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Good start even though the chapters are a bit short but the pace is ok i think waiting for future updates and keep it up author
Naruto is my favorite anime so I wanted to write something. I will try my best. You are free to point out mistake but try not to use any bad words.
You are making him OP too fast..... Make long chap plz... MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
Good start even though the chapters are a bit short but the pace is ok i think waiting for future updates and keep it up author
Naruto is my favorite anime so I wanted to write something. I will try my best. You are free to point out mistake but try not to use any bad words.
You are making him OP too fast..... Make long chap plz... MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE