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Hey new reader I love the story so far it’s good. Also was wondering will there be things like intents in this like sword intent or axe and stuff like that.
hey author , the story is great and is of taste and this not same cliche story which we see every day few words of recommebdation the story is very fast paced ! and very lil to no explanation to the background of the sect , the power structure , and how easily a well known powerhouse fall into the trap of some sect , he should have hidden cards like escape talisman or something if this is a lil bit of setting any way i like this story very much i hope you focus a lil bit on characterisation killing the sect master for the sake of the plot becomes a lil of setting but it is alright i have great expectations from this ! best of luck
Hi fellow reader here!!!! I hope you continue writing it takes time for novels to pick up btw love everything so far
Hello Readers! I'm Fifth_Daoist, the author of this story, presenting his obligatory 5-Stars Review!!! Well jokes aside. Peerless Sect Master is a story I wrote to let's say, train. Due to the lack of outline will be no grand overarching plot, just the step by step rise of the Profound Heaven Sect led by Yu Weiyuan! And I believe that's fine as well. I think I did a good job on characterization, making each characters have their own quirks, goals and mindset. I'm not a native speaker, meaning sometimes you'll perhaps find me lacking in vocabulary, but I'm sure my writing is still up to par. You can see for yourself. As for the story itself, it is my own take on the Xianxia genre. And since I'm writing this story dor training purpose, it'll stay quite orthodox, while not indulging too much in the poisonous tropes like face slapping young masters. I hope you'll enjoy my story and give me advice as we go, so we can make this story and the following one even better together with the power of friendship!! : )
Hey new reader I love the story so far it’s good. Also was wondering will there be things like intents in this like sword intent or axe and stuff like that.
hey author , the story is great and is of taste and this not same cliche story which we see every day few words of recommebdation the story is very fast paced ! and very lil to no explanation to the background of the sect , the power structure , and how easily a well known powerhouse fall into the trap of some sect , he should have hidden cards like escape talisman or something if this is a lil bit of setting any way i like this story very much i hope you focus a lil bit on characterisation killing the sect master for the sake of the plot becomes a lil of setting but it is alright i have great expectations from this ! best of luck
Hi fellow reader here!!!! I hope you continue writing it takes time for novels to pick up btw love everything so far
Hello Readers! I'm Fifth_Daoist, the author of this story, presenting his obligatory 5-Stars Review!!! Well jokes aside. Peerless Sect Master is a story I wrote to let's say, train. Due to the lack of outline will be no grand overarching plot, just the step by step rise of the Profound Heaven Sect led by Yu Weiyuan! And I believe that's fine as well. I think I did a good job on characterization, making each characters have their own quirks, goals and mindset. I'm not a native speaker, meaning sometimes you'll perhaps find me lacking in vocabulary, but I'm sure my writing is still up to par. You can see for yourself. As for the story itself, it is my own take on the Xianxia genre. And since I'm writing this story dor training purpose, it'll stay quite orthodox, while not indulging too much in the poisonous tropes like face slapping young masters. I hope you'll enjoy my story and give me advice as we go, so we can make this story and the following one even better together with the power of friendship!! : )