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This is very there’s no doubt about that but it is very confusing to read and sometime makes not sense with all the errors in the sentences and story line, some gender are mix up and some character aren’t even the right power level think about it would someone that has a sprit with a rank of 20 when it first awaken really have trouble with some weak 20,000 year old sprit beast and where are her guards
Thank you, Author-san, for this story) I really hope that updates will be released steadily. And I wish you that this story ends and is not thrown half way.
So far a very good fanfic that keeps you excited for the next chapter. Let's hope it doesn't get dropped like 99% of fanfics [img=update][img=update]
It's a good one so far, i Don't know if it's your fanfiction or mtl since there is many mistakes but still good, and when will he get his system?
This is very there’s no doubt about that but it is very confusing to read and sometime makes not sense with all the errors in the sentences and story line, some gender are mix up and some character aren’t even the right power level think about it would someone that has a sprit with a rank of 20 when it first awaken really have trouble with some weak 20,000 year old sprit beast and where are her guards
Thank you, Author-san, for this story) I really hope that updates will be released steadily. And I wish you that this story ends and is not thrown half way.
So far a very good fanfic that keeps you excited for the next chapter. Let's hope it doesn't get dropped like 99% of fanfics [img=update][img=update]
It's a good one so far, i Don't know if it's your fanfiction or mtl since there is many mistakes but still good, and when will he get his system?
i know there is not a tag but if there a romantic interest?