hero, or even his very own family. Eden died without ever experiencing genuine love. Now, as Neil took over, he was determined to embark on a new journey, seeking the one thing he and Eden never had : a life worth living.



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    Noob6_writer9

    Hello there! I am the author of this book, and it is my first novel, so please forgive my mistakes . If you notice any, please notify me so that I may correct them as quickly as possible.With that done, let's talk about our MC:1. He will be overpowered, but only at the same level. Anyone with a higher tier than him can defeat him. He analyzes before acting, and he will not put himself in danger if he does not know how to get out of it.2. For the first few arcs, he will behave as any other human would after living years in a post-apocalyptic world. He will be cold and calculate whose vision of good and bad is blurred out.3. If you have any queries concerning the harem, please ask them and I will respond. and I'll do my best to make the harem as reasonable and logical as possible. (You know, the one where one heroine tries to kill another in order to have the MC all to herself.)I welcome any criticism, so please express your thoughts, and I will take them into account in order to make my story worth your time.

    1yr
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    Free1198

    going to the 2nd arc, which unfortunately has skipped major character building, progressions & interactions with named characters, so much so that it felt like instead of a plot hole, we have arc holes, as it felt like there should've been 1~2 arc before he went to the academy, alot of the crucial details that explains his growth and main goal has been completely skipped, so much so that why even bother adding all the parts on his journey, when he could've just be falsely accused while he is studying in the academy, but is still manage to stay there due to it being rumors and lacking evidence? wouldn't that make more sense rather than having to skip arcs just to lead to this academy arc Also, the characters the protagonist has interacted with during his adventures from the 1st arc has been discarded into obscurity, specifically the mentor, the heroine and villainess, It is a waste to not see them at all in the 2nd arc since they have the potential to be with him in the academy as his allies. Also, why isn't he disguised when he enters the academy? couldn't he have received help from a heroine to influence the academy to give him a backdoor entrance as someone else or something? why go through all this annoying drama where everyone wants to pick a fight with him :/, pretty dumb move if i say so myself if you gonna show your face in public after being accused in public for raping the princess and not get worried abt the risk of being assassinated by a 3rd party or something.And lastly another major complaint I have, is the tell but not show, because of the many timeskips, alot of the powers he earned are just randomly popped up out of nowhere, the girls he rizzed are said to be obsessed with him, but where, i cant see it, he only mentioned it in a paragraph, I guess I'll just have to his word for it 👍tl:dr: too much skip, story suffers from tell but not show, and unnecessary drama

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    11mth
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    B0mbaCl0ck

    Doing my duty as a fellow daoist.Is there any Yuri? (hope not)Is there NTR (please no)Is there any posibility for win cest? (hope so)

    1yr
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    sil71
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    In for 158 chapters and here is what I have so far - Everything seems like a forced mystery. He knows there is another reincarnator but doesn’t ask her anything about it, he doesn’t ask his mom or Sarah anything, no questions for his father, the system won’t answer any useful questions - system is basically gone after first arc not that it was much of a use before except to add to the mystery - he’s supposed to hate the princess but hey now he’s buying her some dresses and having a nice sit down at the cafe with her - the 2 year gap with no mention of time spent with the Phoenix sisters….also just let the one sister he doesn’t really like and the other sister hates just force her way into the journey without so much as a reply To me it feels like the author wants to make the MC seem like he doesn’t really care about what’s going on around him, but he keeps making sure the MC gets involved with everything around him. Keep adding intrigue but then do literally nothing to figure it out. I wanted to keep reading, but with with the way the story is crawling forward it just isn’t worth the money man.

