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Nothing much to say about the novel, except that it's amaizing. Writing Quality: 5/5. English is my second language but there are no big mistakes so far, so it's good enough for me. Stability of Updates: 5/5. 2 or sometimes even 3 chapters per day is phenomenal. Story Development: So far, so good. There is goal in mind, there is purpose and then there's PLOT, everything is balanced and there are no filler or info-dump chapters which is always good. Character Design: The MC was immortal for a long time, so he isn't inexperienced, dumb or naive. He knows what to do and is ready to do it. There is also character progression with interesting touch where he learns more about the mortal life, that changes his views about the world and the lower world cultivators. Other characters are also interesting and different. World Background: Interesting in the sense of future development. So far we know about a lot of the world but haven't explored it yet. So far we're still in the lower world so there is still a long way to go, but there are no complaints here since it's solid enough.
ok not a real review since I'm only at chapter 17 right now but God it's a rip off of dual cultivation right now ... pp can't work ? need medicinal herbs costing an arm and a leg in points but nobody knows or really useful it is ... the same as dual cultivation the gift of reincarnation as the only difference of the gender of the people who reincarnated the mc ... the place where mc is reincarnated is basically the same ... when mc came back to himself he has memory seal and in dual cultivation sect... the same ... I've read others review sayings it's better so I'll continue reading ... I'm not saying that the novel is bad or anything but as of chapter 17 it's basically the same ... I just hope that it'll diverge from the other source material and still stay good ... overall gonna for sure read till end of free chapter before deciding what to do next
Best NOVEL EVER for cultivation + Relationships ! My friend Mangaislife1 had recommended this to me and he was right. So far just started and read only free chapters but used my free 24 hour reading pass to get a better idea and this is honestly insane. Thought my friend was lying since when are cultivation novels written so well, it couldn’t be as good as he said but I was wrong . The author gives you everything you want Smart mc Ruthless no bs to enemies No letting enemies escape or waste of time talking Harem (I mean there are no vases and useless harem members. Unique and supportive ) Mc is strong but works hard, to get stronger and is still growing. He does have limitations but he utilizes his superior skills, experience to overcome stronger people
It is one of the best Dual Cultivation Novels that I have ever read and let me say I read a lot. Very detailed Story Building and World Development,It will be a great experience for every one who read it.
i have a question for the writer,.. so when will the MC again meet the goddess that he met at the beginning, like will it still take more than 1000 chaps..??
Hmm Setelah Baca Sedikit Kesan Saya Kurang Bagus, MC Seorang Kultivator Ganda Sebelum Mati , Dan Di Kehidupan Ke2 Juga Kultivator Ganda Tapi Pasangannya Cuma Yang Ingin Dia miliki Untuk Jangka Panjang , Kesannya MC Berhenti Menjadi Kultivator Ganda Dan Menjadi Kultivator Normal Yang Memiliki Teknik Kultivasi Ganda Dan Beberapa Pengalaman, Rasanya Kurang Cocok Untuk Judul Kultivator Ganda Yang Mana Memiliki Banyak Pasangan Dalam Hidupnya , Dan Peningkatan Kekuatan Juga Terlalu Cepat Hanya Ber Kultivasi Ganda Beberapa Kali Tapi Peningkatan Luar Biasa, Karna Kultivator Ganda Bergantung Kepada Pasangan nya Untuk Meningkatkan Kultivasi Jadi Jika Pasangan Cuma Sedikit Seharusnya Lebih Lama Untuk Meningkatkan Kultivasi
Very great novel. Thought this would be smut but It has an amazing story arc mixed with r18 sex scenes. There is a mistake in grammar every 10-20 chapters but that’s it. Not a drastic amount of harem members as in the dual cultivation novel by littlebrother. Which is a good thing considering you know more about the women. I hope this novel continues and flourishes. The amount of chapters this novel could have is immense. Got to find those last lovers from previous lives.
great author of the story, I have a question, will all women in love enter the harem? harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
Sorry for the inconvenience, author, but will Yu Huan enter the harem? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Just an excellent novel.The writing is good,the world building is amazing and the characters are not boring. The novel has immense potential and everyone should give it atleast a read.
