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Very fun. It bothers me that there is no balance and some mental gymnastics for the characters BUT no harem 100%. fr fr very good. Wish Luffy made a marine crew that mirrors the original but idk what the author plans to do with him
It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation I like that it different with original story.. MC/Ace doesn't afraid to change the future (Sabo doesn't amnesia, Ace have different crew, Luffy became marine, etc).. What I don't like much is Ace crew is from different anime, like Soma, Vash etc.. And why Blackbeard/Teach is a good guy (he's Whitebeard real son).. And I dissapointed that you kill Enel after he join Ace crew, just to give his Devil Fruit to Sabo author san.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
(WARNING, THERE ARE SPOILERS!!!!) this is a very good fanfic, here the MC doesn't feel like an outsider, but a native of this world, having knowledge about this world, but you still feel that Ace can act carefree, but is still a character changed a lot after the merger of two soul worlds, the main thing is that the author tries to come up with his own tricks of the world, for example, Teach is the real son of Whitebeard, who is devoted to him just like Ace in the original. In the last chapters of the fanfic, the characters, in my opinion, grow up, begin to understand that they cannot will always be lucky, but for the fact that they realized this, they paid with the life of a member of their team!!
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It’s honestly one of the best written one piece fics on this app. I’m not sure if I’ll keep reading since I personally really wanted to keep Yamato as the only female lead and started excited because of the no harem tag,(I really love that tag and wish it were used more often) the author might be adding another female lead😔. But that is just a personal preference of mine and doesn’t reflect the quality of writing, which is great. Though, author, I recommend if you go through with the two girls thing that you add a harem tag and remove the no harem tag, it will alleviate a lot of frustration and stop readers from leavening hate out of frustration, and will make sure only those interested will read and you will get good and honest reviews. Thanks again for the awsome read🙏
This is far better than most of the one piece fanfics, The Mc is a little OP since the start but its not that bad to read. For one-piece fans this is good but i got quite bored in the last chapters.
Nice.yup, that's it, what you expected more.nah fam.I believe in superiority like this one
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Good story and start if a bit op but his journey and actions after dawn island are just so far out of left field that it feels like a whole diffrent character. who goes from kind boy who wished for his parents happiness and loved his siblings sabo and luffy to unrepentant mass murderer who inherited rocks will and the desire to rule the world. ooc ace and blackbeard ruined, but I would recommend for those who like world domination and easy curbstomp victory for the mc and props to the author for consistent updates and good grammar
The only thing unbearable in this story.Blackbeard becomes a good person and joins Ace and his crew.Blackbeard is one of the only true pirates in One Piece. (For his cruelty, disloyalty and cruelty) Being loyal to Ace makes the story weird and Scary
Pretty good, a nice read to everyone that cried on Ace's death. Now onto another matter, the mc has 2 souls fused, so it's safe to assume he can get another fruit right? If so i suggest the heat fruit, just imagine the heat fruit empowering the powers of the mera mera no mi. Oh, and given that Sabo will not get the mera mera, can he get the Uo Uo no mi when Ace goes to Wano to get Yamato? Thank you for this nice fanfic.
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an excellent story but one question, is herpa the love interest? .....................................................................................................................................
Brilliant. I am liking the way you're developing Ace and his crew. The pace is also good alongside the grammar. Can't wait for more chapters. I am shocked by such low traffic on the story, but I know it'll pick up soon.
a bit to many OC character that are from different anime, hope it lessens a bit. besides that its a really great read
Good story. As a fan of One Piece and a writer of One Piece stories myself I want you to keep up the good work. Really, this is excellent and I hope you continue until the end.
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Love the story so far, very enjoyable. Hope you write until completion. .......................................................................................................
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I expect a lot from this fic, I just wish that if I eat his fruit I'm sick of the few ACE fics ignoring the fire logia fruit saying they don't need it
honestly its great so far i always wanted ace to be something bigger so by the pace ur going it seems its going to be great so thanks and dont drop it
As a One piece fan, you already have my full attention. —An advice from me to the Author... I don't how this story will develope good or flop, whatever happens... I only have one request, don't drop it before completing it.
Haven’t read yet mainly making this review so the author will hopefully see this. Is this story dropped? I’ve been looking for an ace fanfic but don’t even wanna start if it’s dropped at water 7.