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    8mth
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    Donbor_Langstieh

    i need more this is very addicting ,the story so far is very good and the characters are very likeable, the only downside is that it's update are slow hope so the author did not drop this novel

    10mth
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    RiLi88
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    I have deleted my previous review since i dont think he is a SIMP for now...I like the story and the Author delivered it quite well... Things i dont like and the reason i dont give a full 5 stars...the system still a bit annoying coz she keeps interupting the MC quite often...the pace is really slow and the MC still 13 till 55 chaps which is the latest chapter now...because he is still 13 he keeps getting a head pat (twice if i am not wrong) though he is mentally adult(Reason why i hate child MC) He should be more cunning and act like Villain(not the psycho type Villain) and the Author should pick up the pace a little bit... Other than that, this Novel is good and I truly recommend people to give it a shot and read it....

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    1yr
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    DevilsArray

    It's a novel of mc and system and a little bit of plot. First you will feel the villian was wronged by everyone even his family, then again you will know his father was looking out for him by letting him be a disappointment and never warned him about anything. Then the hero comes, but still the novel is all about a system and mc

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    1yr
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    Duke_of_Insanity

    I haven't read the story yet just the summary, but I was going to feel bad for eden at first until the whole "I did this for you" thing. then all I could think is that he kinda deserves it for living solely for a women like that

    11mth
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    Behzod
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    Amazing novel! Really good plot and world building

    5mth
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    Shadow_94

    You know that random thing you do when you’re bored where you go and check the fridge for no reason hoping there’s something new in there even though you checked the fridge mere hours before? That’s what I do with this novel right here. It’s like crack to me and I keep coming back for more. It’s a great read. Author does a good job so far.

    8mth
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    Kary_KD
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    I wanted to give this a 4.3 or even 4.4 but after the time skip it felt like we had missed so much more than we should have from the story. I hope AN would incorporate it in between but time skips for training are fine but gaining new powers that you got from the girls you have conquered feels like we missed a lot, because if i had to choose btw a arc where we get to know about his adventure and what happen in 2 years his fights with different kind of monsters and people, than the teenager drama and bickering with kids, I would choose the 2 year one and slice of life after( just my opinion) this is just me nitpicking stuff that I found annoying. But overall the story is very interesting with time-space availability. I hope the author updates it more regularly because it has a good plot and a storyline 👏.

    10mth
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    Shronit_Maharjan

    it has a lot of potential and it would be nucie if the author can upload the events that happened during time skip

    1yr
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    Arigin

    a wonderful story, pls continue regularly

    11mth
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    UserMod01

    Hey autor-San, are you planning a face-slapping whit that princess? Or some kind of redemption arc? When will the misunderstanding of eden intent of rp will end?

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    11mth
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    Abdou_Mgh

    so far it's going good iIlike the story,and I hope it keep getting better and better

    1yr
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    Sushant_Dabade

    Hallo author, I also like this novel 🤩 I want request you In future plz don't develop relationships between angelica and Eden Novel is good and in next plz explain Story of his mother's background

    1mth
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    CarolineInPajama

    This is very good! everything is great about this book except the Update Stability... please don't drop this novel!

    5mth
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    Ryu929
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    My review after reading till ch 150. Man i am in love with the story. The characters are lovable, the twist and turns in the plot makes me feel like the plot is freaking lasagna. Anyway please keep updating chaps regularly m in love with this story. No that's not right m borderline addicted. I wont be satisfied till i see mc getting together with all the heroines. so please dont give up on the story midway. Goodluck and Zaria is the cutest i wanna see more of her actions. And i hope there are more cuter kids in the future. Spoiler content from here: M really loving grace and sofias characters please make their arc with the mc very romantic i would love to see them happy. But i think theres just too much hate on anna. I hope u haven't planned a bad end for her plz dont do that ok. my poor heart wont be able to take it.

    6mth
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    ElohimOfHope

    The novel is top notch filled with adventure and mystery. The main character has a strong mindset and not going after woman to make them his toy. There is use of common sense in this novel which I rarely find in many novels. It is also fun to read the dialogue and conversation between mc and other people. The fight scene has been depicted properly.

