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I'm sure everyone has probably seen the influx of self inserts into lizard peter recently. It's a great premise that puts a fresh spin on an old hero. This fic manages to portray the MC as actually smart without just saying so. There is actual geneticist lingo, a coherent and streamlined plot that isn't full of cringe and edge and MOST IMPORTANTLY, A LIKEABLE ACTUALLY INTELLIGENT MC. Thanks author!
this is an absolutely incredible fic, the characters are all written so well the emotional turmoil is realistic there is no overly edgy moments. I can only hope and pray you will continue this
Похоже здесь все пишут на английском. Но я не американец, поэтому пишу на русском. Наткнулся на фф по случайности и хочу сказать, что эта история захватывающие. Подробно описаны детали, и мне это нравиться. В большинстве таких историй силу главный герой берёт силу буквально из воздуха, а тут все проработано. Гг учится на ошибках, как легендарный Тони Старк. В общем мне понравилось респект автору данного произведения.
Вера в работу утеряна удалил 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
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One of the best marvel fan fic out her in webnovel. Why you ask because author have use every bit of brain to cook up this story. It has everything you could and for smart, use the resources, and anti- hero type. Little bit of romance with character development, unseen darkness of the marvel universe. And using pester intellect to do think which Peter himself forgets. Anyway thankyou fir the work I hope to see you back.
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One of the best Marvel fanfictions, with a balanced MC who is neither absurdly cruel nor ridiculously compassionate. I would have liked him to keep the memories of the original Peter, I think it would be better for the story, but hey I can understand if the author doesn't want that. I would add that I didn't like the name of the fanfiction, because I wasn't interested in a half-lizard MC. This put me off reading for a long time, but I was wrong, it's incredible. For those who are hesitant because of this, know that it is more of a “Draconic Adventure” than a “Reptilian Adventure”, which changes everything.
I really like this fanfic but they take a long time to update it I wish it was faster
love it so far man! i hope everything’s alright for you at college. take your time and keep it up!
Really good story.I hope you don't drop it, and give us new chapters soon🙏🏻
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masterpiece. The author enriches the work with well -applied scientific knowledge, addressing aspects and progression of the creation of fluid and mastral powers. Romance in the right measure, not forced with mutual growth of the characters Personal criticism.: Uninstructed and very sparse villains, perhaps not the best moment psra interactions with X-Man and other characters outside Panteon Spider, being the creation of the arcs around the villains and not the MC. The MC and its Ghoul Ego also did not take as well as I imagined. I hope to see your most relevant LIZARD version
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This is perfection. Peter is smart but flawed, the villains aren't idiots, the plot is fresh and stimulating, Ben is alive, the romance is wholesome and Gwen is best girl. Absolute 10/10
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One of the best spider-man fics out there. Combines the peter parker intelligence and the powers perfectly
I like it. It's good. MC is a pretty smart guy, and not the kind that's actually stupid. The story is slow paced, but not overly so. Writing quality is excellent, no grammatical errors or word vomit. World could use a bit more development. Character design is sexy, i like it. Interactions between characters is natural so far. Over all a gem, i recommend. Wonder if well get the whole spiderverse situation involved, well see. Impressive work author 👍.
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A peter parker with common, he has morals, quite smart, and willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Truly a masterpiece of a character
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Its good and worth your time, thats all you need to know to get into the book, so get yourself a hit on this wonderful masterpiece. Also it updates quick so bonus points for that.
good novel,good story, im excited what would he look like when fused with the extremis . i imagined that it would look something like the pic below
It is still 9 chapters but I loved it. I like how the research have some weight to it. Rather than a one day created power. It is more realistic and interest me a lot. Other than that, I recommend author to try have other person pov one in a while for world building like gwen for example. Overall it is an amazing novel. Goodluck author!
I'm sure everyone has probably seen the influx of self inserts into lizard peter recently. It's a great premise that puts a fresh spin on an old hero. This fic manages to portray the MC as actually smart without just saying so. There is actual geneticist lingo, a coherent and streamlined plot that isn't full of cringe and edge and MOST IMPORTANTLY, A LIKEABLE ACTUALLY INTELLIGENT MC. Thanks author!
this is an absolutely incredible fic, the characters are all written so well the emotional turmoil is realistic there is no overly edgy moments. I can only hope and pray you will continue this
Похоже здесь все пишут на английском. Но я не американец, поэтому пишу на русском. Наткнулся на фф по случайности и хочу сказать, что эта история захватывающие. Подробно описаны детали, и мне это нравиться. В большинстве таких историй силу главный герой берёт силу буквально из воздуха, а тут все проработано. Гг учится на ошибках, как легендарный Тони Старк. В общем мне понравилось респект автору данного произведения.
Вера в работу утеряна удалил 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
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One of the best marvel fan fic out her in webnovel. Why you ask because author have use every bit of brain to cook up this story. It has everything you could and for smart, use the resources, and anti- hero type. Little bit of romance with character development, unseen darkness of the marvel universe. And using pester intellect to do think which Peter himself forgets. Anyway thankyou fir the work I hope to see you back.
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One of the best Marvel fanfictions, with a balanced MC who is neither absurdly cruel nor ridiculously compassionate. I would have liked him to keep the memories of the original Peter, I think it would be better for the story, but hey I can understand if the author doesn't want that. I would add that I didn't like the name of the fanfiction, because I wasn't interested in a half-lizard MC. This put me off reading for a long time, but I was wrong, it's incredible. For those who are hesitant because of this, know that it is more of a “Draconic Adventure” than a “Reptilian Adventure”, which changes everything.
I really like this fanfic but they take a long time to update it I wish it was faster
love it so far man! i hope everything’s alright for you at college. take your time and keep it up!
Really good story.I hope you don't drop it, and give us new chapters soon🙏🏻
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Spoiler enthüllen masterpiece. The author enriches the work with well -applied scientific knowledge, addressing aspects and progression of the creation of fluid and mastral powers. Romance in the right measure, not forced with mutual growth of the characters Personal criticism.: Uninstructed and very sparse villains, perhaps not the best moment psra interactions with X-Man and other characters outside Panteon Spider, being the creation of the arcs around the villains and not the MC. The MC and its Ghoul Ego also did not take as well as I imagined. I hope to see your most relevant LIZARD version
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This is perfection. Peter is smart but flawed, the villains aren't idiots, the plot is fresh and stimulating, Ben is alive, the romance is wholesome and Gwen is best girl. Absolute 10/10
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One of the best spider-man fics out there. Combines the peter parker intelligence and the powers perfectly
I like it. It's good. MC is a pretty smart guy, and not the kind that's actually stupid. The story is slow paced, but not overly so. Writing quality is excellent, no grammatical errors or word vomit. World could use a bit more development. Character design is sexy, i like it. Interactions between characters is natural so far. Over all a gem, i recommend. Wonder if well get the whole spiderverse situation involved, well see. Impressive work author 👍.
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A peter parker with common, he has morals, quite smart, and willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Truly a masterpiece of a character
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Its good and worth your time, thats all you need to know to get into the book, so get yourself a hit on this wonderful masterpiece. Also it updates quick so bonus points for that.
good novel,good story, im excited what would he look like when fused with the extremis . i imagined that it would look something like the pic below
It is still 9 chapters but I loved it. I like how the research have some weight to it. Rather than a one day created power. It is more realistic and interest me a lot. Other than that, I recommend author to try have other person pov one in a while for world building like gwen for example. Overall it is an amazing novel. Goodluck author!