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this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that
It’s a r*pe novel. Why am I not surprised. It seems every villain author has some unmentioned fetishes towards abusing women because they sure as hell all write about it
No plot holes, consistent characters, good character development, no unreasonable drama, and no sweet MC topping it up.
I just want to say, your my inspiraion author. This novel is the eviliest and darkest novel I have ever read, the only thing that can compete with it is Path of eternity and One piece: Limitlesness. The extreme detail is so amazing, like im at chapter 159 rn and so far its peak. Im seeing in some reviews where it gets worse after chapter 500, I rlly hope it doesnt cuz so far your fingers were on fire when writing this book.
Writing quality is nice 4/5. Stability of updates is cool 4/5. Story development... from his first fight to the point he could relax the check his status page you need to read 20 chapters of info dump and pointless interactions in order to make the info dump needed. I would have called this a slow burn but its not even that. its not burning at all so 1/5.. To call it dark is wrong. It's sick. SAW level sick. clear and detailed explanations of butchering character's somehow reads like high school biology. Again it's not dark it's sick. MC is an idiot. somehow sounds like autistic or some other brain-damaged childish murderer. while still around 30+ years old he is describing murder and blood childishly. World background is way tooooooo much detailed way too much. so even after 30 chapters all you'll understand is it's a post-apocalyptic world where demons are ruling and humans became livestock. So overall i do not recommend to sane ppl who likes to read some nave villainous and/or dark fantasy. But if you are into gore and butchering go for it. Defiantly not my cup of tea. best of luck to author.
Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.
Arthur you are a genius writer this is a treasure novel thank you for the read 🔥💯 ps. from a loyal reader 😌
its start with a good story good hero good Developing till ch 210 when he let athena slaps him and he do nothing and then he let her to live . and then she betrayed him 2 the developing after he destroyed the city its not that much i am in ch 306 and I'll leave this novel caus I'm Disappointed
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even though I'm giving this a great rating I gotta drop this cuz he killed his mom and not A222 and her bf. like when did the mc just start becoming friends wit everybody wasn't he supposed to be killing all these people that wanted to eat his flesh??? and don't start wit this "he needs them" no tf he don't idc what nobody say he has everything necessary to gain strength and survive without them after all even the auther said assasins work solo😂 story is great apart from the raping and weird stuff like that tho
It’s a good read for 300 chapters but it feels bland, he never has any time to take a step back and improve himself or his abilities. He is constantly in conflict, he gets attacked and thrown into the next major engagement the night after he escapes the big villain in the beginning. And he always feels just weak enough not to be able to do anything to what’s chasing him but strong enough to fight the big bad guy sends after him. He’s and interesting character(kinda) different, but he switches back-and-forth on his moral compass quite a bit. one minute talking about an inacting judgment on evil people and the next he will blow up a child infront of it’s mother. And he doesn’t really make connections with characters because they unfortunately all die shortly after meeting him. And the chapters are quite short and surprisingly repetitive at times because it has some pretty bad pacing(5-6 chapters to beat 1 person)
I started reading this work as a breath of fresh air. Tired of stupid MCs and the power of friendship. And at first the story was really interesting, but then it went down the drain. MC went from the slogan: “If you are not useful, then you are dead” to “If you are not useful, then I will die protecting you...”. I'm currently at chapter 678 and can't read any further. Since the introduction of AI, there has been more water than my neighbors when I flooded them. And why is MC surrounded by idiots? Even the zombie managed to outsmart them? Would it make Lenny look like a genius compared to them? Cheap... A separate topic about battles. Their system is the same: first the MC is beaten for 3-5 chapters and then he admits that he was initially stronger and was just playing around and ends the fight. Of course, in this case, enemies do not die, no, only friends die, otherwise the atmosphere is not right. Starting from 666, he cannot kill anyone, since all enemies either escape or are resurrected. The feeling that he will be humiliated by everyone until the last chapter and will all die together? I was especially upset by the patterned growth of the world along with MS. It all started with the phrases: “Even the gods would envy his rapid growth,” and then enemies and friends began to re-align two large worlds at a time (from Lesser Demon to Greater Demon) in order to correspond... It’s a shame that such an interesting idea and promising beginning slipped into an ordinary watery, formulaic and uninteresting work...
