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I will say that the story is good and interesting so far, but not that the chapters are too short, but not much really happens in them. Based on how far along the story has progressed, it doesn’t seem like there is 23 chapters. A lot of the stuff that has happened could have been said or done in about ten chapters without it being fast paced. Because like the entire summon and first interaction took 8 chapters when it could have been like 2. Overall still interesting though.
Easy to read and Understand. Typical hero summoning. Writing of Mc and other hero's is really weird, especially during the endurance part, I'm still confused how he came first. Mc feels no different from typical isekai protagonist. Thankfully, no romance or harem.
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Hey, writing this to help convince you to try this story, should the following elements for it's future direction strike your fancy. First, no romance as was written in the description. No harem. The MC will not get into romantic relationships. The MC slowly changes in regards to their morality. So it will be a handful of arcs before any distinct negative, darker qualities manifest in the protagonist (no set number of arcs). Along the lines of ruthless, more pragmatic qualities. The MC is not a schemer, more of a fighter, but there will be some strategies deployed by the MC down the road. The MC will not reveal to others that he has the system. Nor will he just give his rewards he gets from his system to others. Even with the system, the MC wont have it easy, the MC will go through a lot. It wont only take place on a classic fantasy world, the MC will travel to different worlds but will be a while before that happens. Lastly, nothing is particularly set in stone, but this is where my head is at for where I want the story to go.
Spoiler enthüllen I will say that the story is good and interesting so far, but not that the chapters are too short, but not much really happens in them. Based on how far along the story has progressed, it doesn’t seem like there is 23 chapters. A lot of the stuff that has happened could have been said or done in about ten chapters without it being fast paced. Because like the entire summon and first interaction took 8 chapters when it could have been like 2. Overall still interesting though.
Easy to read and Understand. Typical hero summoning. Writing of Mc and other hero's is really weird, especially during the endurance part, I'm still confused how he came first. Mc feels no different from typical isekai protagonist. Thankfully, no romance or harem.
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Hey, writing this to help convince you to try this story, should the following elements for it's future direction strike your fancy. First, no romance as was written in the description. No harem. The MC will not get into romantic relationships. The MC slowly changes in regards to their morality. So it will be a handful of arcs before any distinct negative, darker qualities manifest in the protagonist (no set number of arcs). Along the lines of ruthless, more pragmatic qualities. The MC is not a schemer, more of a fighter, but there will be some strategies deployed by the MC down the road. The MC will not reveal to others that he has the system. Nor will he just give his rewards he gets from his system to others. Even with the system, the MC wont have it easy, the MC will go through a lot. It wont only take place on a classic fantasy world, the MC will travel to different worlds but will be a while before that happens. Lastly, nothing is particularly set in stone, but this is where my head is at for where I want the story to go.
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