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This is some professional level writing,the character building is amazingthe world building is also 10/10everyone feels alive and unique, the conversations actually feel human, the interactions are nigh impeccable I'm honestly amazed by everything this novel has to offerEven how smooth the author is with the main characters own unique personality, like i find it so awesome that he has a trauma or panic attack when buneary is away from him for even a moment, and it just so subtly gets introduced without being told it's amazing how everything just blends in perfectly and in harmony, the battles are in depth and the adventures actually leave a very good impression, the slice of life here and there are also so we'll mixed it I'm just loving this novel, keep up the great work
I don’t usually wright reviews but this story is written so well I just had to. This is one of the best stories I have read on this app and that says a ton if you look at my reading time. Keep up the amazing work I’ll be waiting for the new chapters!!!
Really entertaining story, I enjoy reading it a lot. Whoever, BIG WARNING: The Mc does... unalive a child still inside the egg. It's way more complex than that since the child isn't really dead, he was kinda manipulated(not controlled), it's probably necesary to save the world, one of his pokemon just passed and he was coping like crazy. It still feels terrible and it's worse when we get the pov of the egg. If the purpose was making the reader feel like shit, the author nailed it, he cooked indeed
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The MC is really annoying to me, along with some harem members (Zoey and Akari (don't know why)), biggest reason I don't give this story three stars is because some Pokémons are in the harem (without the downside of having a "human form"). Anyways, read it if you want to, it's good enough to kill time without issues.
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The story in of itself is great, no doubt about that. The author has put thought over the story However, I feel like the story focuses TOO MUCH on the tidbits and stuff that you can't but help be bored or crushed with too many info dumps that is of no use like for example, they read about dietary needs, cool, but why gotta I read how much calories Buneary needs, what amount of protein, fats, etc she needs, etc...It might have been a good addition to the story if it was about a Pokemon Chef or something but here it just feels like unnecessary info that the reader will forget after 5 minutes of reading it Maybe it's because I'm not the target audience for this story but I can't help but feel that the story should focus more on the journey (like the title suggests) and less on unnecessary things like dietary plans, how much to heat the pans, which oils were used to cook food, etc
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Honestly the best pokemon fic I have read so far. Good story, good dialogue, good characters, good world building, good everything.
The first 20 chapters are some of the best in the pokemon space with surviving and making it in a dark world, and then it becomes this weird cringe sexual thing with his pokemon. it's actually so sad how hard this story fell off. went from binging the story to not even able to finish it
This fanfiction is surprisingly very good 👍. Not only does this story of actually character growth but progression of other characters as well. The Grammer is really good and the characters are flushed out. There isn't any "Plot" yet but it does have some very wholesome romantic moments.
This is one of my favorite Pokémon fanfics. This probably has the best writing quality of anything I've read on web novel the only problem is updates.
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Very refreshing surprisingly and I wish there are more chapters but it is what it is
Well written with the rare very minor spelling/grammatical mistakes. World building is great with the author setting up a more believable and what I think would be a more realistic view of how wild pokemon would really behave off route. Good character development so far as well (note: I am only on Chapter 17 of 20 right as of writing this). I only rated the “Updating Stability” a 3/5 because I haven’t seen an update since I started reading this story…..although that’s most likely more due to the fact that my reading speed far exceeds an authors upload speed so take that with a grain of salt…my reading speed is fast enough that whenever I find a story that piques my interest, I can usually start and finish reading it within a few days at most so the authors usually dont have the time to make a new chapter before I’m finished reading what’s already been uploaded (which is why I normally wait for multiple chapters of my favorite stories to be uploaded before reading them all in one go). Everything else though is a 5/5, rating wise. Overall, great story with believable world and characters with distinct, unique personalities so far!
This is THE best pokemon fic i've ever read, if you looking for a good story about pokemon, then this is one of the best to read, also Author, amazing book, keep up the good work.
i really enjoy reading this as the story is very unique and well written. Author manages to find balance between a slice of life type story with battles and adventures here and there such that it is very enjoyable to read. The technical details and world background might be lacking when compared to other fics like Pokemon AU Adventures or Master of Tactics but overall it is still very good. Chapter lengths are superb and there are no info dumps. Power scaling are also logical and the constant twist and turns keeps me intrigued. A very reccomended read.
Pokemon gotta catch em all especially this story it is so good I am immensely happy dopamine go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'm kinda bamboozled this isn't on the top 10 leader-board the writing is well done and the charaterbuilding is great as well im glad I get to read this truly impressive.
Long Chapters has a lot of potential already doing well if they stay consistent I can see this being the number one pokemon fan fiction soon.
This is a great story so far (Ch.12) the start is a little slow and the Mc seems unlikeable but it changes over the course of the next few chapters. All in all the story is greatly written and is a good read besides the Mc’s cringe worthy name. P.s. The mc’s starter is a love interest
Me encanta la trama y la historia, estoy esperando con ansias el como se desarrolla esto, el avance es lento pero es lo mejor para poder adaptarse al mundo con más detalle. 10/10. Me gustaría el consultar si,¿el avance amoroso lo va a tener el protagonista (Bien) o los Pokémon (Mucho mejor), de forma que el protagonista no se de cuenta de lo que está pasando?
very good story with real, very long chapters, I just find it disappointing that the author goes through the training phases so quickly but hey, we're still at the beginning, it's definitely going to come later
It's hard to find a pokemon fic that doesn't follow the linear path of the manga/anime, I'm excited to see what those author can do with this.
quality chapters and long winded is the perfect type of book for slow readers such as myself... I cant wait to see what happens next... keep up the awesome work!!!
It's really hard to find this type of quality on webnovel definitely a worthwhile read im going to be happy when more chapters are released.