Truly one of if not the best of it's kind. You my author do a beautiful job of creating an entrancing world and an epic protagonist. As an avid reader of novels and an avid listener of audiobooks yours has kept me enthralled my only regret is that there's not 5000 chapters to beng read. Keep it up 👍👍💯
This Novel is absolutely a work of art! it keeps the readers glued to the screen and by the time you realize it you have read 500 chapters! I have read alot of novels on WN and othe sites and this is by far my favorite! The characters are great with alot of story line for each one and no plot holes about any of them. The author seems to take extra care to introduce and explain each important character. For those that like the spicy content, each of the females in the harem have their own quirks and likes. Not every scene is the exact same like alot of novels out there. Plus the scenes are so detailed and descriptive that you can truly see it in your mind. It's unlike any other Duel Cultivation Novel I have read! The details of the world and the things happening in it are what really make this novel shine! The amount of time put into the world and the story line is great! It makes you feel like you are there! Last but certainly not least the Author has regular updates each day! They also let the readers know if they won't be able to update due to personal reasons and try to write extra chapters before hand. The author cares about the readers and it shows! Kept up the awesome work Author! Your readers appreciate all the effort you put in!
nice 👍 plot........... ............... ......... ......... ...... ..... ..... .... .... .. .
Bro!!, Yes you bro 🫵, look here and give me some of your time and read this review... this HONEST REVIEW(I only read those free chps rn btw). So I'm going straight to the point then; this one and the famous DC wn is eerily similar for the first dozen chapters(20chps & below) so it felt terrible reading and I even gave up this few times but as I was really bored today I picked it up again and endured it, and guess what... I found out this one is actually better in DC; the character is "alive", they have their own thought, a purpose, and goal. This one point really caught my attention as I don't feel this when reading DC before. It doesn't even feel cringe when MC and his woman say "I love you" to each other, I don't remember Su Yang this before, so you can imagine how great a writer the author is. I have a lot that I want to say but I don't know how since my English is sucks so anyway what I want to really say is; ENDURE THE 1-20 CHAPTERS AND YOU WILL FIND THIS STORY REALLY PLEASANT 😁
отличный роман с нетерпение жду новых глав, можете дать рекомендации похожие на этот роман !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im a man of cultured and i love the story like dual cultivation, this is very good!
overall is good.. i really like this type of cultivation novel.. I'm in chapter 72 as of right now and i already love it.. also I'm mnot good at reviewing so this is it hehe... btw mc is op and so his girls too in their own way
This is f ki ng trash first his di** which he takes ch 45 to fix then sealed memories which he has to be at qi manifestation realm which is slow it's baffaling lol with his technique and even his experience he should be flying through despite his trash talent which I don't know why author is making m c suffer every step and nerfing his own m c but like I said if it is as he said those techniques are that awesome then bro do you actually think a technique like that would require him to keep delaying his cultivation cause his foundation is unstable? How re ta rded
okay i have read 40 chapters so far and first i was afraid that its going to be copy paste from dual cultivation but it soon got alot better and i like mcs personality even if he does waste time on ppl who hes going to kill anyways
everything about this novel is excellent after the 60th chapter or so. yes the beginning is strikingly similar to dual cultivation by MLB. but it gets better. author promised in the beginning not to drop but also hasn't posted in almost a month. so mixed bag overall.
WARNING ⚠️⚠️ Overall it's Good Novel. But, some FMCs are NOT VIRGINS, so yeah I don't like it so I dropped. Some can read it some can't depending on taste, It's just that I don't understand why anyone would choose a Non-V over V .. when you have enough power to not make any compromises unless of course he truly falls in love with them which he doesn't .. not really as falling in love is a complicated process.
The best Dual Cultivation novel I've seen on WN by a decent stretch. The writing is good quality for both the normal and R18 chapters and the storyline is well constructed and paced. The protagonist is interesting and respectable and progresses steadily. The love interests are varied, interesting and 3 Dimensional, and the relationships are well thought out.
