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It's fun and simple to read but it could use a little editing on sentence structures.
this is the first fanfic for awhile that i really took a liking too, novel and fanfic these days are just filled with harem and romance that it took the novelty out of them, really recommend this fanfic if your tired of harem too
Premise of this story is quite unique, unlike anything I have seen before in a toaru fanfic, which is already quite hard to find.
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I like this story quite a lot as its premise is interesting and relatively well executed The only flaw with this story is that it’s chugging along at a pretty fast pace as of chapter 9 (I haven’t read beyond that yet) in just those few chapters the mc has died “reincarnated” and figured out the situation died 9,999 more times beat accelerator and then saved accelerator This isn’t that bad but it will leave the story incredibly short and skip a lot of details that give emotional scenes emotion For example one of the few stories that have ever brought me to tears code geass spent a good portion of its run time in the mundane to make the viewer care and that’s why it’s widely regarded as one of the best stories ever told So in summary as good as this story is I can hardly be expected to care or feel for the mc as she(he?) dies those 9,999 times because they still don’t feel real ,I barely know the character because the pace at with the story is progressing isn’t allowing me too I really do like this story otherwise I wouldn’t have spent the time to write this long ahh review out and I hope to see it continue
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I love the author of this fanfic because they take 3 to 5 days to put out really quality chapters a lot of other people put out the daily stuff but there's so many you know mistakes and whatnot in the chapter or grammar issues I haven't found a single grammar issue in this one also he brings the characters to life and I just like the way they are rights particular world
I'm enjoying it sooo much. If you're a fan of Toaru you'll surely like this fanfic. The Author really put a lot of effort making this book. EXTREMELY RECOMMENDED.
I like the world. so far I want more. this is honestly a toaru fic of a quality we haven't gotten in a long time.
This is the story about a young man dies after witnessing the death of a Misaka clone, and ends up reincarnating as one of Misaka's inactive clones, although I've only read 6 chapters so far, it tells an excellent story, and also has a quick chapter update
simply the best toaru fanfic both in creativity and quality having one of the best character strength balances I've ever seen and a battle that really makes sense[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
If you want something new. instead of genetic fanfic with harem, echi and op MC without a reason.here you'll got a serious fanfic with a plot, MC with character development, and a logical powers balance. I hope you enjoy.
It's fun and simple to read but it could use a little editing on sentence structures.
this is the first fanfic for awhile that i really took a liking too, novel and fanfic these days are just filled with harem and romance that it took the novelty out of them, really recommend this fanfic if your tired of harem too
Premise of this story is quite unique, unlike anything I have seen before in a toaru fanfic, which is already quite hard to find.
Just.perfect ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Just perfect ............................... ............................... ............................. ............................... ......................................................................................... ............................... ...............................
I like this story quite a lot as its premise is interesting and relatively well executed The only flaw with this story is that it’s chugging along at a pretty fast pace as of chapter 9 (I haven’t read beyond that yet) in just those few chapters the mc has died “reincarnated” and figured out the situation died 9,999 more times beat accelerator and then saved accelerator This isn’t that bad but it will leave the story incredibly short and skip a lot of details that give emotional scenes emotion For example one of the few stories that have ever brought me to tears code geass spent a good portion of its run time in the mundane to make the viewer care and that’s why it’s widely regarded as one of the best stories ever told So in summary as good as this story is I can hardly be expected to care or feel for the mc as she(he?) dies those 9,999 times because they still don’t feel real ,I barely know the character because the pace at with the story is progressing isn’t allowing me too I really do like this story otherwise I wouldn’t have spent the time to write this long ahh review out and I hope to see it continue
Spoiler enthüllen I love the author of this fanfic because they take 3 to 5 days to put out really quality chapters a lot of other people put out the daily stuff but there's so many you know mistakes and whatnot in the chapter or grammar issues I haven't found a single grammar issue in this one also he brings the characters to life and I just like the way they are rights particular world
I'm enjoying it sooo much. If you're a fan of Toaru you'll surely like this fanfic. The Author really put a lot of effort making this book. EXTREMELY RECOMMENDED.
I like the world. so far I want more. this is honestly a toaru fic of a quality we haven't gotten in a long time.
This is the story about a young man dies after witnessing the death of a Misaka clone, and ends up reincarnating as one of Misaka's inactive clones, although I've only read 6 chapters so far, it tells an excellent story, and also has a quick chapter update
simply the best toaru fanfic both in creativity and quality having one of the best character strength balances I've ever seen and a battle that really makes sense[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
If you want something new. instead of genetic fanfic with harem, echi and op MC without a reason.here you'll got a serious fanfic with a plot, MC with character development, and a logical powers balance. I hope you enjoy.