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* I read up to chapter 25* Story 5/5 Grammer 4/5 Storytelling 3/5 Pace 5/5 MC’s growth 5/5 This novel is somewhat unique , [SPOILERS STARTS] the MC grew up in poverty alongside his lil bro and mother who both eventually die which makes him want to get revenge for them against a kingdom and a pirate crew, the MC unlocks a minor aspect of observation Haki pretty early on due to his many hunting sessions. After leaving the first island he finds a devil fruit which seems to be a wind type devil fruit (we still don’t know the type) and his progress with the devil fruit is good but not ridiculously. The only problem I see very often in this novel is that the MC sometimes thinks in 3rd person. Overall rating 4.5/5 (up to ch25)
To all those who like one piece I recommend reading this man's book it is fantastic I cannot put it down each chapter I read I died to know what happens next And I hope all of you would love to read as well as much as I do and I hope you and your friends who share this with give him your honest opinion cause I will not stop reading this no matter what
The story and plot are on point and the characters are good. Only the writing needs a bit of refinement. Good job author, your story gets a well deserved 4/5 for me.
* I read up to chapter 25* Story 5/5 Grammer 4/5 Storytelling 3/5 Pace 5/5 MC’s growth 5/5 This novel is somewhat unique , [SPOILERS STARTS] the MC grew up in poverty alongside his lil bro and mother who both eventually die which makes him want to get revenge for them against a kingdom and a pirate crew, the MC unlocks a minor aspect of observation Haki pretty early on due to his many hunting sessions. After leaving the first island he finds a devil fruit which seems to be a wind type devil fruit (we still don’t know the type) and his progress with the devil fruit is good but not ridiculously. The only problem I see very often in this novel is that the MC sometimes thinks in 3rd person. Overall rating 4.5/5 (up to ch25)
To all those who like one piece I recommend reading this man's book it is fantastic I cannot put it down each chapter I read I died to know what happens next And I hope all of you would love to read as well as much as I do and I hope you and your friends who share this with give him your honest opinion cause I will not stop reading this no matter what
The story and plot are on point and the characters are good. Only the writing needs a bit of refinement. Good job author, your story gets a well deserved 4/5 for me.