Overall, the book is great. The characters have their flaws and aren't perfect by any means. They feel alive, the story progression is steady, not too slow or too fast, and the book keeps you hooked and makes you keep guessing what's next.The MC isn't all powerful or anything like many novels.Keep up the phenomenal work Green!!!
literally a complete rip off of dual cultivation by my little brother, its a copy and paste, no different plot points or anything.
One of the best new dual cultivations novels out right now. The writing and quality of the novel is really good and consisten. The harem of the story is really good I don’t really see any of the female characters getting left behind or forgotten so far in the novel. There’s not really any plot holes left in the story . Overall the novel is really good 👍🏽
I get a feeling of Déjà vu reading till chapter 10> God of Dual Cultivation reincarnated in a younger body> New body belongs to disciple in Dual Cultivation Sect, with memory loss and impotent> MC cultivates different method than previous life, relies on sword intent to win fights above his level> Sect elder reminds him of dead lover from previous lifeI wonder if the trend will continue, till now not impressed
Well, I will just say it's really good.Of course, the "main" story still hasn't really started as of Chapter 68 (as with almost every Book on that theme),but it's really good to read, the scenes are great and it seems WE won't have important character without persona which IS great ^^
One of the best dual cultivation stories on wn. I found it very early and after 60 chaps its time for a review. * Writing Quality - 10/10 without a doubt. It feels like the author is a veteran writer. Lack of info dumps, all the information you get are implemented into the story in a very smart way. *Story Development - the flow of the story is perfectly balanced, right amount of action mixed with character interactions. Author knows what parts of the story need more attention, and where to cut it shot with only important parts. You wont find here 4 chapters of pointless travel without any substance or importance to the plot. You dont event thing about the pacing, because if feels like it should be that way. *Character Design - when it comes to MC, he has a deep background with "real" personality. Not an egdy boy without feeling, but a human with countless years of knowledge. And yet he is lacking in some aspects, even after reincarnation his personality grows and he is not shy to admit that. Its a fresh feeling when a former God is fascinated by the behaviour of mortals. Harems members are just great, they dont feel like pokemons (im not gonna lie, I like pokemon hunting too😅), each of them have a personality, and a real one. Not the "I like swords" "I like flowers". They have goals in life, and I can only hope for mc to keep them close. I really dont like when harem members think of mc as a 10th priority in their life, and are more interested in other stuff. For the time being there is a nice romantic feel and I hope this will stay that way. Just like our mc, his girls have interesting background and eaxh of them feel different, not a copy with changed hair color. I m a self insert, so thats important hehe. *Update Stability - i cant say much when it comes to the future, but right now we have 3 chapters daily. Author said he has more time right now and it can change it the future. But for now its amazing, chapters and very long, without fillers just to reaxh the word numbers.*World Background - this is where this book really shines, you can see lots of work and thought where put into it. Small things like places, weather...Interesting ones like inner working of a sect. Thats the first time I was really intersted how a proper sect works, what happens to the disciples after thier potential ends. There is a reason for almost everything, with a great and logical explanation. When you read it, it makes sense. There is only 60 chapters and im really hyped to know more about the world and the secrets it holds. *Lemons - its a dual cultivation book, lets face it fellow daoist, you are here for some spice. And ohh boy, the author delivers! From romantic, vanilla scenes (I cant belive i like them so much, there is one scene in the bathroom where one of his girl just dress up and man, you can see it in your mind...). Mc had a broken sword and got it fixed not long ago, so there is not a lot of "proper" cultivation (remember chap 60) but if I can read judge by what I got to this point...future looks even more amazing. Not a lot of author can write a detailed lemons with that feeling...you will find some scenes with only "pats" as author calls them, its fire! I read lots of harems, and belive me, its that good. I think I covered all of it, give it a chance guys - its worth it! A cultured daoist like me dont lie when it comes to important business... Important notes: NO NTR NO YURI All of it its in the synopsis, but lots of people dont read it 😁.Thank you Green Onion for this amazing book, and if your next novel wont have winc est i ll curse you and your pp will fall off! Give me a hot mommy and sis *cough* *cough* i mean a friend asked...😎
Nothing much to say about the novel, except that it's amaizing. Writing Quality: 5/5. English is my second language but there are no big mistakes so far, so it's good enough for me. Stability of Updates: 5/5. 2 or sometimes even 3 chapters per day is phenomenal. Story Development: So far, so good. There is goal in mind, there is purpose and then there's PLOT, everything is balanced and there are no filler or info-dump chapters which is always good. Character Design: The MC was immortal for a long time, so he isn't inexperienced, dumb or naive. He knows what to do and is ready to do it. There is also character progression with interesting touch where he learns more about the mortal life, that changes his views about the world and the lower world cultivators. Other characters are also interesting and different. World Background: Interesting in the sense of future development. So far we know about a lot of the world but haven't explored it yet. So far we're still in the lower world so there is still a long way to go, but there are no complaints here since it's solid enough.