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the writing quality is good, the author knows his way around. the characters are not bland and you can also imagine the dimensions of the world building. i only came here to request an impossible i guess as i am currently at 200+ chapter and this currently has 800+ chaps so yeah but my wish is that although i came here to read a solo play of the main character. its not too bad for him to have his friends like A123, A222, and C888. so yeah, dont jill them off, hopefully
I recently got caught up on this, and I’m loving it. I just wanted to say keep ip the good work man
This is a good enough story to read if bored. Nothing like masterpiece, but it manages to retain attention even after 200 chapters
this isn't for normal people only legend and ultra legends watch this it has lot of gore I Mean lot other than that it's just pure entertainment
Honest review here, this novel is on the unique side with it's awesome story and world build. Update stability is nice. MC Is no simp💯 However, it declined after the first 300 chapters. Author uses mostly AI and a lot of description and hardly no talk and progress. Overall, 3.8.
Please continue this masterpiece, I have been looking for an mc like this with absolutely no morals just an straight killer😈
i know this review is a long time coming, but this story has truly entranced me since the beginning of the story. Although I admit I was frustrated with the mc in some arcs, and yes I was also annoyed with how long it took the mc to gain any semblance of power. I can still proudly say that this was one of my most interesting reads I have had in a long long while. Keep up the great work author!
The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
Amazing story. Just what love a truly evil character. There is blood gore and all the abhorrent things one would expect from a dark mature story. World budding is also interesting but would like the author to make the world stand on its on without leaning in to typical steryotypes from other stories. And this is not a criticism but please author keep the mc away from the whole lovey dovey shid there other ways of character development bec the best thing about this story to me is the true ruthlessnes of the mc and how unfeeling he can be. All in all for me is a 10/10 book.
From the very beginning this novel has kept me on edge leaving me in an orgasmic state of mind. The twist and turns are mind bending yet I love it to my core. I feel as if I’m literally in the world of this novel as I read. Along with steady updates, this is one that everyone who likes an mc who goes from weak to strong should indulge in. Fantastic work of art our amazing author is putting out.
only thing nagging me is why demons don't question his system storage space function .. and he use it quite openly without caution
I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo
So is the mc a antihero or a villain sometimes I would get confused but I love reading your novel especially my favorite is the re: in the bloody novel, it was great though my favorite web novel with the best evil mc is called The Ruined Death Knight Although I admit I'm not going to read your newest novel it's too generic and cliche and not what I'm looking for
It is a very good and original book. But there are a lot of grammatical errors that need immediate fixing. Other than that, it is a very enjoyable read.
I had always wondered what it would be like if a murderer or a bad guy was reincarnated and not a shut in otaku. After all, they are both good and bad Gods or in this case, Devil...😈
this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that
It’s a r*pe novel. Why am I not surprised. It seems every villain author has some unmentioned fetishes towards abusing women because they sure as hell all write about it
No plot holes, consistent characters, good character development, no unreasonable drama, and no sweet MC topping it up.
I just want to say, your my inspiraion author. This novel is the eviliest and darkest novel I have ever read, the only thing that can compete with it is Path of eternity and One piece: Limitlesness. The extreme detail is so amazing, like im at chapter 159 rn and so far its peak. Im seeing in some reviews where it gets worse after chapter 500, I rlly hope it doesnt cuz so far your fingers were on fire when writing this book.
Writing quality is nice 4/5. Stability of updates is cool 4/5. Story development... from his first fight to the point he could relax the check his status page you need to read 20 chapters of info dump and pointless interactions in order to make the info dump needed. I would have called this a slow burn but its not even that. its not burning at all so 1/5.. To call it dark is wrong. It's sick. SAW level sick. clear and detailed explanations of butchering character's somehow reads like high school biology. Again it's not dark it's sick. MC is an idiot. somehow sounds like autistic or some other brain-damaged childish murderer. while still around 30+ years old he is describing murder and blood childishly. World background is way tooooooo much detailed way too much. so even after 30 chapters all you'll understand is it's a post-apocalyptic world where demons are ruling and humans became livestock. So overall i do not recommend to sane ppl who likes to read some nave villainous and/or dark fantasy. But if you are into gore and butchering go for it. Defiantly not my cup of tea. best of luck to author.
Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.
