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started reading it and it has been great..... although you improved on the conversation aspect compared to your other works......you could do more.....👍😸 good work
I think you are only writer that can make the one night stand so romantic and poetic.
The story is quite good the only issue's are it feels like im reading a dictionary with the amount of unnecessary fancy words, and the other issue is that in a conversation between just 2 people their names are said too eachother every sentence so it feels like 2 robots speaking, 3/5 for the writing quality, 4/5 for the updates and 5/5 for everything else
started reading it and it has been great..... although you improved on the conversation aspect compared to your other works......you could do more.....👍😸 good work
I think you are only writer that can make the one night stand so romantic and poetic.
The story is quite good the only issue's are it feels like im reading a dictionary with the amount of unnecessary fancy words, and the other issue is that in a conversation between just 2 people their names are said too eachother every sentence so it feels like 2 robots speaking, 3/5 for the writing quality, 4/5 for the updates and 5/5 for everything else