ok not a real review since I'm only at chapter 17 right now but God it's a rip off of dual cultivation right now ... pp can't work ? need medicinal herbs costing an arm and a leg in points but nobody knows or really useful it is ... the same as dual cultivation the gift of reincarnation as the only difference of the gender of the people who reincarnated the mc ... the place where mc is reincarnated is basically the same ... when mc came back to himself he has memory seal and in dual cultivation sect... the same ... I've read others review sayings it's better so I'll continue reading ... I'm not saying that the novel is bad or anything but as of chapter 17 it's basically the same ... I just hope that it'll diverge from the other source material and still stay good ... overall gonna for sure read till end of free chapter before deciding what to do next
Best NOVEL EVER for cultivation + Relationships ! My friend Mangaislife1 had recommended this to me and he was right. So far just started and read only free chapters but used my free 24 hour reading pass to get a better idea and this is honestly insane. Thought my friend was lying since when are cultivation novels written so well, it couldn’t be as good as he said but I was wrong . The author gives you everything you want Smart mc Ruthless no bs to enemies No letting enemies escape or waste of time talking Harem (I mean there are no vases and useless harem members. Unique and supportive ) Mc is strong but works hard, to get stronger and is still growing. He does have limitations but he utilizes his superior skills, experience to overcome stronger people
It is one of the best Dual Cultivation Novels that I have ever read and let me say I read a lot. Very detailed Story Building and World Development,It will be a great experience for every one who read it.
i have a question for the writer,.. so when will the MC again meet the goddess that he met at the beginning, like will it still take more than 1000 chaps..??
Hmm Setelah Baca Sedikit Kesan Saya Kurang Bagus, MC Seorang Kultivator Ganda Sebelum Mati , Dan Di Kehidupan Ke2 Juga Kultivator Ganda Tapi Pasangannya Cuma Yang Ingin Dia miliki Untuk Jangka Panjang , Kesannya MC Berhenti Menjadi Kultivator Ganda Dan Menjadi Kultivator Normal Yang Memiliki Teknik Kultivasi Ganda Dan Beberapa Pengalaman, Rasanya Kurang Cocok Untuk Judul Kultivator Ganda Yang Mana Memiliki Banyak Pasangan Dalam Hidupnya , Dan Peningkatan Kekuatan Juga Terlalu Cepat Hanya Ber Kultivasi Ganda Beberapa Kali Tapi Peningkatan Luar Biasa, Karna Kultivator Ganda Bergantung Kepada Pasangan nya Untuk Meningkatkan Kultivasi Jadi Jika Pasangan Cuma Sedikit Seharusnya Lebih Lama Untuk Meningkatkan Kultivasi
Very great novel. Thought this would be smut but It has an amazing story arc mixed with r18 sex scenes. There is a mistake in grammar every 10-20 chapters but that’s it. Not a drastic amount of harem members as in the dual cultivation novel by littlebrother. Which is a good thing considering you know more about the women. I hope this novel continues and flourishes. The amount of chapters this novel could have is immense. Got to find those last lovers from previous lives.
great author of the story, I have a question, will all women in love enter the harem? harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
Sorry for the inconvenience, author, but will Yu Huan enter the harem? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Just an excellent novel.The writing is good,the world building is amazing and the characters are not boring. The novel has immense potential and everyone should give it atleast a read.
Truly one of if not the best of it's kind. You my author do a beautiful job of creating an entrancing world and an epic protagonist. As an avid reader of novels and an avid listener of audiobooks yours has kept me enthralled my only regret is that there's not 5000 chapters to beng read. Keep it up 👍👍💯
This Novel is absolutely a work of art! it keeps the readers glued to the screen and by the time you realize it you have read 500 chapters! I have read alot of novels on WN and othe sites and this is by far my favorite! The characters are great with alot of story line for each one and no plot holes about any of them. The author seems to take extra care to introduce and explain each important character. For those that like the spicy content, each of the females in the harem have their own quirks and likes. Not every scene is the exact same like alot of novels out there. Plus the scenes are so detailed and descriptive that you can truly see it in your mind. It's unlike any other Duel Cultivation Novel I have read! The details of the world and the things happening in it are what really make this novel shine! The amount of time put into the world and the story line is great! It makes you feel like you are there! Last but certainly not least the Author has regular updates each day! They also let the readers know if they won't be able to update due to personal reasons and try to write extra chapters before hand. The author cares about the readers and it shows! Kept up the awesome work Author! Your readers appreciate all the effort you put in!
nice 👍 plot........... ............... ......... ......... ...... ..... ..... .... .... .. .
Bro!!, Yes you bro 🫵, look here and give me some of your time and read this review... this HONEST REVIEW(I only read those free chps rn btw). So I'm going straight to the point then; this one and the famous DC wn is eerily similar for the first dozen chapters(20chps & below) so it felt terrible reading and I even gave up this few times but as I was really bored today I picked it up again and endured it, and guess what... I found out this one is actually better in DC; the character is "alive", they have their own thought, a purpose, and goal. This one point really caught my attention as I don't feel this when reading DC before. It doesn't even feel cringe when MC and his woman say "I love you" to each other, I don't remember Su Yang this before, so you can imagine how great a writer the author is. I have a lot that I want to say but I don't know how since my English is sucks so anyway what I want to really say is; ENDURE THE 1-20 CHAPTERS AND YOU WILL FIND THIS STORY REALLY PLEASANT 😁
отличный роман с нетерпение жду новых глав, можете дать рекомендации похожие на этот роман !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im a man of cultured and i love the story like dual cultivation, this is very good!
overall is good.. i really like this type of cultivation novel.. I'm in chapter 72 as of right now and i already love it.. also I'm mnot good at reviewing so this is it hehe... btw mc is op and so his girls too in their own way
This is f ki ng trash first his di** which he takes ch 45 to fix then sealed memories which he has to be at qi manifestation realm which is slow it's baffaling lol with his technique and even his experience he should be flying through despite his trash talent which I don't know why author is making m c suffer every step and nerfing his own m c but like I said if it is as he said those techniques are that awesome then bro do you actually think a technique like that would require him to keep delaying his cultivation cause his foundation is unstable? How re ta rded
okay i have read 40 chapters so far and first i was afraid that its going to be copy paste from dual cultivation but it soon got alot better and i like mcs personality even if he does waste time on ppl who hes going to kill anyways
everything about this novel is excellent after the 60th chapter or so. yes the beginning is strikingly similar to dual cultivation by MLB. but it gets better. author promised in the beginning not to drop but also hasn't posted in almost a month. so mixed bag overall.
WARNING ⚠️⚠️ Overall it's Good Novel. But, some FMCs are NOT VIRGINS, so yeah I don't like it so I dropped. Some can read it some can't depending on taste, It's just that I don't understand why anyone would choose a Non-V over V .. when you have enough power to not make any compromises unless of course he truly falls in love with them which he doesn't .. not really as falling in love is a complicated process.
The best Dual Cultivation novel I've seen on WN by a decent stretch. The writing is good quality for both the normal and R18 chapters and the storyline is well constructed and paced. The protagonist is interesting and respectable and progresses steadily. The love interests are varied, interesting and 3 Dimensional, and the relationships are well thought out.
