I Became The Father of a Nation

LV 15

Cha0sTheory

Interesting plot and mc so far. Pacing is good, too. Hopefully, it's not dropped anytime too soon

LV 14

WorshipLordFifth

Well written, with a decent pace and an interesting cast of characters. I really enjoy the simple and heartwarming relationships between all of the characters. I hope we get some more info on the world and that the mc starts doing more reforms.

LV 3

101Sunshine101

Nice one. I love how simple and easy to process your writing style is. Keep going, I look forward to it. I'm reading again in ages after a hard work period. Be sure to give us a good piece of this art.

LV 15

Lxpsy

The Novel is really simple . Most situations are cleared in some simple sentences and it feels sometimes like a summary. The Characters and World have a lot of potential but it’s sadly not used . It’s okay to read it . If u flesh the story and dialogs more out it could become a great story.