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All right if you have any any type of brain cells, I can run together don’t read this. This is bad it’s real real bad luck. The author is making the worst main character. Naïve trying to be manipulative but really freaking stupid decisions mom and then the world. wow dude that’s sick. It’s just it’s not fun at all. If you’re looking for a weirdo go for Breaux if you feel like that have fun, but man if you are normal runaway runaway.
iba más o menos bien pero cuando llegue a eso de los padres que actúan de padres sustitutos, teniendo sexo con más personas para tener hijos... fue demasiado para mí, dique llevar a otro hombre a la casa mientras se tiene el hijo de otro... naaaaaaa demasiado para mí . No sé si ese es un fetiche del autor y si lo tendrá en sus otras novelas pero ojalá no sea así
Cheer up 👍 Cheer up 👍 Veo una gran similitud con las obra de Slayer pero aún así no quita el echo de que me gustan ese tipo de desarrollo con tal el protagonista no sea traicionado es más que suficiente para la obra.
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I won't go too deep into this, but to summarize, is it an 18+ romance where some women close to the MC stay with other guys? I don't know, I just saw a comment saying netorare, I went to check out chapter 105 and I didn't really like the situation (of course I didn't read the novel so I released chapter 105 and saw that it wasn't my taste and left soon) I hope I helped PS: I only give 4 stars for judging the novel without completely understanding the situation
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Rocky start at first, then there are some interesting chapters, but for me, the mom being a surrogate(not IVF) and her wanting the Mc to be okay with it and with clients sleeping in their house was a bit much for me. I know different universe and all, but no, I'm not going there. you could say this is NRT from son POV.
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Not gonna lie I have been looking for a book exactly like this my hole life and I finnaly found it thank you so much for writing this book author keep uo the great work.
Like story so far but see you have updated in 10 days. Are you no longer writing it or just taking a short break?
i like it more than i thought i would and im enjoying how everything is going so far apart from the chapters where the mc was a bit impulsive with the situation regarding his mom and dad but apart from that i like it...i just wish there were like hundreds of chapters to read though
Not a review but rather a respectful warning!!I see some of you come into comment sections or reviews and end up attacking me instead of what you dislike about the book.I get that the platform has given readers opportunities to air their opinions but I'd remind everyone that your opinion about my characters or the book in general shouldn't give you the right to insult me or say anything that's in anyway degrading to me. This has gone on for way too long.
What are your plans for the size of the harem?.................................................. ............................................................... ..........
I like the story. I also like all the characters in the story but I don't like the MC. because MC is stupid. I have read it many story but I have never seen a stupidest MC like this before. every time I read the story I like it but when I read about MC doing something stupid I feel like punching him in the face. I am really frustrated about MC so if you don't mind can you change his character or personality or remove his stupidness. create a MC that has his emotion control and can understand many thing if no one tells him about any thing. what I mean to say is MC should have a general knowledge like other stories MC does. and don't tell me that you want to create a unique MC. everyone likes the general MC so give them the general MC.
Це справді майстерність так писати, щоб було незрозуміло ні загальний фон світу, ні персонажі, ні загальні цілі. І ще цей всюдисущий латентний куколдинг, навчили любити використаних шльондр замість чистих.
It's a fun read. The mc is just too funny but somehow author balances it up with dope story. I love it ...
My new favorite hardening medicine finally found a replacement for the INSGreat job author
Shameless authors's review..This book is me venturing into new territories. The world design and character building only gets better as we progress. Give it a try if you are up for one heck of an adventure.
I just hope sometimes you experience what the MC in your story experienced. Enjoy your life and good luck. When I first read this story I was quite interested, but after a few chapters I read and I thought, well this novel is not for me.
All right if you have any any type of brain cells, I can run together don’t read this. This is bad it’s real real bad luck. The author is making the worst main character. Naïve trying to be manipulative but really freaking stupid decisions mom and then the world. wow dude that’s sick. It’s just it’s not fun at all. If you’re looking for a weirdo go for Breaux if you feel like that have fun, but man if you are normal runaway runaway.
iba más o menos bien pero cuando llegue a eso de los padres que actúan de padres sustitutos, teniendo sexo con más personas para tener hijos... fue demasiado para mí, dique llevar a otro hombre a la casa mientras se tiene el hijo de otro... naaaaaaa demasiado para mí . No sé si ese es un fetiche del autor y si lo tendrá en sus otras novelas pero ojalá no sea así
Cheer up 👍 Cheer up 👍 Veo una gran similitud con las obra de Slayer pero aún así no quita el echo de que me gustan ese tipo de desarrollo con tal el protagonista no sea traicionado es más que suficiente para la obra.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
I won't go too deep into this, but to summarize, is it an 18+ romance where some women close to the MC stay with other guys? I don't know, I just saw a comment saying netorare, I went to check out chapter 105 and I didn't really like the situation (of course I didn't read the novel so I released chapter 105 and saw that it wasn't my taste and left soon) I hope I helped PS: I only give 4 stars for judging the novel without completely understanding the situation
Spoiler enthüllen Rocky start at first, then there are some interesting chapters, but for me, the mom being a surrogate(not IVF) and her wanting the Mc to be okay with it and with clients sleeping in their house was a bit much for me. I know different universe and all, but no, I'm not going there. you could say this is NRT from son POV.
Spoiler enthüllen Not gonna lie I have been looking for a book exactly like this my hole life and I finnaly found it thank you so much for writing this book author keep uo the great work.
Like story so far but see you have updated in 10 days. Are you no longer writing it or just taking a short break?
i like it more than i thought i would and im enjoying how everything is going so far apart from the chapters where the mc was a bit impulsive with the situation regarding his mom and dad but apart from that i like it...i just wish there were like hundreds of chapters to read though
Not a review but rather a respectful warning!!I see some of you come into comment sections or reviews and end up attacking me instead of what you dislike about the book.I get that the platform has given readers opportunities to air their opinions but I'd remind everyone that your opinion about my characters or the book in general shouldn't give you the right to insult me or say anything that's in anyway degrading to me. This has gone on for way too long.
What are your plans for the size of the harem?.................................................. ............................................................... ..........
I like the story. I also like all the characters in the story but I don't like the MC. because MC is stupid. I have read it many story but I have never seen a stupidest MC like this before. every time I read the story I like it but when I read about MC doing something stupid I feel like punching him in the face. I am really frustrated about MC so if you don't mind can you change his character or personality or remove his stupidness. create a MC that has his emotion control and can understand many thing if no one tells him about any thing. what I mean to say is MC should have a general knowledge like other stories MC does. and don't tell me that you want to create a unique MC. everyone likes the general MC so give them the general MC.
Це справді майстерність так писати, щоб було незрозуміло ні загальний фон світу, ні персонажі, ні загальні цілі. І ще цей всюдисущий латентний куколдинг, навчили любити використаних шльондр замість чистих.
It's a fun read. The mc is just too funny but somehow author balances it up with dope story. I love it ...
My new favorite hardening medicine finally found a replacement for the INSGreat job author
Shameless authors's review..This book is me venturing into new territories. The world design and character building only gets better as we progress. Give it a try if you are up for one heck of an adventure.
I just hope sometimes you experience what the MC in your story experienced. Enjoy your life and good luck. When I first read this story I was quite interested, but after a few chapters I read and I thought, well this novel is not for me.