Reborn in My Hero Academia as a Demon Slayer.

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CruelReality

I could not get past the first three chapters. The premise is interesting but the problem I have is primarily with the setup and secondarily with the MC. The setup has to be the dumbest I have read in a long time. The MC chooses to be born into the world or MHA but to be quirkless with an arguably underpowered perk. I repeat, he picks a world where he will be discriminated against and then given the ability to wish for an OP power or one with limitless long term potential he asks for breathing techniques. The MC is a goody two shoes, which albeit not my favorite is fine for this setting. However, the sheer stupidiy and cringe he out puts is not fine. He has the audacity to get upset about him and his mom suffering discrimination after he chooses to be born in MHA. He yells about how he will be a top ten hero for no apparent reason. Overall, he is simple a cringe naive moron and the author lacks the ability to write dialogue that is good. That being said this is passable and perhaps it gets better, I simply couldn’t get past the end of chapter three so it isn’t for me.

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Insta_username

Mc is born in MHA quirkless while god gave him choice for any power 😩 Maybe author is closet masochist and like when people abuse him so he wrote a fic about that scenario, who knows

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Drako_0692

Swordsmen are super bad with the world of boku no hero not to mention Yoriichi's talent is already at One For All level. That being said, you didn't put protagonists with a messiah complex or childish morals, nor did you have gods, so my friend, they are 5 stars

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Caedus_Aldric

Honest review so first of all the concept of the story is quite good but the dialogues are cringe specially for the MC towards other at a young age secnd mother's quirk is spatial manipulation you should have used that and get her a job that would have made more sense as no person have still seen one piece ending and that can negatively impact manga industries you should also had show more struggle by her mother instead of just being supportive by MC so anyway my opinion 3/5 overall

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ninja_warrior

keep up the good work I'm looking forward to what you will write I hope you can live up to my expectations of your writing

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JapaOuO

man, I found the dialogues complicated, in addition to the MC being stupid.... but what bothers me most is that I thought the MC would be strong, in addition to the discrepancy in strength demonstrated several times.... and about why I thought that the MC is weak! Man, the MC trained his breaths for over 15 years and he proves to be weaker than Tanjiro after passing the demon slayer contest! Man, demon slayer characters, especially the Hashiras, have speed above hypersonic! and absurd strength! But this MC demonstrates the strength of being just a little superhuman!

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TheAbsolution

honestly i was skeptical at first as to how well he'll fare in mha but you've proven me wrong good job author i must say .....a really well written fanfic

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The_man_The_myth

Consistency and writing out a base for you plot is the most important if you only write a chapter a week people will drop this a cool idea I hope it turns out well

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DaoistPfd13C

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

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Blackwhip

so braindead. so unassuming. so lazy. so weak.

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Lox_Of_Sins

Just take a 5 star because you you seem like a chill dude.. Us fellow amateur authors need to unite and fuse into the most powerful Being!

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deMiLemnSAdvenTure

5 stars cuz i like it... Got any problem? None?.. Ok

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merri_dono

Wow great work authorit's like unpolished gemsadly quite short of chapter for me but I will support it as I can.

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Sensei_8446

Mc is annoying..........................

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thesacredmenace

Pretty good premise and writing. The MC is like a mix between tanjiro and Luffy which is good. Appreciate that the author hears the readers

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DaoistNRGZgd

At this point,i don't even know,if he'll learn Sun Breathing and it's obvious the author created an excuse for him not to learn or master Sun Breathing at all,and although I hate to say this but some are a little cringe and he's a little over confident,and what's the point of having Yoriichi's body when he can't learn Sun Breathing i already bet it'll take a hundred chapters or so (opinion) for him to learn Sun Breathing, transparent world,Selfless state I guess which is obviously why it's obvious he's nerfed.

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Tardo_The_AssMonke

this is a really good book despite the fact that he rarely updates and I would recommend other people to read it. but now for what I want. I want the MC to fight All for One and to barely stand against All for One with All Might, basically being a severe detriment instead of a helping hand and for him to realize that and to give a speech about how he's lived a good life and that he doesn't mind dying younger than he would like just to get rid of All for One so he crosses his arms like the Stone Hashira did and unleash a Demon Slayer Mark that Amps his physical capabilities where he stands next to a weakend All Might taking on All for One toe to toe and basically doing his version of Tengen vs Gyutaru with him using either Sun Breathing or Stone Breathing along the Red Blade the Stone Hashira used in his fight against Upper Moon 1

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SamiSalami2005

I really liked the theme but too bad that the author had to mix and mash stuff from other anime. The mc is really annoying, inconsistent, a yapper, and just like a lot of the fic, overall inconsistent in many aspects and not to mention the grammar coupled with award winning cringy dialogue. It feels like the author had no real plan going into this and just made things up on the fly adding to the inconsistency and "unrealistic"/unfitting aspects of the fic.

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ZackDKaizo

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M_Static

i like this ff, but at writing it only when he is bored so updating stability sucks and i expect it to be dropped anytime soon