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No se porque ay tantas reseñas con pocas estrellas es una buena novela se las recomiendo.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Very enjoyable continue the story and make more stories 5 hope you have more stories like this one I usually don't like these types of op characters but I enjoyed it
I think you should all try this once, it's pretty good, I've read more than 70 chapters and the pace is fine, i think the other reviews are being overly negative. You will surely like it if you enjoy OP MC.
My fav Dragon ball fanfic.just 1 suggestion pls don't match goten with videl introduced some new character as similiar age as goten
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Chinese translation and dumb system mc got ultra instinct in first chapter as well
Perfect but slow in writing but also the character developement is good and i like how op he is so yah hhhhhh hhhhh hhh hhhh hhhhh hhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhvh hhhh hhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh hhhh hhh hhhh hhhhh
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I rarely give reviews to books but this time I have decided to write one seeing how low the rating of the book is. I'm not gonna say this is a perfect novel, it's far from it but it achieves one thing that any novel should, that is entertain it's readers. There might be some people who might not like this the MC who is Goten becomes very powerful very fast using his cheat or some other reasons but I can confidently say this novel is entertaining especially for me. I'm also really enjoying the currently ongoing fight of Goten and Beerus. Even though Goten has basically just one tenth of Beerus's power at the moment. The only thing I'm a bit disappointed with is the frequency of updates. I first read this novel last month and again picked it up today to see that only around 5-6 new chapters have been released. I know creation is difficult and the author has his own life to live.
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I’m 23 chapters in and it’s a solid fanfic. There is one major problem which is that certain people in addition to Goku are choosing not to be revived by the dragonballs even though it makes absolutely no sense. But if you turn your brain off and ignore that, along with a few minor plot holes, the overall story and character interactions are fine, it’s worth the read
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Naw man, i mostly do give Chinese ff a chance, but getting ultra instinct in the first chapter is beyond me.
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Bruh... i think you made the mc op... too much.. i mean dude i know that the mc needs to be on par of strength with cell to save the earth but.. why give him the Ultra Instinct.. and i think (In my opinion) you need to nerf your system and make the mc grow stronger as the story progress (I know I know.. i know that making a good story is hard so i dont have anything to complain except for the mc... being kinda op in the start of the story which made kinda the FF "Kinda" stale... so uhh i hope you'll improve your writing style in the future and make good fanfic :) )
Trash. It's a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic, so it has the same problems with grammar and spelling they usually do. The story itself could've been interesting, but the author decided to give the MC a system, which is completely over the top, since Goten already has incredible potential as a Saiyan/Human-Hybrid.
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Why do you give the mc a system???? Being born as a human/saiyan hybrid isn't enough for you??? The guy could transform into a Super Saiyan from the age of 7.
This fanfic is very good, although at first I noticed that the author was "inspired" by the Dragon Ball fanfic manga New Hope!, but it's just the first chapters, I also noticed the writing style of the Chinese, so if this is a translation, please pass me the raw.
No se porque ay tantas reseñas con pocas estrellas es una buena novela se las recomiendo.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hi I am Khalid khan l really like your fanfiction but you really update slowly l am getting board her please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please
Hi I am Khalid khan l really like your fanfiction but you really update slowly l am getting board her please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please
Very enjoyable continue the story and make more stories 5 hope you have more stories like this one I usually don't like these types of op characters but I enjoyed it
I think you should all try this once, it's pretty good, I've read more than 70 chapters and the pace is fine, i think the other reviews are being overly negative. You will surely like it if you enjoy OP MC.
My fav Dragon ball fanfic.just 1 suggestion pls don't match goten with videl introduced some new character as similiar age as goten
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Chinese translation and dumb system mc got ultra instinct in first chapter as well
Perfect but slow in writing but also the character developement is good and i like how op he is so yah hhhhhh hhhhh hhh hhhh hhhhh hhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhvh hhhh hhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh hhhh hhh hhhh hhhhh
Spoiler enthüllen I rarely give reviews to books but this time I have decided to write one seeing how low the rating of the book is. I'm not gonna say this is a perfect novel, it's far from it but it achieves one thing that any novel should, that is entertain it's readers. There might be some people who might not like this the MC who is Goten becomes very powerful very fast using his cheat or some other reasons but I can confidently say this novel is entertaining especially for me. I'm also really enjoying the currently ongoing fight of Goten and Beerus. Even though Goten has basically just one tenth of Beerus's power at the moment. The only thing I'm a bit disappointed with is the frequency of updates. I first read this novel last month and again picked it up today to see that only around 5-6 new chapters have been released. I know creation is difficult and the author has his own life to live.
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Spoiler enthüllen I’m 23 chapters in and it’s a solid fanfic. There is one major problem which is that certain people in addition to Goku are choosing not to be revived by the dragonballs even though it makes absolutely no sense. But if you turn your brain off and ignore that, along with a few minor plot holes, the overall story and character interactions are fine, it’s worth the read
Es sin duda una gran historia de Dragón Ball😁😁😁😁😁🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Naw man, i mostly do give Chinese ff a chance, but getting ultra instinct in the first chapter is beyond me.
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Bruh... i think you made the mc op... too much.. i mean dude i know that the mc needs to be on par of strength with cell to save the earth but.. why give him the Ultra Instinct.. and i think (In my opinion) you need to nerf your system and make the mc grow stronger as the story progress (I know I know.. i know that making a good story is hard so i dont have anything to complain except for the mc... being kinda op in the start of the story which made kinda the FF "Kinda" stale... so uhh i hope you'll improve your writing style in the future and make good fanfic :) )
Trash. It's a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic, so it has the same problems with grammar and spelling they usually do. The story itself could've been interesting, but the author decided to give the MC a system, which is completely over the top, since Goten already has incredible potential as a Saiyan/Human-Hybrid.
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Why do you give the mc a system???? Being born as a human/saiyan hybrid isn't enough for you??? The guy could transform into a Super Saiyan from the age of 7.
This fanfic is very good, although at first I noticed that the author was "inspired" by the Dragon Ball fanfic manga New Hope!, but it's just the first chapters, I also noticed the writing style of the Chinese, so if this is a translation, please pass me the raw.
there are other reviews and mine are the same.