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Onde que encontra essa romance sem ser trancado e foda 4 estrela pós tá trancado 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨
Just wanted to point out the title should say on not in. What is he a lawn dart stuck in the island or a person surviving on the island
Loyal fan here. the story is overall great cause I'm a fan when in it comes to island survival and this is story is up to my taste too bad the chapters is still a little. go and keep up the good work author.
I'm holding back on my review for now because of the length of this story but believe me this is a must read. The world background is recognizable but seems to hold secrets of it's own that the MC is too busy surviving to explore, but that is even more reason to stick with this book. it's not even my genre of choice yet I'm here. it's a brilliant take on the now iconic system trope that instead of focusing on how the main character gets powerful or has to survive unreasonably evil people thrives on conflict around simply trying to get by everyday while being stranded in a desolate environment.
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your novel is good is just that, in your 1-14 chapter is just that your writing is a little hard to understand. I know that your new. [img=recommend] but in 15 and above, the story became a little good, not like the 1st chapters. the story has become more interesting and entertaining. btw. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]
a refreshing idea. i love the way he can still survive even without the system. and i love how he isn't a pervert and prioritize survival. hope your updating stability is improved. the writing quality is okay since i used to read mtl HAHAHAHA. keep up the good work author. i will support you
Spoiler enthüllen Onde que encontra essa romance sem ser trancado e foda 4 estrela pós tá trancado 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨
Just wanted to point out the title should say on not in. What is he a lawn dart stuck in the island or a person surviving on the island
Loyal fan here. the story is overall great cause I'm a fan when in it comes to island survival and this is story is up to my taste too bad the chapters is still a little. go and keep up the good work author.
I'm holding back on my review for now because of the length of this story but believe me this is a must read. The world background is recognizable but seems to hold secrets of it's own that the MC is too busy surviving to explore, but that is even more reason to stick with this book. it's not even my genre of choice yet I'm here. it's a brilliant take on the now iconic system trope that instead of focusing on how the main character gets powerful or has to survive unreasonably evil people thrives on conflict around simply trying to get by everyday while being stranded in a desolate environment.
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your novel is good is just that, in your 1-14 chapter is just that your writing is a little hard to understand. I know that your new. [img=recommend] but in 15 and above, the story became a little good, not like the 1st chapters. the story has become more interesting and entertaining. btw. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]
a refreshing idea. i love the way he can still survive even without the system. and i love how he isn't a pervert and prioritize survival. hope your updating stability is improved. the writing quality is okay since i used to read mtl HAHAHAHA. keep up the good work author. i will support you
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