    1yr
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    Animeha228

    Nooooooooooo there was too much of a spoiler at the beginning AUTHOR!!!! In fact, you hinted that closer to the end it would happen that, due to the proximity of space and time, he would return to the girl Nila; this was even a hint at the moment of his death because someone called her at the end of the chapter! It is too obvious that it was our main character and not someone else. There was also a hint from the system that the girl was not crazy or grieving, but lived in honor of him. So I think that in the end the main character and the Nila girl will meet. But I think the main character will not live with her but will return back to the game world. Or will he be reincarnated in the game world after Neil’s death? I don’t know, but I can roughly imagine the ending, purely my reasoning. Author, if this is so, please answer, am I right? Just wondering.

    4mth
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    Volumen 1 : Atlantis

    1. 1
      Whispers of Tragedy Part-1 1 years ago
    2. 2
      Whispers of Tragedy Part -2 1 years ago
    3. 3
      A Glimpse Beyond the Veil 1 years ago
    4. 4
      Uncharted Horizons 1 years ago
    5. 5
      The Ties That Bind 1 years ago
    6. 6
      My System 1 years ago
    7. 7
      Space-time affinity 1 years ago
    8. 8
      Lost Innocence { Eden's Past } 1 years ago
    9. 9
      Mother 1 years ago
    10. 10
      Forgotten Continent And The Human God 1 years ago
    11. 11
      A Private Conversation with Sarah 1 years ago
    12. 12
      Awakening Part-1: Saintess Olivia 1 years ago
    13. 13
      Awakening Part-2: Mana Core 1 years ago
    14. 14
      Awakening Part-3: Glimpse Of Past And Future 1 years ago
    15. 15
      New Features 1 years ago
    16. 16
      Awakening Ceremony part:1 Prelude 1 years ago
    17. 17
      Awakening Ceremony Part:2 1 years ago
    18. 18
      Awakening Ceremony Part:3 Angelina D Merovingian 1 years ago
    19. 19
      Awakening Ceremony Part 4 1 years ago
    20. 20
      Awakening Ceremony Part 5 1 years ago
    21. 21
      Awakening Ceremony Part 6: End 1 years ago
    22. 22
      Leaving the Castle 1 years ago
    23. 23
      Teleportation Portal 1 years ago
    24. 24
      Marinthalis City 1 years ago
    25. 25
      Adventure Guild 1 years ago
    26. 26
      Phoenix Perch 1 years ago
    27. 27
      Future Plans 1 years ago
    28. 28
      kobold's den part 1 1 years ago
    29. 29
      kobold's den part 2 1 years ago
    30. 30
      kobold's den part 3 1 years ago
    31. 31
      [Bonus chapter]kobolds den part 4 1 years ago
    32. 32
      kobolds den part 5: end 1 years ago
    33. 33
      Sylvia Rosalind part :1 1 years ago
    34. 34
      Sylvia Rosalind Part:2 1 years ago
    35. 35
      Mana Sense Part:1 1 years ago
    36. 36
      Mana sense Part:2 1 years ago
    37. 37
      Relaxing talk with Sylvia 1 years ago
    38. 38
      Bandits 1 years ago
    39. 39
      Bandits Part 2 1 years ago
    40. 40
      Bandits Part 3 1 years ago
    41. 41
      Conflict 1 years ago
    42. 42
      Guild master 1 years ago
    43. 43
      Guild Master 2 1 years ago
    44. 44
      Promotion Quest 1 years ago
    45. 45
      Star Sense 1 years ago
    46. 46
      Master 1 years ago
    47. 47
      Bloodline 1 years ago
    48. 48
      Bloodline 2 1 years ago
    49. 49
      Villain 1 years ago
    50. 50
      City of Verdan 1 years ago
    51. 51
      City of Verdan 2 1 years ago
    52. 52
      City of Verdan 3 1 years ago
    53. 53
      Zaira Talon Ondina. 1 years ago
    54. 54
      Zaira Talon Ondina 2 1 years ago
    55. 55
      Villainess Valeria 1 years ago
    56. 56
      Burned 1 years ago
    57. 57
      Aftermath 1 years ago
    58. 58
      Mana And Aura Art's 1 years ago
    59. 59
      Sylvia thoughts. 1 years ago
    60. 60
      Kraken's Domain 1 1 years ago
    61. 61
      kraken's Domain 2 1 years ago
    62. 62
      kraken's domain 3 1 years ago
    63. 63
      kraken's Domain 4 1 years ago
    64. 64
      Nadya Odette Melisande 1 1 years ago
    65. 65
      Nadya Odette Melisande 2 1 years ago
    66. 66
      Soul of higher beings 1 years ago
    67. 67
      {Elixir of Arcane Resonance} 1 years ago
    68. 68
      Main heroine v/s Villain 1 1 years ago
    69. 69
      Main heroine v/s Villain 2 1 years ago
    70. 70
      Another One 1 years ago
    71. 71
      Another one 2 1 years ago
    72. 72
      Passing Time 1 years ago
    73. 73
      Plan 1 years ago
    74. 74
      Destruction of Marinthalis City 1 1 years ago
    75. 75
      Destruction of Marinthalis City 2 1 years ago
    76. 76
      Skipping Levels, Fighting The Boss 1 years ago
    77. 77
      Only One 1 years ago
    78. 78
      Space Warp 1 years ago
    79. 79
      Aftermath of destruction 1 years ago