Very fun. It bothers me that there is no balance and some mental gymnastics for the characters BUT no harem 100%. fr fr very good. Wish Luffy made a marine crew that mirrors the original but idk what the author plans to do with him
It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation I like that it different with original story.. MC/Ace doesn't afraid to change the future (Sabo doesn't amnesia, Ace have different crew, Luffy became marine, etc).. What I don't like much is Ace crew is from different anime, like Soma, Vash etc.. And why Blackbeard/Teach is a good guy (he's Whitebeard real son).. And I dissapointed that you kill Enel after he join Ace crew, just to give his Devil Fruit to Sabo author san.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
(WARNING, THERE ARE SPOILERS!!!!) this is a very good fanfic, here the MC doesn't feel like an outsider, but a native of this world, having knowledge about this world, but you still feel that Ace can act carefree, but is still a character changed a lot after the merger of two soul worlds, the main thing is that the author tries to come up with his own tricks of the world, for example, Teach is the real son of Whitebeard, who is devoted to him just like Ace in the original. In the last chapters of the fanfic, the characters, in my opinion, grow up, begin to understand that they cannot will always be lucky, but for the fact that they realized this, they paid with the life of a member of their team!!
Spoiler enthüllen It’s honestly one of the best written one piece fics on this app. I’m not sure if I’ll keep reading since I personally really wanted to keep Yamato as the only female lead and started excited because of the no harem tag,(I really love that tag and wish it were used more often) the author might be adding another female lead😔. But that is just a personal preference of mine and doesn’t reflect the quality of writing, which is great. Though, author, I recommend if you go through with the two girls thing that you add a harem tag and remove the no harem tag, it will alleviate a lot of frustration and stop readers from leavening hate out of frustration, and will make sure only those interested will read and you will get good and honest reviews. Thanks again for the awsome read🙏
This is far better than most of the one piece fanfics, The Mc is a little OP since the start but its not that bad to read. For one-piece fans this is good but i got quite bored in the last chapters.
Nice.yup, that's it, what you expected more.nah fam.I believe in superiority like this one
Spoiler enthüllen Good story and start if a bit op but his journey and actions after dawn island are just so far out of left field that it feels like a whole diffrent character. who goes from kind boy who wished for his parents happiness and loved his siblings sabo and luffy to unrepentant mass murderer who inherited rocks will and the desire to rule the world. ooc ace and blackbeard ruined, but I would recommend for those who like world domination and easy curbstomp victory for the mc and props to the author for consistent updates and good grammar
The only thing unbearable in this story.Blackbeard becomes a good person and joins Ace and his crew.Blackbeard is one of the only true pirates in One Piece. (For his cruelty, disloyalty and cruelty) Being loyal to Ace makes the story weird and Scary
Pretty good, a nice read to everyone that cried on Ace's death. Now onto another matter, the mc has 2 souls fused, so it's safe to assume he can get another fruit right? If so i suggest the heat fruit, just imagine the heat fruit empowering the powers of the mera mera no mi. Oh, and given that Sabo will not get the mera mera, can he get the Uo Uo no mi when Ace goes to Wano to get Yamato? Thank you for this nice fanfic.
Spoiler enthüllen an excellent story but one question, is herpa the love interest? .....................................................................................................................................
Brilliant. I am liking the way you're developing Ace and his crew. The pace is also good alongside the grammar. Can't wait for more chapters. I am shocked by such low traffic on the story, but I know it'll pick up soon.
a bit to many OC character that are from different anime, hope it lessens a bit. besides that its a really great read
Good story. As a fan of One Piece and a writer of One Piece stories myself I want you to keep up the good work. Really, this is excellent and I hope you continue until the end.
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Love the story so far, very enjoyable. Hope you write until completion. .......................................................................................................
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I expect a lot from this fic, I just wish that if I eat his fruit I'm sick of the few ACE fics ignoring the fire logia fruit saying they don't need it
honestly its great so far i always wanted ace to be something bigger so by the pace ur going it seems its going to be great so thanks and dont drop it
As a One piece fan, you already have my full attention. —An advice from me to the Author... I don't how this story will develope good or flop, whatever happens... I only have one request, don't drop it before completing it.
Haven’t read yet mainly making this review so the author will hopefully see this. Is this story dropped? I’ve been looking for an ace fanfic but don’t even wanna start if it’s dropped at water 7.