My Cute Wife is Mitsuri Kanroji

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FandomExplorer_2nd

Bro finally.. someone made a mc that has a Hamon... hamon Is so underrated (in my opinion)

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DaoisteGMJi9

is was good and all in the previous chapter then suddenly the mc said a taboo of all reincarnator telling their past life

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GreedyHuman

The writing quality of the story is good, although there are some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. In terms of story development, there is too much romance. While I understand that it falls under the slice-of-life genre, since the author included an action tag, there should be a balance between romance and action. As it stands, the excessive romance makes it boring for me, so I would rate it 3 stars ⭐. The characters are well-designed, especially the main character (MC). He is calm, smart, and respected. However, there are instances where he goes overboard with his romance/love for Mitsuri. For example, when he says, "I don't want other people to see your smile," it comes across as possessive. Despite this, I still like the characters, so I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. The world background is well-developed, and the author has put effort into providing detailed descriptions. I would rate it 5 stars ⭐. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5 stars) Regarding the updating stability, it should be noted that the updates for this fanfic are slow. However, considering that it is a fanfiction and provided to readers for free, I would still give it a 5-star rating. The author's efforts and dedication to continuing the story despite the slow updates deserve appreciation. In summary, I enjoy the story overall, but the heavy focus on slice-of-life elements and excessive romance make it boring for me at times. The pacing can also be inconsistent, with moments of slow and fast pace. Since it's only 13 chapters long, I will reserve my final judgment until it reaches 30 chapters, at which point I will provide another review.

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Saint_Slayer145

The interactions and setting were really nice and look forward to more. Though hope it won't go down the edgy revenge route.

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Beeruss

To good to be true, shame to be honest. If you guys prefer this type of plot/stories then go ahead, it's good. I won't tell you guys why i give it a low rating because i want you guys to read it yourself. All in all its a good ff, the idea is there no doubt about it but the prosecution(is this the correct word to use here?) is bad. But i kinda get it from the point of view of the author.

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S_S_25

Man, the writing in webnovels is dreadful, and I'm sick of this garbage. The fact that this book was written by a third-grader is one of its strengths.

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Guren_nnn

Sur une échelle de 1 à 10 on est 9 au niveau du cringe 😬 , relation forcée trop robotique. Tomber amoureux en 1 chapitre, c'est d'un ridicule à en faire rougir les clowns. Sans compter le développement inexistant de personnage, le passé du protagoniste inconnu en une dizaine de chapitres alors que 5 lignes d'intro auraient suffit au début, l'apparence du protagoniste inconnue aussi on sait juste qu'il est basique avec une présence chaleureuse. Et la manière dont il parle de la femme est écoeurante, on dirait un contrôle maniac chinois des nombreux MTL. En bref passez votre chemin et ne tombez pas dans le panneau des autres review elles sont Fake pour la plupart.

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Lord_Cynrik

Filled with grammatical errors, and while the romance is cute, he breaks the number one rule of reincarnators. And not only does he tell her that he has memories of his past life and a modern world, he even explains that demon slayer was a fictional story and she was a character in it and all of that. For no reason. Nobody was suspicious of him, it wasn’t revealed accidentally, he just randomly broke the golden rule for no reason.

LV 4

TrashHeap

Overall, fairly fun and wholesome. A few writing decisions that struck me as odd, but it was more preference than legitimate issues. It might not be for everyone methinks, but at least give it a shot. You may just find yourself entertained. Then again, I'm Trash, my taste is Trash, and you'll love it or hate it regardless of what I say. Now to find some Mitsuri sauce. Brb.

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TheMotherLand

It’s Ight. An ok read if you don’t mind grammar that looks like it was written by a 3rd grader. Romance feels forced and rushed.

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Drako_0692

The idea is innovative, fresh and very good. Still, the execution is pretty weak, especially the part where he says he's from another world. 😪😪 Still, your story has Hammon and mitsuri in it, so take your 5 stars (when you finish the story, a remaster would be nice)

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Man_of_culture

Very bad grammar and his/her mistakes. Rushed story and incomprehensible sentences. Author probably needs to proofread it more or just get a grammar correction program

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Mr_mysterio

Without perverted gods, without systems, without powers that break established logic, with one of the best women in the trade and one of the best powers that many ignore. Dude, you put it all together for a masterpiece. I don't care about the mistakes you made.

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LutfiOii

Good! I've met very few demon slayer fanfic, and this is the most interesting in my opinion The story is not only centered on action, but also romance, which gives it a plus. I hope, the author won't be discouraged and will update the next chapter as soon as possible![img=recommend]

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Random_Omnipotent

this is pretty good 👌 please don't dropped it

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HELL_RAISER_8468

I don't really know what to say I gave it a try bcz it was fun but now it's a hassle no update in 2 months so out of curiosity i read author different storys and just like this story all of them are great but after some chapters thers no regular update and it frustrates me quite a bit well if i have to say one thing about this story except updating stability it's a masterpiece believe me it' so good even now i am waiting for new update of this story pls Author-san do regular updates[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] and here's no spoiler too int his comment

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Luis_Ma_Reyes

I like the plot, I don't mind the grammatical errors, it just improves the time of the updates [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Nyarlathotep_0

Gan aku gak tau apa yang kalian benci dari penulis ini. Kita semua berkembang pada waktunya oke. Tidak mungkin kita langsung dewasa dengan omong kosong lainnya. Terserah si MC dan penulis untuk menceritakan ceritanya. Kita hanya penonton dan pemberi saran plus kritik.

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Demon Slayer fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the idea that MC be a teacher at the start, and then become a demon slayer after married to support Mitsuri.. I also like his power.. Hamon is strong and interesting power.. I hope MC/Kotaro can develop it to fight demon easily in the future.. The minus point in this story is MC/Kotaro tell his wife/Mitsuri about his reincarnation.. I agree that as husband and wife he can share his secrets.. He can tell everything except that, it should be a secret.. But overall I love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