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YAAAAA ! the book is over and I can give a better review. It's my third time reading it atchually, and finally it's been finished. Although i hoped for it to be longer because I am very attached to the characters, i really like this book especially Noah ceaser!! The plot is thick but the author writes it in a way that you know bit by bit. A high recommend!
I think that this book has potential. However, the grammar makes it diffuse to fully understand certain parts of the book. I would highly advise that the author edits the chapter currently available and re-release them or ask some to edit the currently released chapters
Author, I have a question, why are you not up to uploading any new chapters till now?And please don't make any excuses.
I really like the idea of this story but I feel it's not being expressed well by the author. The plot is all over the place and too much seems to be happening at the same time. There is no given indication of scene changes and the dialogue feels almost robotic. The characters' behavior also come across as unreasonable sometimes because the events leading up to their actions aren't clearly explained.
It would have been a nice read, but the grammer is absolutely horrendous. As much as I wanted to continue giving it a try I couldn’t. At chapter 12 I gave up as the grammer finally hit the unreadable level sadly.
The book is really good. I binge-read all the chapters today. In the webnovel, it is one of the best novels in the reincarnation in novel genre. Thanks for making this novel free for today.
Hey I read your 20 chaps and kinda liked your storytelling. But 2 chaps in a week is so slow for me.
Hello, author- San, I just wanna leave a review to tell you how much I like your novel, thank you for writing it, I like the characters very much, as well the plot is unique. please, continue writing more. [img=recommend][img=update][img=Relaxed][img=More pls]
Looks for more promising than the normal author/extra/reader in novel books, the characters are fleshed out and the plot line seems coherent. The only reason it might not be blowing, is because your writing in an overally saturated genre. Also side, note came here for a review swap. Mind reviewing my book.
First of all, I want to point out the writing of the novel. It's good and the dialogues don't feel out of place like most novels nowadays. The story, albeit a bit slow at the start, seems fresh and engaging. I would highly recommend giving this a shot. Hopefully, the author won't drop it.
I really liked this story and it is one of the most unique stories I have ever read but My only issue that made it hard to read or get past the first couple of chapters: it was very confusing, and I could not understand what was happening or who was talking sometimes. 2. the scenes change way too fast and it leaves me confused and feeling like I skipped a chapter for example( I read up to the point where mc uses his flames in a fight and he was winning then suddenly next chapter I am at a completely different scene with no idea was going on. '3. I don't understand what is going on like I said scenes changes way too fast. One minute mc is talking to his friends the next mc is suddenly in a completely different place talking to completely different people. i could not tell who was speaking sometimes, I don't know if it is my eyes that cannot read or if my brain cannot comprehend what it is reading. Author, I think you need to redo the first couple of chapters again
Truth: I did gotten myself huddled in the first few pages, but once I Slash my way through, the story sucked me in. there is enough suspenseful conflict to keep you turning those pages.... Trust me the author seem to be a master of his craft as the story advanced, and to me that's a great thing. This deserve to be in your library 🤗
Story and character is alright, atleast not a cardboard cutout of stereotypes but I have a problem with the writing. The first few chapters was so horrendously written that even after I read through them several times I couldn't understand until the later chapter when all things was done.
the writing isn't good. I couldn't understand what I was reading, but the plot was not bad
Loved reading it! Except for some tiny misspellings, the overall storyline is pretty good.❤️❤️ And thank you for writing such a good story! 😊
It's an okay book but the writing needs some improvement. The story is good but the author isn't a good writer. Improve it.
The story is well written ,no errors and the characters are well written .I must say the author did a really good job writing it A must read for transmigration lovers
The narration is exceptional, with flawless grammar and an overall high standard of writing. Additionally, the story and characters are compelling and well-crafted. great potential, keep going!
your book is so good the book screams creativity am Sooo hooked , I better start binge reading 🏃🏃
this is such an excellent book. i have added it to my lib coz it's good and can't wait to see what will happen to the brother... and I love everything, at least, should... good grammar, plot, story line... dunno what else
very interesting premise, the characters seem to feel realistic and well-written, and you can get a sense of where the story is going whilst at the same time leaving you with questions. there are some grammatical errors here and there, along with some tense inconsistencies, but it's still legible and doesn't take away much from the overall experience while reading.
Quite good. Grammar on point, a few paragraphs a bit too long for my liking but that's just me. All in all it's quite a 'chill'read if I might say. Nice work author!
Hmmm.. I think the Author did a nice job in creating this story, the world background is spectacular. Just by the first few chapters that I've read all I can say is keep it up Author 👍. Please give this book a try
This good, like it. It's interesting story. Ot a bit early to write a review but I just did 😃😉 Still the grammar is a bit, You should look it through.
