People in Middle Earth: Slaying the Dragon at the beginning

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SoberanoSinNombre

3.6 STAR REVIEW, ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE. world background: it is based on tolkien's middle earth, i have nothing more to add. 5 stars. Character design: it is rare to see Thorin act like a Chinese young master, this section can be improved. 3 star. Development of the story: Very few chapters to comment on, for now I will give it 4 stars because it seems promising. Update stability: 50 chapters in 3 days, perfect, 5 stars. Writing quality: this section is terrible, lines that separate leaving blank spaces, names that change non-stop, and sentences that are unconnected or that make no sense. Much could be improved, 1 star

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hde

The spacing between the text is weird and just horrible to read with dyslexia. I don't have a problem with the story but The way it is written makes it just not enjoyable to read. (tried to write the review like the fanfic)

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Sehno

Can we have the originale name ? ....,.............................................................................................................

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Bogdan7

bad gramar.......... bad spacing........ bad history.......... cn way of writing.

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Rickyson

o maior problema e ate os capitulos 11-12 os espaçamentos sao muito ruins mas depois melhora, a tradução nao e tao ruim a nao ser que voce seja uma pessoa que presta muita atenção em detalhes(infelizmente algo que tenho me tornado) e bem suportavel para a maioria, recomendo ao tradutor/editor arrumar os primeiros capitulos na questao espaçamentos como nos capitulos posteriores 12+, por que acaba com a vontade de quem quer ler a obra.

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DontWorry

Can you tell me the original text? Will you continue with the translation? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Lelouch_L23

Desde el cap 12 o 11 se puede leer un poco mejor, pero aunque la escritura es mala, al menos cuando se traduce a mi idioma, no es tanto, que pena que ya no se hayan podido subir mas historias.