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really, really good, but the author is no longer working on it and is instead making a completely different story with the only similarity being good genetics and it's in halo.
I honestly really like this story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
This book is one of the best in my opinion and has great character and world building alongside a truly funny and insightful author who regularly interacts with his readers, making the atmosphere enjoyable all in all a very good book that I would have as a must read for any Halo fans
I have been looking for a halo story now the halo story I was looking for was a halo system technology kingdom building type story but even normal halo stories are very few on here nor are they continued very often so I'm gonna gives this five star review and if it's not worth a five star I will up date this if not you know it's a good story
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The writing is readable (like it doesn’t read like a translation) The system is really not a tool used to progress the character (which I think is fine) it’s more or less used to show the status of the character and help gauge the strength and skills of the character to the reader.
Need more side character Development. The mc is cool so far but side characters matter just as much as the mc. we need real reactions from the people near him. More changes from them.
I always love halo fanfictions I just hope you keep writing no matter any setbacks might keep you away
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD READ READ READ READ AWESOME AWESOME ASESOME AWESOME AUTHOR AUTHOR AUTHOR AUTHOR
the system is a lie. the system is a lie. the system is a lie. mc can't get power up from system.
So far, this is a very good halo fic. The author adds art so that's a plus. The grammar doesn't seem to have any problems. I can't wait to see what the mc is able to change story wise (saving people ect... idk).
If you don't want to read boring, borderline unnecessary plot then start reading from Chapter 15 because it sums up what the MC went through without the random PoV changes.
A Very prommising Story, hugely recormend even if you know nothing about the Halo universe. The Author knows what he/she does or got the Instinct's, the Character interactions are very well written and life like, the Mc is compassionate but not naive I would describe him as a Hawkeye and Captain America Fusion. Give it a try Guy's Peace out
I hope this keeps getting posted because I can see this becoming one of my favorite fanfics.
Author is articulate and makes believable characters. This has honestly been such a joy to read so far and is incredibly refreshing compared to the standard drivel that is most of the fanfics on here.
love the way this is progressing hope he becomes friends/rivals with the chief and don't make him too overpowered so you can get more chapters so more people will be inclined to read this book I would donate but I live in Communist Canada and am pretty broke + I need to repair my car now🥲
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It's very hard to find good halo FF so I'm very interested in this as from what I've read at the moment it looks very good and not just a self insert of an OP OC in Halo. It seems that the character will be very strong at a later time due to reasons explained in the story but he won't be infallible which is very good. The characters are also explained well whether it be their motive for doing something or the way the react to situations. I am also intrigued in what will happen to the MC due to him being designated to a different and original project that sounds like it will combine aspects from the Spartan-II initiative and the Spartan-III initiative or trying to splice his DNA with covenant DNA due to the name Chimera. Overall, it's looking to be a great read with a lot of potential.
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First Halo Fanfiction I've read. So far, it's amazing didn't think I would enjoy a halo fanfiction, but the author has somehow rekindled one of my favorite childhood games. Can't wait for more chapters to come out definitely worth the read.
I love Halo, and so far, this is incredibly promising. The writing is great, the story is interesting, and the MC is believable and well written. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I love halo and need more of this! I will gube power stones.!!!——- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
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You should do a gears of war one when you feel comfortable. And this halo novel is good 10/10
I fogired I should drop some kind of review and perhaps something like a thread for some people’s questions before they read. So they know what they are getting into before getting their hopes up. Anyway I hope you enjoy the story.
really, really good, but the author is no longer working on it and is instead making a completely different story with the only similarity being good genetics and it's in halo.
I honestly really like this story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
This book is one of the best in my opinion and has great character and world building alongside a truly funny and insightful author who regularly interacts with his readers, making the atmosphere enjoyable all in all a very good book that I would have as a must read for any Halo fans
I have been looking for a halo story now the halo story I was looking for was a halo system technology kingdom building type story but even normal halo stories are very few on here nor are they continued very often so I'm gonna gives this five star review and if it's not worth a five star I will up date this if not you know it's a good story
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The writing is readable (like it doesn’t read like a translation) The system is really not a tool used to progress the character (which I think is fine) it’s more or less used to show the status of the character and help gauge the strength and skills of the character to the reader.
Need more side character Development. The mc is cool so far but side characters matter just as much as the mc. we need real reactions from the people near him. More changes from them.
I always love halo fanfictions I just hope you keep writing no matter any setbacks might keep you away
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD READ READ READ READ AWESOME AWESOME ASESOME AWESOME AUTHOR AUTHOR AUTHOR AUTHOR
the system is a lie. the system is a lie. the system is a lie. mc can't get power up from system.
So far, this is a very good halo fic. The author adds art so that's a plus. The grammar doesn't seem to have any problems. I can't wait to see what the mc is able to change story wise (saving people ect... idk).
If you don't want to read boring, borderline unnecessary plot then start reading from Chapter 15 because it sums up what the MC went through without the random PoV changes.
A Very prommising Story, hugely recormend even if you know nothing about the Halo universe. The Author knows what he/she does or got the Instinct's, the Character interactions are very well written and life like, the Mc is compassionate but not naive I would describe him as a Hawkeye and Captain America Fusion. Give it a try Guy's Peace out
I hope this keeps getting posted because I can see this becoming one of my favorite fanfics.
Author is articulate and makes believable characters. This has honestly been such a joy to read so far and is incredibly refreshing compared to the standard drivel that is most of the fanfics on here.
love the way this is progressing hope he becomes friends/rivals with the chief and don't make him too overpowered so you can get more chapters so more people will be inclined to read this book I would donate but I live in Communist Canada and am pretty broke + I need to repair my car now🥲
Spoiler enthüllen It's very hard to find good halo FF so I'm very interested in this as from what I've read at the moment it looks very good and not just a self insert of an OP OC in Halo. It seems that the character will be very strong at a later time due to reasons explained in the story but he won't be infallible which is very good. The characters are also explained well whether it be their motive for doing something or the way the react to situations. I am also intrigued in what will happen to the MC due to him being designated to a different and original project that sounds like it will combine aspects from the Spartan-II initiative and the Spartan-III initiative or trying to splice his DNA with covenant DNA due to the name Chimera. Overall, it's looking to be a great read with a lot of potential.
Spoiler enthüllen First Halo Fanfiction I've read. So far, it's amazing didn't think I would enjoy a halo fanfiction, but the author has somehow rekindled one of my favorite childhood games. Can't wait for more chapters to come out definitely worth the read.
I love Halo, and so far, this is incredibly promising. The writing is great, the story is interesting, and the MC is believable and well written. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I love halo and need more of this! I will gube power stones.!!!——- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
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You should do a gears of war one when you feel comfortable. And this halo novel is good 10/10
I fogired I should drop some kind of review and perhaps something like a thread for some people’s questions before they read. So they know what they are getting into before getting their hopes up. Anyway I hope you enjoy the story.