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I'm late but one of the few fics I can read without trying to bash my head into a wall
i, the greatest, have put my mark here to say that this story is one of the best Naruto ff i have ever read. it has a more slice of life element and has the right proportions of action and pace. although many are arguing about roushiki and breathing styles and what not, who cares . this is a story where everyone has them in konoha and he is still the mc and everything is peaceful and works out, so how does it matter. this story is thus unique because of this and I have liked it in this way very much too. it also has the right amount of character of madara, garp and whitebeard to make the mc have a perfect personality in its own way. downright genius I am telling you and author you could've made it very better by not only focusing on mc, but this still works very well . once again, one of the best Naruto ff i ve read because of its unique elements so just enjoy it if you can, cuz this thing is really good
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The beginning really hooked me. You know how to grab a reader’s attention.💛 : : : :🍀💛🍀💛🍀💛💛🍀🍀💛🍀🍀💛🍀💛🍀💛💙💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Another story finished, was good but just have a feeling something is missing at the end, DTK what but it's finished nonetheless and for that THANK YOU 😊😊😊
NGL, the athour definitely needs to improve their extrapolation ability, the chapters I've read so far being the 1st to the 3rd are short and have room for massive improvement in terms of content, at the very least, they have better grammar then most stories I See on here.
Honestly my favorite Naruto fanfic. Made me laugh a lot. I hope you can write more books preferably marvel, dc, bleach, hxh, jjk, Harry Potter, opm, ect. Honestly I would prolly enjoy whatever you pick really. 🥳
not bad but I felt like the ending seems so rush? and there's few minor grammar and errors but it's readable. I like it 4.4/5
I love the fanfic and many people here criticises the mc giving powers to the people around him but i personally love it . It is great when the mc makes the people around him better and not living in scarcity and selfishness to be special snowflake , it is honestly pathetic. And i love the authors other work for the same reason like monkey in the multiverse ( but the thing with his biological daugher kinda made it awkward and it lead me to drop ; waiting rewrite btw ).
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It's amazing. I read everything at once. laughed a lot. the story is very interesting. I haven't read anything so funny in a long time. 🤣 the fights are also well described. Madara and Ryu are handsome. this is the first naruto reincarnation story i read straight away and gave it a high rating. thanks to the author for the laughter and interesting story.
Zahahahahax! Definitely one of the best Naruto fic I've ever read on this platform! It's a wholesome story completed with action, comedy, drama, and romance. A great choice to read if you don't have anything to do, it will make you feel fulfilled in a sense. Anyway. Great Job Monkey! Zahahahahax
One of the fan fiction I like. MC is written very well and i like comedy elements in between.
Thank you for this wonderful novel. I enjoyed every moment while reading it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😝🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Expected trash and the mc had full blown auti*m mainly because he knew stuff didn’t do anything about it and then whined about it also he gave out all his techniques and then is suprised when their stolen by the village
I'm not a professional reviewer or anything like that, just someone who decided to give his two-cents about what he read. Though I guess I have been leaving a few reviews lately so I suppose I'm picking up a sort of theme for myself on how I review things? Whatever, doesn't matter. I've read the entire novel, so this review will be based upon that experience. Writing Quality: 4/5 - A few misspelling errors, nothing too major. It'll make you have to re-read a few times to understand what was said. As far as punctuation and stuff like that, it seemed fine to me. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The novel is complete, so expect to be able to read the entire novel at your leisure. Story Development: 3/5 - Short and sweet, the overall plot/story of Naruto doesn't change, so expect to see/read the same sort of events that take place during the Original Plot. The 'Original Story' of the novel mainly consists of the MC and his actions acting like 'Salt & Pepper' for an already cooked meal, changing the flavor a bit but the meal is still Steak and Potatoes. Nothing too original, story wise, to be expected from this novel. Character Design: 4/5 - I admit this, I was not the biggest fan of the MC's main dream/goal. It seemed selfish/childish when put against everything else he had, BUT just because I didn't 100% like the MC does not mean his character design wasn't well done. He clearly knows what he wants, he shows remorse, he learns from his actions, he grows as a person, though admittedly he does tend to act like a 'crack-fic' person at times. Again, I may not have liked the MC all the way, but dang if he wasn't well put together. Though I'm not the biggest fact-fiend when it comes to anime/manga and stuff, I'd like to think I'd be able to say the other characters were well done as well. Nothing that seemed 'too' out of character for most, though a few times they felt a bit like a 'crack-fic', if that makes sense. Also heads up, this novel portrays an 'Evil Hiruzen' so be ready for that, cause I know most Naruto novels are always 50/50 with him. World Background: 5/5 - The novel doesn't cover 'Everything' in the Naruto World, but what it does cover I believe it deserves a 'Well done'. Overall: So, should you spend your precious time reading this novel? I'd say yeah! It's not too long of a novel, I finished it in a single day's reading ... *cough* took a few hours, but still *cough*. I'll also let you know right now of a few things; 1) The MC does share his rewards with others, while his system also chooses to share its rewards with his lover (it's Anko btw, no harem) and no this does not stop the MC from becoming an op dude by the end of the novel, 2) The MC is an Uchiha member, with the vast majority of the novel taking place inside of Konoha, 3) There are parts where you will bust a gut laughing. No joke, a good majority of the novel is carried by how good the comedy is at times. Just check it out, it's not the greatest of novels out there but it's definitely one of the more funnier ones I've read in quite some time.
