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Vitor_Lindo

Uma estrela por não ter harém 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

6mth
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_LordRavenclaw

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍

8mth
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Daoistt6aF0a

la historia es muy buena me gustaría que actualizaras más la historia

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1yr
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Sorouko
LV 14 Badge

This is literally a crackhead fic.

1yr
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anonimo_af

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1yr
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Thunder_Storm10

so I like the idea of the story it's interesting and a shock no one has thought of it my problem though is that MC has that weird power from that novel or is it manga I've never read before. Its' already a cheat to have Peter's IQ anymore powers from other verses feels like an unnecessary power up to be honest so I ended up dropping the story midway. All in all its well written good grammar, not a fan of Peter's superhero suit😅 and I do advice people to give it a try incase you might get hooked.

1yr
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CruddyDrummer

This reads like the author wanted to create his own Butchered version of The Perfect Run.

1yr
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Lector231

Very Good..........................................................................................................................................

1yr
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Enigmation

I genuinely want to like this novel but the cringe is too strong. Also, if you aren't a fan or have not read Lord of Mysteries, you will be GREATLY confused/dislike it as the story is heavily influenced by it(all the cringe included). Decent grammar&writing doesn't feel flat.The plot is ok but sometimes incoherent and at some parts require heavy suspension of disbelief. Pacing is fine though.Personally, I'm not a fan of the character simply because of his whackiness and propensity for constantly switching between personalities.Also, tis a miracle mon chou. Sadly, I'm out.

1yr
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Logain_Septimus

I rate this as very average. Needs work all over but is ok for a quick read so long as you don't mind the oddness of it all. It's very forced and unnatural in it's writing. Enough said.

1yr
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Lizrock

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1yr
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Commence_Comments

Big fan👍 💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💸💸💸💸💶💶💶💶💷💷💷💷💴💴💴

1yr
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Lizrock

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1yr
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Servydaos

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1yr
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Sleepless_night

Just no, it was good at first, but now it's just unreadable trash

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1yr
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Kosmostars

Мне нравится 👍 спасибо за хорошое фанфик [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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1yr
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Remero

i love the lord of the mystries references

1yr
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Sir_Stronghold

Great story with good writing and ideas. keep up the good work mate. [img=recommend]

1yr
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FM_DM
LV 4 Badge

I will begin saying that I really enjoy the story. I love the use of Lizard Peter. The way that his relationship with Gwen changes feel realistic and I like their interactions. As I do not know the original source material for the gauntlet thingy that gives him additional powers, it feels strange to me. But that's me. I feel it could be replaced by his lizard background... for example, his hunger may be an unforeseen defect in his "perfected" formula (and a subplot to experiments to resolve it). Same with the eating others with the gauntlet, it could be done by means of "cannibalism" in his lizard form to gain the same effect of acquiring new abilities. Once more, I like the story as is. And my opinion on this is my own fault for not knowing the other power. Really good writing and funny moments in almost every chapter Keep the good work.

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1yr
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kevin_juan

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1yr
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dragon_nightsky

i love this book because the way ste story goes i see myself in it

1yr
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Omced
LV 4 Badge

Main characters name is Gehrman Sparro2 one of Klein’s identities, the crazy adventure in Lord of the Mysteries.

1yr
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Ark_4171

I love the story looking for more Spider-Man fanfiction you really fall right on top I really like the Peter Parker with the somewhat dark universe that the film made us feel. good luck and keep going like that bro👍💯

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1yr
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Polo86

Hasta el momento me parece muy bien, exelente espero que siga así. De qui en adelante es relleno para completar los 140 carácteres Hay un dolor sordo en mi cabeza, que hace que la gente se sienta incómoda

1yr
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Mysteries_

Eu sinceramente não sei como isso pode ter uma nota tão alta, nada faz sentido, os diálogos são chatos e não parecem fluidos, os pensamentos do personagem não tem lógica, eu gostei de ter introduzidos itens de lotm mas foi só isso, existe uma infinidade de itens e vc introduziu um dos menos úteis e ainda fez Peter Parker tomar o soro do lagarto, sério

1yr
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JustSomeRandomNPC

well your FF is good one of my favorites FF😌😏

1yr
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_Anuar_

"ITS A MASTERPICE" 10/11 . . .

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1yr
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Thorn_Vale

Just because there's gherman and creeping hunger here I rate it 5 stars it doesnt matter if I only read one chapter its 5 stars for me but that is my opinion

1yr
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KIRA007

The story is very good, the character’s interaction feels natural it can feel weird at times but not forced like some other stories i read. the Mc himself I like he not perfects he cocky, egotistical a bit, and is mostly teasing the female love interest and like it, neither him or the other characters are perfect and it’s good. There are time in the story that feel weird and maybe to some out of place but this just a small issue i have but do believe the story would benefit more if the author was to put more humor into it nothing force. Other than few criticisms I have this story is solid strong 4⭐️ but definitely not 5⭐️ and very stories are a 5⭐️.

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1yr
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NIkhil_Kumar

Good... Good.. Very Good. Keep it up and don't give up the book. Give me new chapters ~ I am a dumb person. I don't know how to write good reviews.

