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After reading it the story is good but the problem lies with the lack of details like how did he get the 20,000 xp for summoning the brotherhood. Just try making it more detailed and making more paragraphs the story needs more spaces
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Classic perfect author's comment because I worked hard. Anyway, read and think. I hope you enjoy it. There are some complicated points in the story and the story will go slowly. Especially no harem. Please don't ask for a harem in a ridiculous way. [img=recommend]
After reading it the story is good but the problem lies with the lack of details like how did he get the 20,000 xp for summoning the brotherhood. Just try making it more detailed and making more paragraphs the story needs more spaces
Increíble 💯🐼🏆 exelente historia aunque está apenas empezando [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Classic perfect author's comment because I worked hard. Anyway, read and think. I hope you enjoy it. There are some complicated points in the story and the story will go slowly. Especially no harem. Please don't ask for a harem in a ridiculous way. [img=recommend]