This is some professional level writing,the character building is amazingthe world building is also 10/10everyone feels alive and unique, the conversations actually feel human, the interactions are nigh impeccable I'm honestly amazed by everything this novel has to offerEven how smooth the author is with the main characters own unique personality, like i find it so awesome that he has a trauma or panic attack when buneary is away from him for even a moment, and it just so subtly gets introduced without being told it's amazing how everything just blends in perfectly and in harmony, the battles are in depth and the adventures actually leave a very good impression, the slice of life here and there are also so we'll mixed it I'm just loving this novel, keep up the great work
I don’t usually wright reviews but this story is written so well I just had to. This is one of the best stories I have read on this app and that says a ton if you look at my reading time. Keep up the amazing work I’ll be waiting for the new chapters!!!
Really entertaining story, I enjoy reading it a lot. Whoever, BIG WARNING: The Mc does... unalive a child still inside the egg. It's way more complex than that since the child isn't really dead, he was kinda manipulated(not controlled), it's probably necesary to save the world, one of his pokemon just passed and he was coping like crazy. It still feels terrible and it's worse when we get the pov of the egg. If the purpose was making the reader feel like shit, the author nailed it, he cooked indeed
Spoiler enthüllen The MC is really annoying to me, along with some harem members (Zoey and Akari (don't know why)), biggest reason I don't give this story three stars is because some Pokémons are in the harem (without the downside of having a "human form"). Anyways, read it if you want to, it's good enough to kill time without issues.
Spoiler enthüllen The story in of itself is great, no doubt about that. The author has put thought over the story However, I feel like the story focuses TOO MUCH on the tidbits and stuff that you can't but help be bored or crushed with too many info dumps that is of no use like for example, they read about dietary needs, cool, but why gotta I read how much calories Buneary needs, what amount of protein, fats, etc she needs, etc...It might have been a good addition to the story if it was about a Pokemon Chef or something but here it just feels like unnecessary info that the reader will forget after 5 minutes of reading it Maybe it's because I'm not the target audience for this story but I can't help but feel that the story should focus more on the journey (like the title suggests) and less on unnecessary things like dietary plans, how much to heat the pans, which oils were used to cook food, etc
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Honestly the best pokemon fic I have read so far. Good story, good dialogue, good characters, good world building, good everything.
The first 20 chapters are some of the best in the pokemon space with surviving and making it in a dark world, and then it becomes this weird cringe sexual thing with his pokemon. it's actually so sad how hard this story fell off. went from binging the story to not even able to finish it
This fanfiction is surprisingly very good 👍. Not only does this story of actually character growth but progression of other characters as well. The Grammer is really good and the characters are flushed out. There isn't any "Plot" yet but it does have some very wholesome romantic moments.
This is one of my favorite Pokémon fanfics. This probably has the best writing quality of anything I've read on web novel the only problem is updates.
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Very refreshing surprisingly and I wish there are more chapters but it is what it is
Well written with the rare very minor spelling/grammatical mistakes. World building is great with the author setting up a more believable and what I think would be a more realistic view of how wild pokemon would really behave off route. Good character development so far as well (note: I am only on Chapter 17 of 20 right as of writing this). I only rated the “Updating Stability” a 3/5 because I haven’t seen an update since I started reading this story…..although that’s most likely more due to the fact that my reading speed far exceeds an authors upload speed so take that with a grain of salt…my reading speed is fast enough that whenever I find a story that piques my interest, I can usually start and finish reading it within a few days at most so the authors usually dont have the time to make a new chapter before I’m finished reading what’s already been uploaded (which is why I normally wait for multiple chapters of my favorite stories to be uploaded before reading them all in one go). Everything else though is a 5/5, rating wise. Overall, great story with believable world and characters with distinct, unique personalities so far!
This is THE best pokemon fic i've ever read, if you looking for a good story about pokemon, then this is one of the best to read, also Author, amazing book, keep up the good work.
i really enjoy reading this as the story is very unique and well written. Author manages to find balance between a slice of life type story with battles and adventures here and there such that it is very enjoyable to read. The technical details and world background might be lacking when compared to other fics like Pokemon AU Adventures or Master of Tactics but overall it is still very good. Chapter lengths are superb and there are no info dumps. Power scaling are also logical and the constant twist and turns keeps me intrigued. A very reccomended read.
Pokemon gotta catch em all especially this story it is so good I am immensely happy dopamine go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'm kinda bamboozled this isn't on the top 10 leader-board the writing is well done and the charaterbuilding is great as well im glad I get to read this truly impressive.
Long Chapters has a lot of potential already doing well if they stay consistent I can see this being the number one pokemon fan fiction soon.
This is a great story so far (Ch.12) the start is a little slow and the Mc seems unlikeable but it changes over the course of the next few chapters. All in all the story is greatly written and is a good read besides the Mc’s cringe worthy name. P.s. The mc’s starter is a love interest
Me encanta la trama y la historia, estoy esperando con ansias el como se desarrolla esto, el avance es lento pero es lo mejor para poder adaptarse al mundo con más detalle. 10/10. Me gustaría el consultar si,¿el avance amoroso lo va a tener el protagonista (Bien) o los Pokémon (Mucho mejor), de forma que el protagonista no se de cuenta de lo que está pasando?
very good story with real, very long chapters, I just find it disappointing that the author goes through the training phases so quickly but hey, we're still at the beginning, it's definitely going to come later
It's hard to find a pokemon fic that doesn't follow the linear path of the manga/anime, I'm excited to see what those author can do with this.
quality chapters and long winded is the perfect type of book for slow readers such as myself... I cant wait to see what happens next... keep up the awesome work!!!
It's really hard to find this type of quality on webnovel definitely a worthwhile read im going to be happy when more chapters are released.