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I could only make it to the 5th chapter. The author is constantly foreshadowing and giving out information on future events which is overwhelmingly annoying. Also, after his awakening the MC immediately knows knowledge that the author states in a comment as being "common information" which makes no sense.Good luck to anyone who continues to read it, but I am not waiting and paying until chapter 200 for it to get good.
5 Star just for Harem Cultivation novel without R*pe i read the first 2 chapters and love it already sadly 😥 i used my power stones for today so i will give them tomorrow i love the story you have a fan for life, my friend
Keep it up I love the entrance and the way you introduced your protagonist but you should try taking things slow and leaving some mystery in your novel
I liked the story from the first chapter. The author had done a great job fleshing out the Mc, and I appreciate that. The start may be a little weird, I feel it a bit rushed, but its an overall good story. You should check it out
This sort of genre is always quite fun to read, and I love how you executed the story development. However, some parts seem quite rushed, and the pacing sometimes abruptly speeds up with no further detail. There are also a few grammar mistakes, but it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the story. Other than that, it’s a great read! Keep it up, author!
Captivating synopsis. Although the beginning chaps are a bit rough, but am sure the Author is working on it [img=recommend]
Author-san, please make the synopsis captivating as it's looks lackluster and add little elements of what story is about. Anyway, Good Luck with your Novel. Do contact me If you need help improving the synopsis through my fb page "Abysalyounglord's Work's" .
though it is not my kind of novel but I like it..your character (Nova) is very brave and intriguing ..I think writing a novel related to space is difficult .you should know some words for it..and I think you are good in it...nice story..keep it up 👍🏻
the pilot and writing quality is good. I like the story I added my library.but the cover of the book is little bad am sorry to say that
This story is on another level especially the MC. I liked how he (Nova) is brave and seems not shaken by whatever is going on like others are doing. I can see that following his journey is going to be fun. I also hope humans will find a solution out of this mess awakening has caused. Author, more content please!
The synopsis is very intruiging and makes me want to read the book. A bummer that there are only a few chapters out yet but that is a testimony to this novel‘s potential and ability to make the reader want to read more. Overall, a pretty good novel with only the grammar a bit lackluster
Nice try! But still needs some work... The story of Nova is captivating and filled with suspenseful twists and turns. However, the author's lack of attention to spelling and grammar detracts from the overall experience. Encouraging the author to review and edit their chapters before posting will enhance the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable for readers. A little extra effort in editing can go a long way in creating a polished and professional final product :)
I like the concept, but the writing quality is extremely poor. The plot is engaging, and the story itself is pretty interesting. However, it suffers due to lack of reviewing.
I could only make it to the 5th chapter. The author is constantly foreshadowing and giving out information on future events which is overwhelmingly annoying. Also, after his awakening the MC immediately knows knowledge that the author states in a comment as being "common information" which makes no sense.Good luck to anyone who continues to read it, but I am not waiting and paying until chapter 200 for it to get good.
5 Star just for Harem Cultivation novel without R*pe i read the first 2 chapters and love it already sadly 😥 i used my power stones for today so i will give them tomorrow i love the story you have a fan for life, my friend
Keep it up I love the entrance and the way you introduced your protagonist but you should try taking things slow and leaving some mystery in your novel
I liked the story from the first chapter. The author had done a great job fleshing out the Mc, and I appreciate that. The start may be a little weird, I feel it a bit rushed, but its an overall good story. You should check it out
This sort of genre is always quite fun to read, and I love how you executed the story development. However, some parts seem quite rushed, and the pacing sometimes abruptly speeds up with no further detail. There are also a few grammar mistakes, but it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the story. Other than that, it’s a great read! Keep it up, author!
Captivating synopsis. Although the beginning chaps are a bit rough, but am sure the Author is working on it [img=recommend]
Author-san, please make the synopsis captivating as it's looks lackluster and add little elements of what story is about. Anyway, Good Luck with your Novel. Do contact me If you need help improving the synopsis through my fb page "Abysalyounglord's Work's" .
though it is not my kind of novel but I like it..your character (Nova) is very brave and intriguing ..I think writing a novel related to space is difficult .you should know some words for it..and I think you are good in it...nice story..keep it up 👍🏻
the pilot and writing quality is good. I like the story I added my library.but the cover of the book is little bad am sorry to say that
This story is on another level especially the MC. I liked how he (Nova) is brave and seems not shaken by whatever is going on like others are doing. I can see that following his journey is going to be fun. I also hope humans will find a solution out of this mess awakening has caused. Author, more content please!
The synopsis is very intruiging and makes me want to read the book. A bummer that there are only a few chapters out yet but that is a testimony to this novel‘s potential and ability to make the reader want to read more. Overall, a pretty good novel with only the grammar a bit lackluster
Nice try! But still needs some work... The story of Nova is captivating and filled with suspenseful twists and turns. However, the author's lack of attention to spelling and grammar detracts from the overall experience. Encouraging the author to review and edit their chapters before posting will enhance the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable for readers. A little extra effort in editing can go a long way in creating a polished and professional final product :)
I like the concept, but the writing quality is extremely poor. The plot is engaging, and the story itself is pretty interesting. However, it suffers due to lack of reviewing.
18 things are to much(fully detailed).That is only part I skip.