YAAAAA ! the book is over and I can give a better review. It's my third time reading it atchually, and finally it's been finished. Although i hoped for it to be longer because I am very attached to the characters, i really like this book especially Noah ceaser!! The plot is thick but the author writes it in a way that you know bit by bit. A high recommend!
I think that this book has potential. However, the grammar makes it diffuse to fully understand certain parts of the book. I would highly advise that the author edits the chapter currently available and re-release them or ask some to edit the currently released chapters
Author, I have a question, why are you not up to uploading any new chapters till now?And please don't make any excuses.
I really like the idea of this story but I feel it's not being expressed well by the author. The plot is all over the place and too much seems to be happening at the same time. There is no given indication of scene changes and the dialogue feels almost robotic. The characters' behavior also come across as unreasonable sometimes because the events leading up to their actions aren't clearly explained.
It would have been a nice read, but the grammer is absolutely horrendous. As much as I wanted to continue giving it a try I couldn’t. At chapter 12 I gave up as the grammer finally hit the unreadable level sadly.
The book is really good. I binge-read all the chapters today. In the webnovel, it is one of the best novels in the reincarnation in novel genre. Thanks for making this novel free for today.
Hey I read your 20 chaps and kinda liked your storytelling. But 2 chaps in a week is so slow for me.
Hello, author- San, I just wanna leave a review to tell you how much I like your novel, thank you for writing it, I like the characters very much, as well the plot is unique. please, continue writing more. [img=recommend][img=update][img=Relaxed][img=More pls]
Looks for more promising than the normal author/extra/reader in novel books, the characters are fleshed out and the plot line seems coherent. The only reason it might not be blowing, is because your writing in an overally saturated genre. Also side, note came here for a review swap. Mind reviewing my book.
First of all, I want to point out the writing of the novel. It's good and the dialogues don't feel out of place like most novels nowadays. The story, albeit a bit slow at the start, seems fresh and engaging. I would highly recommend giving this a shot. Hopefully, the author won't drop it.
I really liked this story and it is one of the most unique stories I have ever read but My only issue that made it hard to read or get past the first couple of chapters: it was very confusing, and I could not understand what was happening or who was talking sometimes. 2. the scenes change way too fast and it leaves me confused and feeling like I skipped a chapter for example( I read up to the point where mc uses his flames in a fight and he was winning then suddenly next chapter I am at a completely different scene with no idea was going on. '3. I don't understand what is going on like I said scenes changes way too fast. One minute mc is talking to his friends the next mc is suddenly in a completely different place talking to completely different people. i could not tell who was speaking sometimes, I don't know if it is my eyes that cannot read or if my brain cannot comprehend what it is reading. Author, I think you need to redo the first couple of chapters again
Truth: I did gotten myself huddled in the first few pages, but once I Slash my way through, the story sucked me in. there is enough suspenseful conflict to keep you turning those pages.... Trust me the author seem to be a master of his craft as the story advanced, and to me that's a great thing. This deserve to be in your library 🤗
Story and character is alright, atleast not a cardboard cutout of stereotypes but I have a problem with the writing. The first few chapters was so horrendously written that even after I read through them several times I couldn't understand until the later chapter when all things was done.
the writing isn't good. I couldn't understand what I was reading, but the plot was not bad
Loved reading it! Except for some tiny misspellings, the overall storyline is pretty good.❤️❤️ And thank you for writing such a good story! 😊
It's an okay book but the writing needs some improvement. The story is good but the author isn't a good writer. Improve it.
The story is well written ,no errors and the characters are well written .I must say the author did a really good job writing it A must read for transmigration lovers
The narration is exceptional, with flawless grammar and an overall high standard of writing. Additionally, the story and characters are compelling and well-crafted. great potential, keep going!
your book is so good the book screams creativity am Sooo hooked , I better start binge reading 🏃🏃
this is such an excellent book. i have added it to my lib coz it's good and can't wait to see what will happen to the brother... and I love everything, at least, should... good grammar, plot, story line... dunno what else
very interesting premise, the characters seem to feel realistic and well-written, and you can get a sense of where the story is going whilst at the same time leaving you with questions. there are some grammatical errors here and there, along with some tense inconsistencies, but it's still legible and doesn't take away much from the overall experience while reading.
Quite good. Grammar on point, a few paragraphs a bit too long for my liking but that's just me. All in all it's quite a 'chill'read if I might say. Nice work author!
Hmmm.. I think the Author did a nice job in creating this story, the world background is spectacular. Just by the first few chapters that I've read all I can say is keep it up Author 👍. Please give this book a try
This good, like it. It's interesting story. Ot a bit early to write a review but I just did 😃😉 Still the grammar is a bit, You should look it through.
I'm just here to shamelessly rate my novel 10 out of 10. Don't mind me.