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Mid af i liked the previous version and was happy to see it getting an update but to my disappointment it was just a re-write a pretty boring one even.
I quite honestly don’t know how to rate this fanfic as what it lacks in quality or consistency it makes up in heart. It feels like the author doesn’t know exactly how to insert this character into DxD or what path he should take the character but it seems like he does care for the characters and stories involved. The author is probably new to writing but has loads of potential given practice, i sincerely look forward to reading more.
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MC immediately cuts his hand with glass with people around watching. He is 15 years old but has the full grown Ban Beard and is over 7ft tall. Do not waste your time with this story because it is awful.
Spoiler enthüllen
Ban so teve uma namorada, aqui tem harem, o que mostra que ele nao é o verdadeiro ban mas tem os seus poderes e memórias, e nao uma copia falsa do Ban, enquanto ele continuar a escrever o manga entao tudo sobre pode ser conhecido, gostei muito [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the start and a different imagination that interests me to eagerly explore how this world of yours may bring a rare smile to my face. You are doing very well. Thank you for inviting me and keep up the good work.
dag i frl love your story not much about ban out here please keep updating it and make a patreon i wanna donate frl.ps dont make it expensive keep it at like a dollar folks are broke now a days
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FUUUUUIIYOOOOHHHHH,GOOD GOOOD KEEP IT UP UNCLE GROUDON IS VERY PROUD ITS A GOOD STORY
im giving 5 stars has a big potential addicting and cool to read it has everything I want inside and its very triling to read overall I love it so please make sure you have chapters to write
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me encanta. el personaje es bueno y hay muchas cosas que estan bien planteadas me encanta porfa conhinua
I’ m a big fan of seven deadly sins so reading a good fanfic of it always makes my day. Keep up the good work
I'm glad to see more Seven Deadly Sins authors!! Other than me. Are you perhaps planning to write another Seven Deadly Sins Fanfic in Future!!
Great novel hope you keep up with the updating it is great and I really want to see your take on the DxD world and how Ban will affect it.👌🏾✨
The fact that you have bam and harem together makes me want to give it 1 star. Bam is literally one the most loyal anime characters to their love interest yet you disgrace his name with this Bs.
It was fun and entertaining but it didn't last long. The updates are long, sure there are problems that come up in life and I can't blame author for that. The problem is, the author is not making a draft of chapters, it's like, he just write stuff and posts it. If he got 5 drafts, he can post once a month for 5 months or it depends on how the author would like it, once a month is better than waiting for half a year and then it would turn out that the author didn't like how the story is going so he decided to start at chapter 1. If author made a draft, he could've seen that he doesn't like how the story is going and change it to the way he like.
Mid af i liked the previous version and was happy to see it getting an update but to my disappointment it was just a re-write a pretty boring one even.
I quite honestly don’t know how to rate this fanfic as what it lacks in quality or consistency it makes up in heart. It feels like the author doesn’t know exactly how to insert this character into DxD or what path he should take the character but it seems like he does care for the characters and stories involved. The author is probably new to writing but has loads of potential given practice, i sincerely look forward to reading more.
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MC immediately cuts his hand with glass with people around watching. He is 15 years old but has the full grown Ban Beard and is over 7ft tall. Do not waste your time with this story because it is awful.
Spoiler enthüllen Ban so teve uma namorada, aqui tem harem, o que mostra que ele nao é o verdadeiro ban mas tem os seus poderes e memórias, e nao uma copia falsa do Ban, enquanto ele continuar a escrever o manga entao tudo sobre pode ser conhecido, gostei muito [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the start and a different imagination that interests me to eagerly explore how this world of yours may bring a rare smile to my face. You are doing very well. Thank you for inviting me and keep up the good work.
dag i frl love your story not much about ban out here please keep updating it and make a patreon i wanna donate frl.ps dont make it expensive keep it at like a dollar folks are broke now a days
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FUUUUUIIYOOOOHHHHH,GOOD GOOOD KEEP IT UP UNCLE GROUDON IS VERY PROUD ITS A GOOD STORY
im giving 5 stars has a big potential addicting and cool to read it has everything I want inside and its very triling to read overall I love it so please make sure you have chapters to write
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me encanta. el personaje es bueno y hay muchas cosas que estan bien planteadas me encanta porfa conhinua
I’ m a big fan of seven deadly sins so reading a good fanfic of it always makes my day. Keep up the good work
I'm glad to see more Seven Deadly Sins authors!! Other than me. Are you perhaps planning to write another Seven Deadly Sins Fanfic in Future!!
Great novel hope you keep up with the updating it is great and I really want to see your take on the DxD world and how Ban will affect it.👌🏾✨
The fact that you have bam and harem together makes me want to give it 1 star. Bam is literally one the most loyal anime characters to their love interest yet you disgrace his name with this Bs.
It was fun and entertaining but it didn't last long. The updates are long, sure there are problems that come up in life and I can't blame author for that. The problem is, the author is not making a draft of chapters, it's like, he just write stuff and posts it. If he got 5 drafts, he can post once a month for 5 months or it depends on how the author would like it, once a month is better than waiting for half a year and then it would turn out that the author didn't like how the story is going so he decided to start at chapter 1. If author made a draft, he could've seen that he doesn't like how the story is going and change it to the way he like.