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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionAlthough I gave this fanfic a 5 star review I I'm under no illusion that this is a masterpiece or anything close to it. So why did I give you this fanfic a five-star review? Well that is because there are nearly no good Teen Wolf fanfics out there (and I know cuz I looked)... Anyhow, out of all the existing Teen Wolf fanfics this one is the best I found and it was quite good honestly, although after chapters 60 - 65 it started to decline very very fast...
even if you trying with logically, harem in US itself is pretty illogical don't you think? that alone ruined the story, doesn't make any sense, its like putting a pineapple on a pizza, weird asfudge
very good and interesting (translated from google)...................................................................................................................................................
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Spoiler enthüllenI am really enjoying the story. keep up the good work.................................................................................................
Add to the Harém: Allison Argent, Lydia Martin, Malia Tate, Kira Yukimura, Cora Hale, Kate Argent, Kali(maybe), Hayden Romero(maybe). HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Enjoyed it. Please post more chapters. Language is good and story line is interesting. Good time pass and wonderful experience. Chapters are long and details are good
It's trashy mc morality world view is trash he isn't anything special and author keeps trying to Cu*ck the first was Allison now kira disgusting lowlife mf
A very good FF, no nefting MC, the plot dont feel forced, MC was based on Jason Momoa so he is very lovable . The harem part was done better than most harem novel , it feel fresh and NPC do have reaction toward it. The only thing I want the author to improve is the fight scenes, I really hope to read some brutal and vivid fight scenes. There two major complaints which are yuri and power scale. The Yuri is very light, it only happen between harem members and not without the MC knowing it. I dont know why people nowadays hate yuri that much, even famous TV shows had it and people love it. Some dudes even get trigger when two girls make out in a threesome, like seriously? How weak mind are you? For the power scale, some dudes got mad because MC cant win a 1 vs 2 fight against Jackson and Peter FRICKIN Hale. Dude, MC name is not Rey Skywalker, he just a beginner (3 to 4 year with no one to teaches him) at that time with no major power buff. Stop reading system and wuxia novel for sometimes my man.
mc behaving like a despo for a girl(allison) who doesn't give a sheet about him and is already in a happy relationship with Scott and they are flirting and kissing all the time in front of him but our mc still trying his best to somehow have her just shows how much degrading and loathsome his character is and on top of it he boasts to be a lion having immense pride yeah that's some disgusting sheet.
going going and gone... Starting is a little ok but as we go on story starts like not a fanfiction but a his own story and a boring story [img=thinking][img=sad][img=disgusted]....
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I have though all day if in this novel were something to criticize, but i haven’t find anything yet, and i think that i will never find it... this story is such pregnant of emition. The story, even though it is a fan-fic from teen wolf, is original and surprisingly well written. Just read this novel!
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I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
well it is absolutely logical that he has his own harem because he is an basically an a lion so it is basically logical because in a lions Pride they have females and those females will basically be the Lions own harem
Quite an interesting and intriguing book especially with the MC being a werelion instead of like werewolf, vampire or something of that sort do wonder how things will play out also like how u started it beforeteen wolf begins so MC won't be the cliche new kid that is suspected of being the alpha and more so he is the captain instead of Jackson and is together with Lydia also enjoyed the little plot twist of Laura being alive and MC being adopted by a old couple wonder what will happen next overall have enjoyed reading this book look forward to getting the chance to continue reading whenever ur able to get chance to continue
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Spoiler enthüllenPretty decent Fanfic so far, only have a few issues if you could really call it that. One is that the grammar needs some work. Not sure if English is a second language to the author or not but it needs some work. Another is the dialog, if feels very weird and Disorienting, reading American teenagers talk like characters out of a Chinese wuxia novel. Besides that, not to bad.
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Although I gave this fanfic a 5 star review I I'm under no illusion that this is a masterpiece or anything close to it. So why did I give you this fanfic a five-star review? Well that is because there are nearly no good Teen Wolf fanfics out there (and I know cuz I looked)... Anyhow, out of all the existing Teen Wolf fanfics this one is the best I found and it was quite good honestly, although after chapters 60 - 65 it started to decline very very fast...
even if you trying with logically, harem in US itself is pretty illogical don't you think? that alone ruined the story, doesn't make any sense, its like putting a pineapple on a pizza, weird asfudge
very good and interesting (translated from google)...................................................................................................................................................
Tres bonne lecture continues ainsi. Personne attachant et vivant [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler enthüllenI am really enjoying the story. keep up the good work.................................................................................................
Add to the Harém: Allison Argent, Lydia Martin, Malia Tate, Kira Yukimura, Cora Hale, Kate Argent, Kali(maybe), Hayden Romero(maybe). HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Enjoyed it. Please post more chapters. Language is good and story line is interesting. Good time pass and wonderful experience. Chapters are long and details are good
It's trashy mc morality world view is trash he isn't anything special and author keeps trying to Cu*ck the first was Allison now kira disgusting lowlife mf
A very good FF, no nefting MC, the plot dont feel forced, MC was based on Jason Momoa so he is very lovable . The harem part was done better than most harem novel , it feel fresh and NPC do have reaction toward it. The only thing I want the author to improve is the fight scenes, I really hope to read some brutal and vivid fight scenes. There two major complaints which are yuri and power scale. The Yuri is very light, it only happen between harem members and not without the MC knowing it. I dont know why people nowadays hate yuri that much, even famous TV shows had it and people love it. Some dudes even get trigger when two girls make out in a threesome, like seriously? How weak mind are you? For the power scale, some dudes got mad because MC cant win a 1 vs 2 fight against Jackson and Peter FRICKIN Hale. Dude, MC name is not Rey Skywalker, he just a beginner (3 to 4 year with no one to teaches him) at that time with no major power buff. Stop reading system and wuxia novel for sometimes my man.
mc behaving like a despo for a girl(allison) who doesn't give a sheet about him and is already in a happy relationship with Scott and they are flirting and kissing all the time in front of him but our mc still trying his best to somehow have her just shows how much degrading and loathsome his character is and on top of it he boasts to be a lion having immense pride yeah that's some disgusting sheet.
going going and gone... Starting is a little ok but as we go on story starts like not a fanfiction but a his own story and a boring story [img=thinking][img=sad][img=disgusted]....
Nice...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Buen capitulo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have though all day if in this novel were something to criticize, but i haven’t find anything yet, and i think that i will never find it... this story is such pregnant of emition. The story, even though it is a fan-fic from teen wolf, is original and surprisingly well written. Just read this novel!
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I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
well it is absolutely logical that he has his own harem because he is an basically an a lion so it is basically logical because in a lions Pride they have females and those females will basically be the Lions own harem
Quite an interesting and intriguing book especially with the MC being a werelion instead of like werewolf, vampire or something of that sort do wonder how things will play out also like how u started it beforeteen wolf begins so MC won't be the cliche new kid that is suspected of being the alpha and more so he is the captain instead of Jackson and is together with Lydia also enjoyed the little plot twist of Laura being alive and MC being adopted by a old couple wonder what will happen next overall have enjoyed reading this book look forward to getting the chance to continue reading whenever ur able to get chance to continue
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Spoiler enthüllenPretty decent Fanfic so far, only have a few issues if you could really call it that. One is that the grammar needs some work. Not sure if English is a second language to the author or not but it needs some work. Another is the dialog, if feels very weird and Disorienting, reading American teenagers talk like characters out of a Chinese wuxia novel. Besides that, not to bad.
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I can’t wait to read the next chapter when it comes out