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I'm late but one of the few fics I can read without trying to bash my head into a wall
i, the greatest, have put my mark here to say that this story is one of the best Naruto ff i have ever read. it has a more slice of life element and has the right proportions of action and pace. although many are arguing about roushiki and breathing styles and what not, who cares . this is a story where everyone has them in konoha and he is still the mc and everything is peaceful and works out, so how does it matter. this story is thus unique because of this and I have liked it in this way very much too. it also has the right amount of character of madara, garp and whitebeard to make the mc have a perfect personality in its own way. downright genius I am telling you and author you could've made it very better by not only focusing on mc, but this still works very well . once again, one of the best Naruto ff i ve read because of its unique elements so just enjoy it if you can, cuz this thing is really good
Spoiler enthüllen The beginning really hooked me. You know how to grab a reader’s attention.💛 : : : :🍀💛🍀💛🍀💛💛🍀🍀💛🍀🍀💛🍀💛🍀💛💙💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Another story finished, was good but just have a feeling something is missing at the end, DTK what but it's finished nonetheless and for that THANK YOU 😊😊😊
NGL, the athour definitely needs to improve their extrapolation ability, the chapters I've read so far being the 1st to the 3rd are short and have room for massive improvement in terms of content, at the very least, they have better grammar then most stories I See on here.
Honestly my favorite Naruto fanfic. Made me laugh a lot. I hope you can write more books preferably marvel, dc, bleach, hxh, jjk, Harry Potter, opm, ect. Honestly I would prolly enjoy whatever you pick really. 🥳
not bad but I felt like the ending seems so rush? and there's few minor grammar and errors but it's readable. I like it 4.4/5
I love the fanfic and many people here criticises the mc giving powers to the people around him but i personally love it . It is great when the mc makes the people around him better and not living in scarcity and selfishness to be special snowflake , it is honestly pathetic. And i love the authors other work for the same reason like monkey in the multiverse ( but the thing with his biological daugher kinda made it awkward and it lead me to drop ; waiting rewrite btw ).
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
It's amazing. I read everything at once. laughed a lot. the story is very interesting. I haven't read anything so funny in a long time. 🤣 the fights are also well described. Madara and Ryu are handsome. this is the first naruto reincarnation story i read straight away and gave it a high rating. thanks to the author for the laughter and interesting story.
Zahahahahax! Definitely one of the best Naruto fic I've ever read on this platform! It's a wholesome story completed with action, comedy, drama, and romance. A great choice to read if you don't have anything to do, it will make you feel fulfilled in a sense. Anyway. Great Job Monkey! Zahahahahax
One of the fan fiction I like. MC is written very well and i like comedy elements in between.
Thank you for this wonderful novel. I enjoyed every moment while reading it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😝🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Absolutely sh***
Expected trash and the mc had full blown auti*m mainly because he knew stuff didn’t do anything about it and then whined about it also he gave out all his techniques and then is suprised when their stolen by the village
I'm not a professional reviewer or anything like that, just someone who decided to give his two-cents about what he read. Though I guess I have been leaving a few reviews lately so I suppose I'm picking up a sort of theme for myself on how I review things? Whatever, doesn't matter. I've read the entire novel, so this review will be based upon that experience. Writing Quality: 4/5 - A few misspelling errors, nothing too major. It'll make you have to re-read a few times to understand what was said. As far as punctuation and stuff like that, it seemed fine to me. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The novel is complete, so expect to be able to read the entire novel at your leisure. Story Development: 3/5 - Short and sweet, the overall plot/story of Naruto doesn't change, so expect to see/read the same sort of events that take place during the Original Plot. The 'Original Story' of the novel mainly consists of the MC and his actions acting like 'Salt & Pepper' for an already cooked meal, changing the flavor a bit but the meal is still Steak and Potatoes. Nothing too original, story wise, to be expected from this novel. Character Design: 4/5 - I admit this, I was not the biggest fan of the MC's main dream/goal. It seemed selfish/childish when put against everything else he had, BUT just because I didn't 100% like the MC does not mean his character design wasn't well done. He clearly knows what he wants, he shows remorse, he learns from his actions, he grows as a person, though admittedly he does tend to act like a 'crack-fic' person at times. Again, I may not have liked the MC all the way, but dang if he wasn't well put together. Though I'm not the biggest fact-fiend when it comes to anime/manga and stuff, I'd like to think I'd be able to say the other characters were well done as well. Nothing that seemed 'too' out of character for most, though a few times they felt a bit like a 'crack-fic', if that makes sense. Also heads up, this novel portrays an 'Evil Hiruzen' so be ready for that, cause I know most Naruto novels are always 50/50 with him. World Background: 5/5 - The novel doesn't cover 'Everything' in the Naruto World, but what it does cover I believe it deserves a 'Well done'. Overall: So, should you spend your precious time reading this novel? I'd say yeah! It's not too long of a novel, I finished it in a single day's reading ... *cough* took a few hours, but still *cough*. I'll also let you know right now of a few things; 1) The MC does share his rewards with others, while his system also chooses to share its rewards with his lover (it's Anko btw, no harem) and no this does not stop the MC from becoming an op dude by the end of the novel, 2) The MC is an Uchiha member, with the vast majority of the novel taking place inside of Konoha, 3) There are parts where you will bust a gut laughing. No joke, a good majority of the novel is carried by how good the comedy is at times. Just check it out, it's not the greatest of novels out there but it's definitely one of the more funnier ones I've read in quite some time.
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