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use quotationmarks!! and do more paragraphs geez... it wasn't that hard to put some punctuations was it? gaddamn on the other note, all was ok, story was good is good and would be if it could be read with ease...though better be clear on the ideas you put on your story. overall iits ot that bad
use quotationmarks!! and do more paragraphs geez... it wasn't that hard to put some punctuations was it? gaddamn on the other note, all was ok, story was good is good and would be if it could be read with ease...though better be clear on the ideas you put on your story. overall iits ot that bad