Arthur you are a genius writer this is a treasure novel thank you for the read 🔥💯 ps. from a loyal reader 😌
its start with a good story good hero good Developing till ch 210 when he let athena slaps him and he do nothing and then he let her to live . and then she betrayed him 2 the developing after he destroyed the city its not that much i am in ch 306 and I'll leave this novel caus I'm Disappointed
Spoiler enthüllen even though I'm giving this a great rating I gotta drop this cuz he killed his mom and not A222 and her bf. like when did the mc just start becoming friends wit everybody wasn't he supposed to be killing all these people that wanted to eat his flesh??? and don't start wit this "he needs them" no tf he don't idc what nobody say he has everything necessary to gain strength and survive without them after all even the auther said assasins work solo😂 story is great apart from the raping and weird stuff like that tho
It’s a good read for 300 chapters but it feels bland, he never has any time to take a step back and improve himself or his abilities. He is constantly in conflict, he gets attacked and thrown into the next major engagement the night after he escapes the big villain in the beginning. And he always feels just weak enough not to be able to do anything to what’s chasing him but strong enough to fight the big bad guy sends after him. He’s and interesting character(kinda) different, but he switches back-and-forth on his moral compass quite a bit. one minute talking about an inacting judgment on evil people and the next he will blow up a child infront of it’s mother. And he doesn’t really make connections with characters because they unfortunately all die shortly after meeting him. And the chapters are quite short and surprisingly repetitive at times because it has some pretty bad pacing(5-6 chapters to beat 1 person)
I started reading this work as a breath of fresh air. Tired of stupid MCs and the power of friendship. And at first the story was really interesting, but then it went down the drain. MC went from the slogan: “If you are not useful, then you are dead” to “If you are not useful, then I will die protecting you...”. I'm currently at chapter 678 and can't read any further. Since the introduction of AI, there has been more water than my neighbors when I flooded them. And why is MC surrounded by idiots? Even the zombie managed to outsmart them? Would it make Lenny look like a genius compared to them? Cheap... A separate topic about battles. Their system is the same: first the MC is beaten for 3-5 chapters and then he admits that he was initially stronger and was just playing around and ends the fight. Of course, in this case, enemies do not die, no, only friends die, otherwise the atmosphere is not right. Starting from 666, he cannot kill anyone, since all enemies either escape or are resurrected. The feeling that he will be humiliated by everyone until the last chapter and will all die together? I was especially upset by the patterned growth of the world along with MS. It all started with the phrases: “Even the gods would envy his rapid growth,” and then enemies and friends began to re-align two large worlds at a time (from Lesser Demon to Greater Demon) in order to correspond... It’s a shame that such an interesting idea and promising beginning slipped into an ordinary watery, formulaic and uninteresting work...
Spoiler enthüllen the writing quality is good, the author knows his way around. the characters are not bland and you can also imagine the dimensions of the world building. i only came here to request an impossible i guess as i am currently at 200+ chapter and this currently has 800+ chaps so yeah but my wish is that although i came here to read a solo play of the main character. its not too bad for him to have his friends like A123, A222, and C888. so yeah, dont jill them off, hopefully
I recently got caught up on this, and I’m loving it. I just wanted to say keep ip the good work man
This is a good enough story to read if bored. Nothing like masterpiece, but it manages to retain attention even after 200 chapters
this isn't for normal people only legend and ultra legends watch this it has lot of gore I Mean lot other than that it's just pure entertainment
Honest review here, this novel is on the unique side with it's awesome story and world build. Update stability is nice. MC Is no simp💯 However, it declined after the first 300 chapters. Author uses mostly AI and a lot of description and hardly no talk and progress. Overall, 3.8.
Please continue this masterpiece, I have been looking for an mc like this with absolutely no morals just an straight killer😈
i know this review is a long time coming, but this story has truly entranced me since the beginning of the story. Although I admit I was frustrated with the mc in some arcs, and yes I was also annoyed with how long it took the mc to gain any semblance of power. I can still proudly say that this was one of my most interesting reads I have had in a long long while. Keep up the great work author!
The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
Amazing story. Just what love a truly evil character. There is blood gore and all the abhorrent things one would expect from a dark mature story. World budding is also interesting but would like the author to make the world stand on its on without leaning in to typical steryotypes from other stories. And this is not a criticism but please author keep the mc away from the whole lovey dovey shid there other ways of character development bec the best thing about this story to me is the true ruthlessnes of the mc and how unfeeling he can be. All in all for me is a 10/10 book.
From the very beginning this novel has kept me on edge leaving me in an orgasmic state of mind. The twist and turns are mind bending yet I love it to my core. I feel as if I’m literally in the world of this novel as I read. Along with steady updates, this is one that everyone who likes an mc who goes from weak to strong should indulge in. Fantastic work of art our amazing author is putting out.
only thing nagging me is why demons don't question his system storage space function .. and he use it quite openly without caution
I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo
So is the mc a antihero or a villain sometimes I would get confused but I love reading your novel especially my favorite is the re: in the bloody novel, it was great though my favorite web novel with the best evil mc is called The Ruined Death Knight Although I admit I'm not going to read your newest novel it's too generic and cliche and not what I'm looking for
It is a very good and original book. But there are a lot of grammatical errors that need immediate fixing. Other than that, it is a very enjoyable read.
I had always wondered what it would be like if a murderer or a bad guy was reincarnated and not a shut in otaku. After all, they are both good and bad Gods or in this case, Devil...😈