Overall, the book is great. The characters have their flaws and aren't perfect by any means. They feel alive, the story progression is steady, not too slow or too fast, and the book keeps you hooked and makes you keep guessing what's next.The MC isn't all powerful or anything like many novels.Keep up the phenomenal work Green!!!
literally a complete rip off of dual cultivation by my little brother, its a copy and paste, no different plot points or anything.
One of the best new dual cultivations novels out right now. The writing and quality of the novel is really good and consisten. The harem of the story is really good I don’t really see any of the female characters getting left behind or forgotten so far in the novel. There’s not really any plot holes left in the story . Overall the novel is really good 👍🏽
I get a feeling of Déjà vu reading till chapter 10> God of Dual Cultivation reincarnated in a younger body> New body belongs to disciple in Dual Cultivation Sect, with memory loss and impotent> MC cultivates different method than previous life, relies on sword intent to win fights above his level> Sect elder reminds him of dead lover from previous lifeI wonder if the trend will continue, till now not impressed
Well, I will just say it's really good.Of course, the "main" story still hasn't really started as of Chapter 68 (as with almost every Book on that theme),but it's really good to read, the scenes are great and it seems WE won't have important character without persona which IS great ^^
One of the best dual cultivation stories on wn. I found it very early and after 60 chaps its time for a review. * Writing Quality - 10/10 without a doubt. It feels like the author is a veteran writer. Lack of info dumps, all the information you get are implemented into the story in a very smart way. *Story Development - the flow of the story is perfectly balanced, right amount of action mixed with character interactions. Author knows what parts of the story need more attention, and where to cut it shot with only important parts. You wont find here 4 chapters of pointless travel without any substance or importance to the plot. You dont event thing about the pacing, because if feels like it should be that way. *Character Design - when it comes to MC, he has a deep background with "real" personality. Not an egdy boy without feeling, but a human with countless years of knowledge. And yet he is lacking in some aspects, even after reincarnation his personality grows and he is not shy to admit that. Its a fresh feeling when a former God is fascinated by the behaviour of mortals. Harems members are just great, they dont feel like pokemons (im not gonna lie, I like pokemon hunting too😅), each of them have a personality, and a real one. Not the "I like swords" "I like flowers". They have goals in life, and I can only hope for mc to keep them close. I really dont like when harem members think of mc as a 10th priority in their life, and are more interested in other stuff. For the time being there is a nice romantic feel and I hope this will stay that way. Just like our mc, his girls have interesting background and eaxh of them feel different, not a copy with changed hair color. I m a self insert, so thats important hehe. *Update Stability - i cant say much when it comes to the future, but right now we have 3 chapters daily. Author said he has more time right now and it can change it the future. But for now its amazing, chapters and very long, without fillers just to reaxh the word numbers.*World Background - this is where this book really shines, you can see lots of work and thought where put into it. Small things like places, weather...Interesting ones like inner working of a sect. Thats the first time I was really intersted how a proper sect works, what happens to the disciples after thier potential ends. There is a reason for almost everything, with a great and logical explanation. When you read it, it makes sense. There is only 60 chapters and im really hyped to know more about the world and the secrets it holds. *Lemons - its a dual cultivation book, lets face it fellow daoist, you are here for some spice. And ohh boy, the author delivers! From romantic, vanilla scenes (I cant belive i like them so much, there is one scene in the bathroom where one of his girl just dress up and man, you can see it in your mind...). Mc had a broken sword and got it fixed not long ago, so there is not a lot of "proper" cultivation (remember chap 60) but if I can read judge by what I got to this point...future looks even more amazing. Not a lot of author can write a detailed lemons with that feeling...you will find some scenes with only "pats" as author calls them, its fire! I read lots of harems, and belive me, its that good. I think I covered all of it, give it a chance guys - its worth it! A cultured daoist like me dont lie when it comes to important business... Important notes: NO NTR NO YURI All of it its in the synopsis, but lots of people dont read it 😁.Thank you Green Onion for this amazing book, and if your next novel wont have winc est i ll curse you and your pp will fall off! Give me a hot mommy and sis *cough* *cough* i mean a friend asked...😎