    Volumen 2 : Vol 2 : First Game

    1. 80
      2 Year's Later 1 years ago
    2. 81
      Mother's Awakening 1 years ago
    3. 82
      Mother's Awakening 2 1 years ago
    4. 83
      Side Story : Angelina 1 years ago
    5. 84
      Prelude Of The First Game 1 years ago
    6. 85
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Emily Michel 1 years ago
    7. 86
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Oracle Royal Academy 1 years ago
    8. 87
      [Entrance Ceremony] Headmaster 1 years ago
    9. 88
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Osmium Class 1 years ago
    10. 89
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Sophia Leoine 1 years ago
    11. 90
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Aeloria Starfayre 12 months ago
    12. 91
      [Entrance Ceremony] Turning Point 1 12 months ago
    13. 92
      [Entrance Ceremony]: Turning Point 2 12 months ago
    14. 93
      [Entrance Ceremony]: Turning Point 3 12 months ago
    15. 94
      [Entrance Ceremony] : Main Antagonist 12 months ago
    16. 95
      The Dumb, The Brightest 12 months ago
    17. 96
      Side Story : Stephanie And Sarah 11 months ago
    18. 97
      Abandoned God 11 months ago
    19. 98
      Art's Class 11 months ago
    20. 99
      Steive Ironheart 11 months ago
    21. 100
      Overpowered 11 months ago
    22. 101
      Past Lover 11 months ago
    23. 102
      Side Story : Grace 11 months ago
    24. 103
      Sarah's Care [R-18] 11 months ago
    25. 104
      Sarah Is Dangerous. 11 months ago
    26. 105
      The Goddess Of Life And Creation 11 months ago
    27. 106
      Evelyn Nightshade 11 months ago
    28. 107
      [Activity Club] Mana Beast club 11 months ago
    29. 108
      [Activity Club] Siblings 11 months ago
    30. 109
      [Activity Club] Lunar Vollyball Club 1 11 months ago
    31. 110
      [Activity Club] Lunar Vollyball Club 2 11 months ago
    32. 111
      [Activity Club] Lunar Vollyball Club 3 11 months ago
    33. 112
      [Activity Club] : Harmony Velvet Club. 11 months ago
    34. 113
      [Activity Club] : Harmony Velvet Club 2 11 months ago
    35. 114
      Main Antagonist 11 months ago
    36. 115
      Rumors 1 11 months ago
    37. 116
      Rumors 2 11 months ago
    38. 117
      [DO NOT UNLOCK] 11 months ago
    39. 118
      Crown's Shrine 1 11 months ago
    40. 119
      Crown's Shrine 2 11 months ago
    41. 120
      Crown's Shrine 3 11 months ago
    42. 121
      Treasure 11 months ago
    43. 122
      On the other side 1 10 months ago
    44. 123
      On the other side 2 10 months ago
    45. 124
      On the other side 3 9 months ago
    46. 125
      Burning flames 9 months ago
    47. 126
      Hollow pit 1 9 months ago
    48. 127
      Hollow pit 2 9 months ago
    49. 128
      A Cruse for Eternity 1 9 months ago
    50. 129
      A Cruse For Eternity 2 9 months ago
    51. 130