1yr
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Vitor_Lindo

Uma estrela por não ter harém 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

6mth
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_LordRavenclaw

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍

8mth
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Daoistt6aF0a

la historia es muy buena me gustaría que actualizaras más la historia

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1yr
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Sorouko
LV 14 Badge

This is literally a crackhead fic.

1yr
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anonimo_af

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1yr
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Thunder_Storm10

so I like the idea of the story it's interesting and a shock no one has thought of it my problem though is that MC has that weird power from that novel or is it manga I've never read before. Its' already a cheat to have Peter's IQ anymore powers from other verses feels like an unnecessary power up to be honest so I ended up dropping the story midway. All in all its well written good grammar, not a fan of Peter's superhero suit😅 and I do advice people to give it a try incase you might get hooked.

1yr
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CruddyDrummer

This reads like the author wanted to create his own Butchered version of The Perfect Run.

1yr
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Lector231

Very Good..........................................................................................................................................

1yr
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Enigmation

I genuinely want to like this novel but the cringe is too strong. Also, if you aren't a fan or have not read Lord of Mysteries, you will be GREATLY confused/dislike it as the story is heavily influenced by it(all the cringe included). Decent grammar&writing doesn't feel flat.The plot is ok but sometimes incoherent and at some parts require heavy suspension of disbelief. Pacing is fine though.Personally, I'm not a fan of the character simply because of his whackiness and propensity for constantly switching between personalities.Also, tis a miracle mon chou. Sadly, I'm out.

1yr
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Logain_Septimus

I rate this as very average. Needs work all over but is ok for a quick read so long as you don't mind the oddness of it all. It's very forced and unnatural in it's writing. Enough said.

1yr
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Lizrock

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1yr
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Commence_Comments

Big fan👍 💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💵💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💰💸💸💸💸💶💶💶💶💷💷💷💷💴💴💴

1yr
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Lizrock

Se a fumado al escribir esto[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
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Servydaos

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1yr
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Sleepless_night

Just no, it was good at first, but now it's just unreadable trash

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1yr
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Kosmostars

Мне нравится 👍 спасибо за хорошое фанфик [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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1yr
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Remero

i love the lord of the mystries references

1yr
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Sir_Stronghold

Great story with good writing and ideas. keep up the good work mate. [img=recommend]

1yr
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FM_DM
LV 4 Badge

I will begin saying that I really enjoy the story. I love the use of Lizard Peter. The way that his relationship with Gwen changes feel realistic and I like their interactions. As I do not know the original source material for the gauntlet thingy that gives him additional powers, it feels strange to me. But that's me. I feel it could be replaced by his lizard background... for example, his hunger may be an unforeseen defect in his "perfected" formula (and a subplot to experiments to resolve it). Same with the eating others with the gauntlet, it could be done by means of "cannibalism" in his lizard form to gain the same effect of acquiring new abilities. Once more, I like the story as is. And my opinion on this is my own fault for not knowing the other power. Really good writing and funny moments in almost every chapter Keep the good work.

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1yr
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kevin_juan

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1yr
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dragon_nightsky

i love this book because the way ste story goes i see myself in it

1yr
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Omced
LV 4 Badge

Main characters name is Gehrman Sparro2 one of Klein’s identities, the crazy adventure in Lord of the Mysteries.

1yr
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Ark_4171

I love the story looking for more Spider-Man fanfiction you really fall right on top I really like the Peter Parker with the somewhat dark universe that the film made us feel. good luck and keep going like that bro👍💯

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1yr
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Polo86

Hasta el momento me parece muy bien, exelente espero que siga así. De qui en adelante es relleno para completar los 140 carácteres Hay un dolor sordo en mi cabeza, que hace que la gente se sienta incómoda

1yr
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Mysteries_

Eu sinceramente não sei como isso pode ter uma nota tão alta, nada faz sentido, os diálogos são chatos e não parecem fluidos, os pensamentos do personagem não tem lógica, eu gostei de ter introduzidos itens de lotm mas foi só isso, existe uma infinidade de itens e vc introduziu um dos menos úteis e ainda fez Peter Parker tomar o soro do lagarto, sério

1yr
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JustSomeRandomNPC

well your FF is good one of my favorites FF😌😏

1yr
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_Anuar_

"ITS A MASTERPICE" 10/11 . . .

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1yr
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Thorn_Vale

Just because there's gherman and creeping hunger here I rate it 5 stars it doesnt matter if I only read one chapter its 5 stars for me but that is my opinion

1yr
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KIRA007

The story is very good, the character’s interaction feels natural it can feel weird at times but not forced like some other stories i read. the Mc himself I like he not perfects he cocky, egotistical a bit, and is mostly teasing the female love interest and like it, neither him or the other characters are perfect and it’s good. There are time in the story that feel weird and maybe to some out of place but this just a small issue i have but do believe the story would benefit more if the author was to put more humor into it nothing force. Other than few criticisms I have this story is solid strong 4⭐️ but definitely not 5⭐️ and very stories are a 5⭐️.

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1yr
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NIkhil_Kumar

Good... Good.. Very Good. Keep it up and don't give up the book. Give me new chapters ~ I am a dumb person. I don't know how to write good reviews.

1yr
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