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Veryvery fun and good.......................-----------------------------------------_-__-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_-__-
I like the story i hope the author update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Its okay. Not bad but the grammar can definitely be worked on. If the author checks over and edits the translates this fanfic can definitely be top 20 in my best fanfics ive read
Good, i like the history 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
It's pretty good, the only thing I don't like is the mass murder of so many civilians and soldiers just following orders and I'm sure this will be repeated in the future just to rule the world, call me dainty, sissy or whatever, but it's not my thing xd I would have occupied an uninhabited island and from there began to earn a reputation, either by intercepting world government ships containing slaves, etc. Removing that and some other grammatical error such as calling the mc by "her", I recommend it
Veryvery fun and good.......................-----------------------------------------_-__-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_-__-
I like the story i hope the author update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Its okay. Not bad but the grammar can definitely be worked on. If the author checks over and edits the translates this fanfic can definitely be top 20 in my best fanfics ive read
Good, i like the history 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
It's pretty good, the only thing I don't like is the mass murder of so many civilians and soldiers just following orders and I'm sure this will be repeated in the future just to rule the world, call me dainty, sissy or whatever, but it's not my thing xd I would have occupied an uninhabited island and from there began to earn a reputation, either by intercepting world government ships containing slaves, etc. Removing that and some other grammatical error such as calling the mc by "her", I recommend it