      A Cruse For Eternity 3 9 months ago
    52. 131
      A Cruse For Eternity 4 9 months ago
    53. 132
      Abandoning Herself 1 9 months ago
    54. 133
      Abandoning Herself 2 9 months ago
    55. 134
      Abandoning Herself 3 9 months ago
    56. 135
      Abandoning Herself 4 9 months ago
    57. 136
      What they deserved 1 9 months ago
    58. 137
      What They Deserved 2 9 months ago
    59. 138
      What They Deserved 3 9 months ago
    60. 139
      What They Deserved 4 9 months ago
    61. 140
      The God That Denied Reality 9 months ago
    62. 141
      The Child Of Sun 9 months ago
    63. 142
      Starforge Chain. 9 months ago
    64. 143
      Morton family 9 months ago
    65. 144
      Home 9 months ago
    66. 145
      Mother's love 9 months ago
    67. 146
      Mother's love 2 9 months ago
    68. 147
      The One Behind 9 months ago
    69. 148
      What the dad doing...? 9 months ago
    70. 149
      What the dad doing....? [2] 9 months ago
    71. 150
      Dream [1] 9 months ago
    72. 151
      Dream [2] 9 months ago
    73. 152
      Emily [1] 9 months ago
    74. 153
      Emily [2] 8 months ago
    75. 154
      Emily [3] 8 months ago
    76. 155
      Emily [4] 8 months ago
    77. 156
      Spirit Core 8 months ago
    78. 157
      A Love Eternal.. 8 months ago
    79. 158
      Emily [5] 8 months ago
    80. 159
      Limit. 8 months ago
    81. 160
      Sister [1] 8 months ago
    82. 161
      Sister [2] 8 months ago
    83. 162
      Back again. 8 months ago
    84. 163
      Fight. 8 months ago
    85. 164
      Time Affinity. 8 months ago
    86. 165
      Kiss. 8 months ago
    87. 166
      Side story: Grace [2] 8 months ago
    88. 167
      Request. 8 months ago
    89. 168
      Cardin Vs Aron. 8 months ago
    90. 169
      Loved One. 8 months ago
    91. 170
      Struggle 8 months ago
    92. 171
      Flames 8 months ago
    93. 172
      Flames [2] 8 months ago
    94. 173
      Flames [3] 8 months ago
    95. 174
      Flames [4] 8 months ago
    96. 175
      Flames [5] 8 months ago
    97. 176
      Nadya [1] 8 months ago
    98. 177
      Nadya [2] 7 months ago
    99. 178
      Nadya [3] 7 months ago
    100. 179
      Nadya [4] 7 months ago
    101. 180
      Wolf, rabbit and fox. 7 months ago
    102. 181
      Door. 7 months ago
    103. 182
      Nadya [5] R-18 7 months ago
    104. 183
      Shadmot City 7 months ago
    105. 184
      Blood beast 7 months ago
    106. 185
      City [2] 7 months ago
    107. 186
      City [3] 7 months ago
    108. 187
      [City] [4] 6 months ago
    109. 188
      City [5] 6 months ago
    110. 189
      City [6] 6 months ago
    111. 190
      Underground [1] 5 months ago
    112. 191
      Underground [2] 5 months ago
    113. 192
      Underground [3] 4 months ago
    114. 193
      Underground [4] 4 months ago
    115. 194
      Underground [5] 4 months ago