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WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.
An absolute, fantastic banger! The writing is on par with the best traditional writing and one of the most captivating works I've read so far.
Different from what you usually find her. The start is dark, and by the time you realize what's happening, you are invested in the story and the style. The author uses colorful language, which might be hard to read if it's not your first language, but very enjoyable.
I was really impressed while reading this story. The writing quality was good and there were no grammatical errors which shows how much effort the author put in this story. I won't say anything about the updating stability but I'll rate it as a 4 out of 5. The world building and the story development was nothing but amazing. In fact, I have no words. Even the characters interaction feel realistic to an exact. Overall, this is a good story. Keep up the good work author 👍
Wow, wow, wow!!! Coming into this, I did not expect the quality on display at all! It's insane and most definitely blew my mind away. Furthermore, each character has their own little quirk and is very likeable - a big sign that the Author knows what he's doing. The story has managed to hook me in, and I can't praise it more! 🔥
Just from the first three chapters, I can already assume that the novel is gonna be a blast to read! The most important aspect of any novel: the way it is written. All I can say about that is the fact that it is PERFECT! The way things are described, the way the text is written just flows perfectly, it is just perfect all the way! The characters are also very complex and good to understand! The other aspects of the novel are very well handled, it was just a fun read overall; I can't wait to read more of this later TL;DR Good novel, make sure to read it if you have time to spare!
Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
The beginning of the book was nothing less than poetry itself. Descriptive writing will force you to imagine things you have never thought about. Like a cherry on the top the grammar is perfect as well. Hope this reaches the target audience
based on what i read i don't believe that English is your second language its well written i can feel what the characters feel understand what the go through the author made a very unique and understandable characters i give this novel 9.7/10 its so good if any one want to read a good novel i highly recommend.
I like it! If your genuinely looking for a unique and fresh twist to the every day boring novel, this is for sure for you. Give it a go, Im sure you won't regret it!
It is really good for my liking they describe the world good it is really a good book asrid is the main character right? cool name
First of all, I can confidently say that this is a story you won't regret reading. The writing quality improves after the chapters the author mentioned. The world is intriguing, and the events aren't rushed or overly complicated. When something happens, the author explains it in detail and consistently to avoid leaving any questions in our minds. Moreover, as you read, you can see that the author progresses in a planned, not random, manner. It's a great story, well done to the author!
Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around). There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.
This book has a very traditional book feel and has eloquent writing by the author. From the very first chapter to the very end, the writing has been flowy and very understandable with a poetic touch. The variety of language is commendable and the pace is very stable, not too fast and not too slow. I wish the author would update sooner but apart from that i have no complaints and can recommend the book wholeheartedly, as it's worth the while. The immersive plot and writing of the author, are like chefs kiss, and the ml is written beautifully.
Absolutely amazing! The writing standard is phenomenal and the vibrant descriptions truly breathe life into this book. A masterpiece, so far.
Amazing and promising stry, good character development, Gonna bookmark this novel!..................................................................................................................
Bro, I would love to appreciate your grammar first. I am honestly impressed. Drop a few tips:) Secondly, this book honestly has potential. I have add this in my collection. Best of luck to the author:)
Here are my thoughts about the story. The pacing is quite slow but it is not a bad thing for this story. This will allow us to understand more of the world since the world is new to us readers. I also like the description and the length of the chapters. Not too short or too long and enough for us to understand the story better. That's all for now, I will probably make an update with a new review for this story.
The grammar was good, and the usage of words was awesome. I like how you describe the characters in a way that the readers could easily imagine. Keep it up!
I love how this book simply flows. The grammar is good, the character is easy to understand. The male MC does what the author created him to do, which is to make the readers excited. It's an interesting read. I am clapping my hands for you.
The grammer and writing style is lovely. This novel is so expressive that the reader begins to actually imagine the ongoing scenes. I love the Grammer, development is a bit slow but writing makes up for it.
Enjoyable read, beautiful written, good grammar, good chapter length. The plot is enjoyable and paced in a good way. Looking forward to what Asdras would be up to and how he manages his new found powers.
Very interesting, the story catches you in a second, its writing is good too, very fluid and simple. Keep it up, I look forward to more chapters.
An interesting premise and a responsive author who is constantly going back and revising chapters. The quality is literally improving over time. What more can you ask?
This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter
The story is well written, though I don't read much of this kind of novel but yours was great. I know it's going to get better as I proceed. All the best author.
you said English is not ur main language but I can't point out anything, I just knew u're better than me, you have the skills it's just that you are not lucky enough to write story for the mainstream media, you're better than me a creating story I just knew it while reading, the only thing I can point out is the sentence structure, sometimes it's too long where it should be cut to be more pleasing to the eye but hey can't argue to that fact since I still sometimes do it, overall though this is pretty good already, with stable updates this has potential in going places
Genuinely amazing. The writing style is unique and earie, the atmosphere that’s built is perfection to anyone who enjoys fiction, would recommended!
From the prologues to the latest chapter this book had been grinding hard on my tears. That's how much emotional ride you would be in for once you started it. More power to the author hope you keep updating!
I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.
Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.
WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.
An absolute, fantastic banger! The writing is on par with the best traditional writing and one of the most captivating works I've read so far.
Different from what you usually find her. The start is dark, and by the time you realize what's happening, you are invested in the story and the style. The author uses colorful language, which might be hard to read if it's not your first language, but very enjoyable.
I was really impressed while reading this story. The writing quality was good and there were no grammatical errors which shows how much effort the author put in this story. I won't say anything about the updating stability but I'll rate it as a 4 out of 5. The world building and the story development was nothing but amazing. In fact, I have no words. Even the characters interaction feel realistic to an exact. Overall, this is a good story. Keep up the good work author 👍
Wow, wow, wow!!! Coming into this, I did not expect the quality on display at all! It's insane and most definitely blew my mind away. Furthermore, each character has their own little quirk and is very likeable - a big sign that the Author knows what he's doing. The story has managed to hook me in, and I can't praise it more! 🔥
Just from the first three chapters, I can already assume that the novel is gonna be a blast to read! The most important aspect of any novel: the way it is written. All I can say about that is the fact that it is PERFECT! The way things are described, the way the text is written just flows perfectly, it is just perfect all the way! The characters are also very complex and good to understand! The other aspects of the novel are very well handled, it was just a fun read overall; I can't wait to read more of this later TL;DR Good novel, make sure to read it if you have time to spare!
Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
The beginning of the book was nothing less than poetry itself. Descriptive writing will force you to imagine things you have never thought about. Like a cherry on the top the grammar is perfect as well. Hope this reaches the target audience
based on what i read i don't believe that English is your second language its well written i can feel what the characters feel understand what the go through the author made a very unique and understandable characters i give this novel 9.7/10 its so good if any one want to read a good novel i highly recommend.
I like it! If your genuinely looking for a unique and fresh twist to the every day boring novel, this is for sure for you. Give it a go, Im sure you won't regret it!
It is really good for my liking they describe the world good it is really a good book asrid is the main character right? cool name
First of all, I can confidently say that this is a story you won't regret reading. The writing quality improves after the chapters the author mentioned. The world is intriguing, and the events aren't rushed or overly complicated. When something happens, the author explains it in detail and consistently to avoid leaving any questions in our minds. Moreover, as you read, you can see that the author progresses in a planned, not random, manner. It's a great story, well done to the author!
Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around). There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.
This book has a very traditional book feel and has eloquent writing by the author. From the very first chapter to the very end, the writing has been flowy and very understandable with a poetic touch. The variety of language is commendable and the pace is very stable, not too fast and not too slow. I wish the author would update sooner but apart from that i have no complaints and can recommend the book wholeheartedly, as it's worth the while. The immersive plot and writing of the author, are like chefs kiss, and the ml is written beautifully.
Absolutely amazing! The writing standard is phenomenal and the vibrant descriptions truly breathe life into this book. A masterpiece, so far.
Amazing and promising stry, good character development, Gonna bookmark this novel!..................................................................................................................
Bro, I would love to appreciate your grammar first. I am honestly impressed. Drop a few tips:) Secondly, this book honestly has potential. I have add this in my collection. Best of luck to the author:)
Here are my thoughts about the story. The pacing is quite slow but it is not a bad thing for this story. This will allow us to understand more of the world since the world is new to us readers. I also like the description and the length of the chapters. Not too short or too long and enough for us to understand the story better. That's all for now, I will probably make an update with a new review for this story.
The grammar was good, and the usage of words was awesome. I like how you describe the characters in a way that the readers could easily imagine. Keep it up!
I love how this book simply flows. The grammar is good, the character is easy to understand. The male MC does what the author created him to do, which is to make the readers excited. It's an interesting read. I am clapping my hands for you.
The grammer and writing style is lovely. This novel is so expressive that the reader begins to actually imagine the ongoing scenes. I love the Grammer, development is a bit slow but writing makes up for it.
Enjoyable read, beautiful written, good grammar, good chapter length. The plot is enjoyable and paced in a good way. Looking forward to what Asdras would be up to and how he manages his new found powers.
Very interesting, the story catches you in a second, its writing is good too, very fluid and simple. Keep it up, I look forward to more chapters.
An interesting premise and a responsive author who is constantly going back and revising chapters. The quality is literally improving over time. What more can you ask?
This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter
The story is well written, though I don't read much of this kind of novel but yours was great. I know it's going to get better as I proceed. All the best author.
you said English is not ur main language but I can't point out anything, I just knew u're better than me, you have the skills it's just that you are not lucky enough to write story for the mainstream media, you're better than me a creating story I just knew it while reading, the only thing I can point out is the sentence structure, sometimes it's too long where it should be cut to be more pleasing to the eye but hey can't argue to that fact since I still sometimes do it, overall though this is pretty good already, with stable updates this has potential in going places
Genuinely amazing. The writing style is unique and earie, the atmosphere that’s built is perfection to anyone who enjoys fiction, would recommended!
From the prologues to the latest chapter this book had been grinding hard on my tears. That's how much emotional ride you would be in for once you started it. More power to the author hope you keep updating!
I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.
Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.