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the story started out basically as any Chad, know it all, incapable of mistakes mc with heaven-defying talent and who gets basically new powers in the span of a paragraph or two, in other words, it started out as the average webnovel story so I couldn't hate on it too much considering the grammar and storyline was better than most other stories, but then the author decided out of nowhere to turn the mc into a pure evil mad scientists that kills human for entertainment, so yeah... not really my thing.
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Love your works, keep it up. ,.............................................. kujy,ck5v,yedw,bxz5,cjqy,b0pr,jaqj,xy6v,udrw,wwyj,id2m,ovah,sybd,j9ec,6dri,8mhz,0wyi,nyan,deasy,gzmj,9d7l,jfl2,kht1,mhk8,fxb5,i7bw,bxgm,l1un,ilp3,ig9l,4kr0,usdk,6azo,d0mx,fnnp,uh4g,iwuv,42jg,tyrb,4ech,w0ll,mnpg,5r67,bylb,0rr6,wv56,iaed,idmd,lvrj,plzj,x9od,wu6i/ON#2,uhyp,weh8/ON#2,ue95,wj6t,ntds,m85g,cal6,bzcj,wf8r,vom8,mf2x,mbyw,s8gh,5io5,mpkj,6ksf,zo9d,ycv8,xt58,npez,9owk,e1vb,v349,ijht,pjlh,tzus,jrtv,654s,r9k5,y702,eo6y,h7uu,sezr,8zpt,gjf9,9ekf,r579,4bfg,57je,i2nw,cfv9,ka6i,rv72/ON#3,0ws2,6z6r,jftz,7heg,q7zw,iifx,wz0u,i2wv,v0wh,5wfn,gs71/ON#1,hfao/ON#1 This is my take on the dxd cyao scenario, its from Lt Ouroumov's Worm CYOA V6
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The quality of the book is great, hardly any mistakes. The fact that the MC is human just buffs the book more. Most dxd fanfics make their MC a devil or make them a slave by joining a peerage. For now this hasn't veered off course and I'm hoping it won't.
well your friend recommended your book and I must say I wasn't disappointed one bit. and please what's your fanfic.net username
Slather me in butter and rub me in oil then base me with brown sugar and whip cream
Excellent Quality Abysmally Quantity we need more chapters Plez you could always do a power stone Goal thing where every 100 power stones you make a extra chapter with a limit of 10 bonus chapters a week or something best to make a limit though
Your friend recommend. Very good fic, although I think the chapters are short but very good.
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the story started out basically as any Chad, know it all, incapable of mistakes mc with heaven-defying talent and who gets basically new powers in the span of a paragraph or two, in other words, it started out as the average webnovel story so I couldn't hate on it too much considering the grammar and storyline was better than most other stories, but then the author decided out of nowhere to turn the mc into a pure evil mad scientists that kills human for entertainment, so yeah... not really my thing.
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Love your works, keep it up. ,.............................................. kujy,ck5v,yedw,bxz5,cjqy,b0pr,jaqj,xy6v,udrw,wwyj,id2m,ovah,sybd,j9ec,6dri,8mhz,0wyi,nyan,deasy,gzmj,9d7l,jfl2,kht1,mhk8,fxb5,i7bw,bxgm,l1un,ilp3,ig9l,4kr0,usdk,6azo,d0mx,fnnp,uh4g,iwuv,42jg,tyrb,4ech,w0ll,mnpg,5r67,bylb,0rr6,wv56,iaed,idmd,lvrj,plzj,x9od,wu6i/ON#2,uhyp,weh8/ON#2,ue95,wj6t,ntds,m85g,cal6,bzcj,wf8r,vom8,mf2x,mbyw,s8gh,5io5,mpkj,6ksf,zo9d,ycv8,xt58,npez,9owk,e1vb,v349,ijht,pjlh,tzus,jrtv,654s,r9k5,y702,eo6y,h7uu,sezr,8zpt,gjf9,9ekf,r579,4bfg,57je,i2nw,cfv9,ka6i,rv72/ON#3,0ws2,6z6r,jftz,7heg,q7zw,iifx,wz0u,i2wv,v0wh,5wfn,gs71/ON#1,hfao/ON#1 This is my take on the dxd cyao scenario, its from Lt Ouroumov's Worm CYOA V6
awesome story ............................................... .............................................................................................
The quality of the book is great, hardly any mistakes. The fact that the MC is human just buffs the book more. Most dxd fanfics make their MC a devil or make them a slave by joining a peerage. For now this hasn't veered off course and I'm hoping it won't.
well your friend recommended your book and I must say I wasn't disappointed one bit. and please what's your fanfic.net username
Slather me in butter and rub me in oil then base me with brown sugar and whip cream
Excellent Quality Abysmally Quantity we need more chapters Plez you could always do a power stone Goal thing where every 100 power stones you make a extra chapter with a limit of 10 bonus chapters a week or something best to make a limit though
Your friend recommend. Very good fic, although I think the chapters are short but very good.
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